ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T2 (CHP 6 -12)

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

I really really loved the update
I think that if you change the names to all this then you can actually publish it
Because really your story has so much more than arnav and khushi init
An even though personally i prefer just arshi
I dont mind the extras aswell
Because your story seems really thought out
And everything seems to be leading to something else
But anyway its a brillaint story
Keep it up

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Aha!!

nice!! :)

ASR - That was really mean of you to do that!!

nevertheless ... how can there be a moment without creating one? so yes .. we love u for being mean!! for if u were not...we would not have got what followed - The Apology! :)

Well well Khushi .. i love ur sophisticated ways .. i get inspired with that attitude of urs!! Thanks to Aarti for creating such vivid images in our minds which is a result of fine writing! :)

Okie Garima - i am glad abt ur promise for standing by ur mother!! but how can ur heart still beat for him? OMG .. is this the reason why they say Love is Blind? Then i would refrain from believing in it ... seriously?

I hope that jack of ass gets poisoned sooner!!

Okie 2 things to look out for ...

1. The mela

2. Akhil's Engagement Party... can we expect Khushi is traditional wear? :)

Thanks for the update Aarti...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

wow didnt see this coming at all
what was that
i think we all know what just happened there
clash of the titans and their egos
well she was right in her place
as was he but i wish he had at least found out all about this before he said what he said
how many times has he been told not to let his anger get better of him
and she wasnt wrong in using the tone she did
it had nothing to do with the fact that this employee of yours didnt wanna work with khushi but how she was behaving unnecessarily
wonder what is her problem there
but that was really mean of you to say what you did
well it seems he managed to say sorry
i was surprised at that so was khushi i see
and this is what will make sure that these two can work together
i think they both need to learn from each other
and on arun issue wait is he stealing money from his in laws company
oh man is there anything he wont be capable of doing
guess we shall know soon enough

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Awesome update

loved it

So Arnav finds it difficult to apologise

Poor Garima...Thanks to her nani, for making khushi strong

Looking forward for the next update

Thx for the PM

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Fabulous part...Loved it...

Y is Sahiba unnescessarily behaving like that & spreading bulshit abt Khushi...

Nice that Arnav kept his ego aside & asked sorry ...

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mayvs34

@mayvs34

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

long one but good one. liked the update with different part getting unfold

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

goddd arti di how can u alwaz give us such a marvellous update...!
U r really hands down one of d bst writers in IF i have cum across...!
D way u describe each nd evry scene so dam perfctly dat i sumtyms feel dat why d hell u were not d writer of IPKKND...!
Awsum update as usual di..
So arnie boy again hurted khushi...goshhh sumone plz knock sum sense in him dat khushi is not like any ordinary girls he has cum across...!
Nd d bst part was he said SORRY...OMG he said sorry nd dat too to khushi...!
Boy,dis girl seriusly bothers u otherwise u would have nvr ever care to say sorry for ur mis-bhaviour...!
Nd arun-such a jerk he is...!
Now he is using garima for money...i jst hope dat garima does not give up to him dis tym...
Nd khushi's xpression aftr hearing d sorry from arnie boy was simply awsum...
Goddd di u r an amazing writer...
Kudoos to u for writing d stories sooo beautifully 👍🏼

Edited by ara_000 - 12 years ago

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

I was mad at Arnav of what he said but I am glad that he found out that Sahiba was the one who had problem with her.

I am glad he said sorry and I am glad they will be friends again :D

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Awesome part once again.. just cant get enough of this FF..

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#530

This is such a brilliantly written story and the concept is amazing, just caught up on all 10 parts just now...it's intriguing, well paced love the relationship Arnva dand Khushi are falling into...right from thier first meeting in the present to now...

Khushi and Arnavs characters as well as those like La, her parents, grandparents falling into place so wonderfully...such an enjoyable read...but why no pm's for this story?