MN FF *A Dark Love#2*NTL on pg 143

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Everyone:)Thank you so much for you love and appreciation throughout the first thread of*A Dark Love*.
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Writer Note

Thank you so much everyone for beautiful comments🤗really means a lot to me..😳
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A Dark Love

Her lips tightened to see the intensity in his eyes what he was thinking she didn't know? But she could see her own image in his deep eyes. Irritatingly, he tried to divert his thoughts somewhere else but couldn't---- couldn't tear his eyes away from her beautiful face, His gaze lowered to the delicate curve of her throat before roaming up to the tantalizing glimpse of her sensuous parted lips. The urge to taste them hit him with a force that had him clenching his teeth he gasped with the low sound of his breath and tried to collect his composure.

"Now you're going to take a rest and I bring water for you" his words came out like a whisper and avoid looking at her he tightened his grip around her.

She stiffen slightly but then relaxed her body against his as he scooped her in his arm and led her towards the bed,She closed her eyes and when she opened them she found his face closed to her ,his warm breath fanned her cheek. She held her breath when he finally takes off his arms and make a little distance between their faces, "let me bring to you something to eat and your medicine---don't try to get up?"His last were quite in warning tone as he regarded her with a serious look and though she wanted to be in his arms'wanted to be near to him she kept her desires in her heart and slightly nodded her head in reply. He hadn't said anything in reply but he looked relaxed when she sank down her head against the pillow and closed her eyes. He took a deep breath before slipping out the room'those unspoken words'strange emotions making him tired not physically but emotionally and he was feeling too weak'too weak to fight back anymore with them.

He had made her eat her dinner and giving medicine slipped out the room to complete some office work Nupur didn't object to his any order as she could see his concern for her.

After an hour when he returned back to their room she had been slept he let out the sigh of relive after examine her foot'the wound was healing'he applied the ornament and then giving look for the last time to the side table if the jug of water and glass was placing there or not? He had kept the ornament and medicine beside her he threw himself on his side'the event of the day and then the moments with her that had taken his breath away was still flashing in his mind and a lone tear slipped his eyes'he turned on her side and looked at her face'she was looking so innocent while sleeping unaware of his deep stares, sketching an admiring look he stared at her beautiful feature for a moment before shrugging his heart to keep in his control and torn his eyes away in other side. I can't let her get deep into my heart---I can't. He sucked in a sharp breath making a decision like the house of sand that can be broken at any moment he knew.

He took a deep breath and closed his eyes trying to drift into a much needed slumber.

In the morning, Nupur heard the first knock at the door but ignored it. The knock came again and she removed the comforter from her face, "who is there?"she almost mumbled in sleep irritatingly as she was still feeling sleepy, "Good morning ma'am'it's me'it' almost noon I bring your breakfast" the soft familiar feminine voice came out from the other side of the door "come in" she yawned before sitting up on the bed giving a glance to her side'he had been gone as usual. She looked disappointed.

"ma'am how are you feeling now?sir has told me about your injured foot"Nupur jolted back to her thought with the concern-filled voice of Mrs.Manish and Nupur smiled slightly with the tilt of her head as a wave of strange contentment rushed into her veins to hear he cared for her, "I'm feeling quite well now'good to see you back" she added suppressing a genuine smile at her return and Mrs.Manish turned her neck towards her keeping the tray of food on the table.

"You know ma'am I never took leave for more than two days as I couldn't stay away from this house as I know this house need me"

Nupur felt the love and sense of belonging to this house in her tone ,Mrs.Manish had told her once she is working here since Mayank was a child, something pricked in her, an anxious to know about him'to know what had made him like a stone when he wasn't like that.She hesitated before parting her lips to speak.

"Mrs.Manish do you know how Mayank's parents died?"she asked anxiously and Mrs.Manish looked a bit hesitant before straightening her face to regard her with the grief look, "Mr.Sharma was a successful businessman but once he had to face a huge loss in his business---those days were the worst days of their lives'He had to pay the debt and the loans of the banks that he had taken for his mega project, and to pay them he had sold his factories. Mr. Sharma was so disheartened to loose his everything that he made with his hard work.

One night he got a heart attack and he couldn't survive. After their death everything got changed,Mrs.Sharma used ,to keep still and silent'she loved Mr.Sharma a lot so she couldn't bear his separation and exactly after the fifth day of Mr.Sharma's death She left us ,too"

"Oh! God"Nupur felt something hit with her heart so hardly that it lets her in shock for a moment.

A muscle in her jaw knotted to think how he would have spent his childhood without his parents'without their love'without their shelter. Tears shimmered in her deep eyes and she swallowed them to keep her composure stable.

"Ma'am, are you alright?"Mrs Manish looked concern to see the grief floating on her face, she startled gasping the air, "yeah'I'm alright"Nupur pressed hand to her aching heart and stammered trying to appear alright. "But you are looking pale'please ma'am don't take stress and take rest as you aren't well"Mrs.Manish stepped closer; her expressions were panic and concern. "I'm alright Mrs.Manish thanks for your concern I want to be alone for sometime"

Nupur could barely bring herself to speak those words'she didn't know why she was feeling gried?why she was feeling too weak to think how much he had suffered in his childhood?.

"Ok Ma'am as you says"Mrs.Manish bowed her head slightly in obedient and then with the slow step slipped out the room. She trembled with the thought of the dark night when he would've cried for his parents. She leaned back taking a deep breath to shied away what she was feeling for him but couldn't.

Precap

"please Mayank---let me go---you aren't 'in your senses" she stammered dangerously and her body shivered realizing what his action---his eyes were demanding, "No---I won't listen you like you don't listen me"

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sorry for ending it at this point ..i hope you'll like it:) but it was long part so i divided it into 2 parts so next update would be soon...i hope you'll like it:)

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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congo for new thread 🥳
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Congrats on the new thread Maria 🤗

the update was great! waiting for the next one :D
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congrats on your new thread ang good update
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congo for the new thread...!!!!

awesome part
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1stly i want to congress u for new third di 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
and now come to the point
its a amazing and superb update di
emotional update
thanks for pm me
love u

deepa
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beautiful update
awesome
please update next part soon dear
precap is very attracting and dangerous too
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon

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