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That was amazing
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congrats 4 a new thread maria...😃
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mind-blowing!!!! ...loved the update👏👏👏👏 PLz do continue soon.
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Mindblowing update👏
Beautifully portrayed emotions of Mayur
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Loved the update! It was fantastic to read, continue soon and if possible do PM me.
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Awesom part
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Congtras for the new thread

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Witer Note

Finally i'm here with update:D.But before i post the update i want to Thank you all of you for your concern and your prayers🤗🤗My mother is quite well now😃and that's the reason i'm back here.:)
Coming to update,i don't know it's upto your mark or not as i myself wasn't well when i had written it.
i'll eagerly wait for your beautifull comments and replies:)
Thank you once again🤗
Maria
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A Dark Love

As he stopped his car near the bar, his thoughts returned to Nupur and those little moments, those feelings he experienced with her. He felt irritated and trying to jerk them away but couldn't. The whole day he couldn't concentrate on his work'he couldn't think anything but her, irritating, frustrating on himself he tried to scold himself but couldn't shrug those feeling engulfing his heart. i won't think about her---no. He spat pushes the door of the bar.

Draining the third glass of his wine, Mayank shoved away from the small table set in the one of the corner of back and stabling his composure he took long strides towards the outdoors---the environment'loud music everything making him sick he wanted solace ,wanted to feel comfort and his heart knew where could he found that.

Nupur gave the glance at the clock and then the door it was almost midnight and he wasn't coming back home yet, she couldn't have distracted her thoughts to not think about him. How much she was trying to keep her mind away from his thoughts but her efforts seemed completely failed.

Someone approached the door and clicking the knob push the door with the slight sound, without giving look back she understood who was he? Letting out the sigh of relief as she took a step towards the bed trying to ovoid conversation with him, she felt his hand slid around her wrist and pulled back her, she let her breath caught in her throat as trying to realize what had just happened but before she could collect her composure---her scattered thoughts a strong arm slipped around her tiny waist and pressed her back hard against his chest, "don't go anywhere" a plea escaped from his lips as he moved up his arms on her shoulder and lowering his head he nuzzled against her neck left her shivered, his hands found her fingers and clutched them into his, he let out the moan as his lips pressed against the nape of her neck, "Mayank" her shaking voice erupted in fear, shock and collecting her senses she tried to pull back from his grip but as she moved a bit he again pressed her hard against his chest whispering in ordering tone, "don't try to go anywhere"

Her heart leapt at his shaky husky voice and something hit her'he wasn't in his senses---he was in effect of alcohol. She gasped; she wanted to run from the comforting closeness of his big body, his strong arms and from the unfamiliar lethargic feeling----strange sensation turning her legs too weak to stable her composure but his grip was too tight that she couldn't move. He gripped her shoulders and turned around her in his arms, she held her breath seeing the intensity, passion in his eyes and her jaw knotted with the panic, "please Mayank---let me go---you aren't 'in your senses" she stammered dangerously and her body shivered realizing what his actions---his eyes were demanding, "No---I won't listen you like you don't listen me" he spat stubbornly like a child as she tried to pull back and when she shied away her face ignoring his authority voice praying in her heart he let her go, he gripped her chin between forefinger and thumb and tilted her head up, forcing her to look into his eyes. "I---I want---you Nupur "her breath caught in her throat as his husky voice touched her ear drums. She was stunned, shocked and numbed at his plea and held her breath for a moment and then blinked her eyes at him thinking she might have heard wrong. A tense, awkward silence followed as she tried to understand what was happening? She gasped trying to pull herself back but grasping her arm, Mayank gave her a vicious shake in frustration and then cupped her cheeks, "I said---I want---you'I never'wanted anyone in my life'but you"

She held her breath, pressing her lips together. He leaned so close to her that she could feel his breath on her cheeks.

"I want'you--I want to make---you mine"

She felt her eyes widen and suddenly she was a little fearful of him as she remembered the night when he tried to force her.

"we'can't do this--it's not right---you aren't in your senses 'Mayank please---."This time he silenced her with his mouth. Nupur had opened her own in protest and he had covered it with his mouth entering his tongue, she pressed her hands against his chest to create some distance between them but he slid his arms around her and crushed her to him.

"Don't push--push me away'let me close to you" he said in chocking voice as he raised his lips from hers to draw them across her cheek and she gasped clutching his shirt'something strange was in his tone'a strange wave of loneliness that she couldn't ignore when he finally gave her space and she lifted up her gaze at him, his dark eyes were 'conveying so much deep emotions that she felt her heart thud so loudly, his face was looking pale, tired ,he deliberately slid his fingers across her cheeks as he looked deep in her eyes, "I've spent my life'in darkness'I was so lonely Nupur'but now I don't want---I don't want to be alone'please don't push me away'let me feel you'let me feel I'm not alone anymore" His words dangerously chocked and a tear slipped from his eyes, she sucked in a deep breath, his fingers caressed her skin lovingly as he leaned and then kissed the edge of her lips, "I want to sleep in your arms'I never slept peacefully in my life--I want you so much'so much that I'll die if you stay away from me'I don't know what happen to me but---but I can't stay away from you"

Tears blurred his image and she sucked in a deep breath to feel the immense grief in his words. She looked at him lovingly when he leaned and kissed her tears.

"Will you be mine?"a whisper of plea erupted from his lips as he brushed his lips with her and she closed her eyes in submission encircling her arms around his neck and he sealed her lips with her with the deep kiss, She returned his kiss, eager for it, responding with the same passion, desperation as was his. Their tongues met, dueled, retreated, then met again as the kiss deepened, she moved her fingers in his hair as he rolled his tongue in her mouth and then taste the every part of her mouth, panting for breath, Nupur broke away, staring at him and her heart leapt to see the oozing passion, desire in his eyes for her. His tongue moved over her throat, slowly, teasingly, gliding down the length of it spreading the waves of sensation, fire in her body. He drew his mouth to her earlobe and whispered, "I won't hurt you"

She closed her eyes giving him her trust, her body, her soul.Mayank didn't wait for her reply and scooped her in his arm and then led her towards the bed, she heard his moan when his body covered hers and he captured her lips, and then heard the rending of the fabric. She didn't protest-she didn't protest when he undressed her completely crushing her with his weight'she let him do.she didn't know why she was doing that? Why she was letting her heart to over power her mind but she knew one thing. She didn't push him away. He was pleading for comfort and she couldn't see him like this---she couldn't see tears in his eyes---she couldn't bear to think what circumstances he might have gone through in his childhood'he wanted her and she was giving herself to him willingly ignoring the consequences of this night she submitted herself to him.

Undressing himself hastily, he leaned and covered his body with her naked flesh, a slight moan escaped from her parted lips as his hunger kisses burned her flesh, she slid her hands around his back and responded his every touch, their bodies moved, panting together and then released in a swift ecstasy that made their bodies shiver for a moment and everything felt complete'she let out the breath when he removed his body from her taking her with him in his arms and kissed her forehead for the last time before drifting into the most peaceful sleep.

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Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago

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