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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...finally mayank's heart winning over his mind...😳pls continue soon...thanx 4 dpm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

A D ark Love

The night faded slowly and new sun appeared on the sky,Mayank was first to came out of his slumber, he felt a movement beside him and gasped remembering the event of the night, His body instinctively reacted to the knowledge that the girl he craved in spite his hate was cuddled warmly against him, he turned his head slightly dropping his eyes at her ,Her soft body nestling in his arms comfortably pulling his flesh against her, her head resting in the crook of his neck. He inhaled deeply, savoring the sweet scent of her flesh.

If he was dreaming he never wanted to awaken but she wasn't a dream but reality, the reality that he had denied so long. He stared at her for a long time with a half-mad light in his eyes. How much she was looking peaceful in her deep slumber. The lines of fear had been banished from her cheeks and he felt like his closeness had given her immense content that she had been forgotten every fear, her panic. He breathed restlessly and gave her another deep stare.

She lay in his arms, her long hairs were tumbling over his arms and an innocent smile was playing on her lips, He reached out to touch her hand and found the skin soft and smooth beneath his fingers. A deep urge to hold her and cherish her pricked in his heart and he had given her a long stare of longing, He wanted to keep her close to him, wanted to savor her closeness in every moment, a flood of desires knocked his heart and he couldn't keep his heart in his control. Abruptly, he lowered his weight on her and she startled in her sleep, carefully raising his hand he touched her cheek and caressed them lovingly before leaning his face to kiss her forehead. His breath caught in his throat when she opened her eyes wide and looked at him in bewilderment, He gulped uneasily as she had been witnessed his care for her, she had witnessed his gesture of care for her. He stared down into her deep eyes which were expressed so much emotions that he felt his heart would've stopped beating if he wouldn't tear away his eyes But as he tried to shy away his face, she raised her hand and cupped his cheek in her palm delicately turning his cheek back so she could stare in his eyes and he had let his eyes to savor her face. For a moment the world seemed to stand in one place, the chimes of the clock had been struck at one point.

"I've said, you aren't heartless'you've a heart that is so soft and delicate"

His heart thumped as her words registered in his mind slowly, and he drew air in his lungs and calmed his trembling heart, eyeing her intently, a flicker of deep emotions appeared in his eyes and she smiled slightly seeing his efforts to wrap up his emotions under his stiffen mask.

"You don't know me"

A stern smile touched the corner of his lips as he stared back at her.

"I know you more than anyone in the world; you can hide yourself from others but not from me"

She challenged him staring back with the same deep emotions in her eyes which he had been seen many times before and it scared him.

"I fear you would get nothing but hurt in this game"

Shying away the effect of her words he tried to wrap up the rudeness in his tone giving a stubborn look.

"Its mean you do care for me?"

She replied with an intent look, making a mockery of his words and he turned his face to stare back at her, a slight soft smile was on her lips indicating that she could read his heart. He gasped removing his eyes from her.

"I don't care for anyone"

"But you do care for me and I can see it in your eyes, don't try to hide yourself from me"

She spat with the firm believe and he couldn't keep his face away from her and stared back into deep pools of her eyes, "I want to be with you always" She paused to hold back her tears and then continued, "I care for you'I" She stopped herself saying another word as their relationship was so fragile and she didn't want him to separate himself away from her after listening her confession'she had to wait for him'she had to---Nupur gulped the rising lump in her throat and stared back at him with unsaid pleas. His heart thuds to see'to feel those emotions that were her eyes was conveying to him. He felt urged to keep her in his arms and would've said loudly 'you're mine and I won't let you go away from me'I'll keep you close to my heart. But the words stuck in his throat and he gasped uneasily, the color fled his cheeks, and his lips parted in struggle to keep his voice stable, "I don't need your care .I don't need anyone"

With the swift motion, he shifted his weight from her but she clutched his hand and his heart stopped beating for a moment when with the sudden movement she threw her arms around him,hugging him close to herself, Mayank gasped for several times before composing himself. He wanted to jerk her away but at the same time he wanted to love her. He didn't know what had happened to him? why he was feeling so weak in front of her? Why he felt great desire to claim his right on her and cry out loudly she was his.He never felt like that before why? Why was this now happening with him?

He squeezed his eyes tightly and a tear trickled down his cheek, his fingers trembled as they moved towards her waist and he dipped them in her skin pulling her so close to him that he could've heard her heart beat. Content, peace rushed into his veins that he longed for.

"I want to close to you" her deep yet shaky voice with the havoc of emotions seemed to reverberate within his very soul as she confessed softly and He was frozen in bemusement at her words, couldn't come up with the decision if he should believe on what he was seeing in her eyes or not?

She pulled back starring deep into his eyes, and Time seemed to verge on eternity before she could courage to raise her face closer to him, he starlted looking at her with the wide eyes. The deep eyes held him lovingly and she whispered "Don't ever separate yourself from me'I can't bear it" Her lips pressed upon his gently, tenderly, and Mayank heart thud in his chest, she clutched his collar pulling his face closer to her'he wanted to withdraw this touch but couldn't and as she captured his lips with the deep passion, blood rushed through his veins flooding new desires in his body for her and with the low groan he gave an answer, returning warm, fleeting kiss. He knew it wasn't right but he had been lost his control on his heart and now it was obedient to her.

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i know its not a long part but continution of the last part,but next part would be the long INSHALLAH.
Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finaaly main agai
di it was a emotional update and romantic too
romantic for me 😆 and emotional for MAYUR 😉

thanks for pm me di
love u always and
i hope ab aap ki maa aur pappa do no ki tabiyat thik ho gayi ho
i pray for them


love u always
deepa

Edited by deepa5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful part loved it
beautifully written dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
vow superb update
loved mayur moments
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic part
superb work.you are Amazing girl..continue soon it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update di .
Love mayur moments ❤️
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesom part dear
very well written
loved it.do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
mindblowing part
well written!
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was very emotional and romantic update...

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