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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
awesome update!!
its kinda confusin kinda intriguing
but its well described..
d endin of dis update ws d best!!!
cnt wait fr d next update!!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
I have already liked this concept since the beginning!!!! And you are doing a great job with this work of yours!!!

Seriously, its too good!!!!

I doubt one can write it this amazingly as you do.

Kriya's emotions and aggressiveness is defined perfectly...

the longing of family is clearly depicted!!!

Kriya-rey scene was awesome! Bole toh mashaah allah!

She drank 5 cans! 😲

seriously?

what if rey would have not come?

Allah! sochne se hi dar lagta hai. 😵

Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Res
How the hell i missed this?
*runs to read*
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unres

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Awesome story aro
i loved the concept...

And kria's loneliness was shown perfectly...every emotion was so real

beautifully written

and specially the last part
that was really kind of rey to help her in that state
and that small sweet convo was so amazing

pehle toh uski help karna...then making her let out her feelings..and also dropping her home...thats so nice of him...


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gosh what has happend in her life?
I really wanna know...

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please please continue it super soon...
Thanx for the link

and again sorry for being late :(
-kinjal
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
loved d update.. kria n her didiz scene was nice.. kria pushed d guy poor him.. princi suspended her a week n she was staring at d family pic can understand her situation.. rey s eager to c her face but cant ... al r worried abt kria n her parents left her n this changed her.. rey's concern was cute.. so now they r friends but ll they continue to b friends r forget abt it tomo??? kria s a angel rightly said by rey... waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Amazing update...
Rey is sooo caring...
Plzzz update soon..!!!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
i really want to know what is kriya story... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
awsome update.loved it.the first meeting of rey nd kriya.thanks for the pm aroma.plz update the next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
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Posted: 12 years ago
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before update , i would like to clear something . kriya belongs to a dame rich family . her parents owner of number one company of Asia . kriya have , luxury home , cars , dresses , money everything which she needed . but she also has loneliness and emptiness . here is some pic . i think , it will make you clear kriya's life style
kriya's house situated outside of the city






kriya's room situated underground
because she love loneliness


kriya's room
Luxury Bedroom For Girls
kriya's closet area

kriya's all time fav car



okay guys i showed you whole pictures . Now i hope you all understand kriya's status
for chappy scroll down
aroma_rubharu

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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finally rey reached at kriya's house . Rey looked around but no one was there . But when rey entered in house he was shocked . The things around him made him confused . This is a big mansion . But silence in this mansion is really horrible . Rey thinks , how she is living in this silent place . Rey searched whole house but do not found single person in that house . Rey finally came back and sat next to her . She is in deep slumber . " how are you living in this big mansion alone "... rey left a sigh ..finally rey decided he has leave ... before leaving rey covered kriya with blanket ... again kissed her on temple ..."i wish , i could see your face" rey took deep breath .."but i don't want disturb my angel"

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"what happened , rey'...swayam handed him a drink .."nothing'..rey again checked his cell ..."stop behaving stupid " ..swayam seated next him ..."what do you mean'...rey narrowed his eyes .."i mean , from last whole day continuously checking your cell ' ...swayam turned toward rey ..."its nothing i am just worried ' ... rey try to make his point ..."yes , i know..." ...swayam take sip of his drink .."what do you mean '...rey hit swayam playfully .." i hear this line almost fifty time from since morning '' ..swayam laughed at his own statment ..."you are impossible" ...rey again looked at his cell .."not again dude , its getting to much ' ...swayam walked toward dance floor ...rey still looking at his cell ."please call for once i am really worried . I hope you are fine " rey looked toward his friend who is enjoying the party finally rey placed his cell in his pocket and joined his friend...

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her phone is ringing from last 20 min . But she has not in mood . but her cell is continuously ringing . "who the hell is this person " ..kriya held her head which is now paining badly..kriya looked at caller ID .."didu what the hell"...kriya shifted in her bed ..."what do you mean"...kriya's didu barked from other side of call .."i mean its early morning and you wake me up' ...kriya again looked at clock ..."are you mad its evening ' ...kriya's didu replied ..."what" ...kriya fell from bed ..."you are such a sleepy head "...kriya's didu fell back in her office chair ..."what do you mean didu" ...kriya again looked toward clock ..."i am not joking kriya so stop looking toward clock' ..."fine"...kriya walked toward her closet ..."please , stop drinking baby' her didu demanded ..."oh come on ...i am not consuming alcohol ...its beer' ...kriya answered back .."okay now i will call later i need to get ready '...kriya speak and cut the call without waiting her answer

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rey took seat near bar counter ...rey ordered for one beer ...rey again check his cell but there is no message no call ...he was about to place his cell back in his pocket when his phone rang ...rey rushed toward outside ..."where are you going' " Swayam tried to stop him but he had already left the place" ..."hello" ...Rey took a sharp breathe.."hey" rey heared an angelic voice ..." you okay"...a big smile playing on his lips .."yes i am fine ... thank you' ...she replied softly .."i was really very worried my angel "...rey sat on a bike ..." angel '...she left a laugh ..."why ...you don't like this name'...rey said worriedly .."not like that ...first time some one call me angel '...sigh .."why so' rey start walking ..."because according to people i am a rich brat " she replied sadly ..."i don't know about other but for me you are my angel" ...rey try to console her ..."Please be with me always" she plead him ..."Yes, i am always with, don't worry" rey promised her ..."okay i will talk later i need to go '...she said happily ..."okay angel take care and please don't drink '...Rey tried to make his point ..."Its really difficult but i will try my level best " she said ..."okay ...take care angel"...Rey was about to "cut" the call when she interrupted, " Yes, my first friend"

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Kriya finally looked at herself .. "perfect"...she complimented herself ...Finally Kriya reached her destination, "The club Aura". As she entered, the boys present there were simply gawking at her and the girls there were jealous ...Kriya without paying any heed, she moved towards the Drinks counter, " One beer please" She placed her order. While sipping her beer, kriya was Starting to enjoy the music. But the people around her were completely attracted towards her.
The music playing was amazing and Kriya could'nt stop herself. She walked towards the dance floors and starts dancing with any one and everyone, she was in her own world.. She started dancing with a random boy, the boy noticed that she was drunk. He was trying to take undue advantage of her. Kriya noticed this, She pushed him and walked out hurriedly
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Rey was sitting in his room, totally lost in his thoughts, he came out of his trance with the ringing of his cell, "Hello" he spoke in a low tone. "Hey my firiend" the person spoke in a slurred tone...""Angel r u drunk?" Rey almost shouted at her, "Aaahh, why are you shouting ? it hurts" she jumped her bed like a small kid. "Sorry Angel, i just got worried" he replied sadly." U're forgiven" she giggled. "Where are you?" he questioned her. " Home" she replied while switching her T.V on. "Really?" Rey asked while raising his eyebrows, "Yes, i swear" She replied in a cute tone."Okay" Rey finally smiled and fell back on his bed..."tell me why are you so sweet"...she pulled bed sheet over her ..."oh , but not more then you angel'...rey laughed at her statment ..."you know i love your smile" she gave him compliment ..."okay , angel but how you know that my smile is good " ...rey held his head in his palm ..."i know '... she replied back ...oth start taking about random thing ...whole night ..."angel , you there" Rey questioned ...but there was dead silence ..."gud night , Angel"...Rey also dozed off into deep sleep
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okay guys here is chappy3
i know its little bore
but story k liye jroori tha
now like and comment please
luv u all aroma_rubharu


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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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