res finally am here to unres
pehle toh the chapy is awesome
i couldnt help but smile all the time
i really loved it
u stole my heart in this update
my fav scene is the canteen scene
ha ha i literally rofled
i am really touched by the way u described the dance scene how kria was scared of her dance,... love her innocence , i fell in love with your characters man..i bow down to u for creating such an amazing characters...
i know u dont want summary but i cant help mentioning these dialogs as my expressions changed at ur each dialogs
"mere bestie pe haath kya baat bhi kiya toh.. "- this was so cute n childish of kria..jaise chote bache ni kehte i literally imagined her saying that he he
"toh "he counter questioned.. i was waiting what she will say
" aapke mooh mei mirchi powder dalungi !! huh!! "she grabbed swayams arm and pulled the poor soul along with her leaving a open mouthed rey. - n this cracked me up dude i was rofling on my chair while reading it 🤣
this line made me deewani of ur this chapter..really mirchi muh mein daal degi?? really ha ha ah aa ha aha ha ha ha ha ha ha ah 🤣
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As they reached the canteen they saw a poor swayam sitting like a frightened puppy and a furious kriya. They moved a bit closer to hear the convo which went like this
i thought ki as usual suna rahi hogi n swayam try kar raha hoga to calm her like in d3 restaurant scene but this was really unexpected
"Kriya : tum mere best friend ho --
swayam nodded his head like a small kid.
Kriya: mai tumhari bestfriend hun ! right??
swayam : donon ek hi toh hai kriya !!
kriya : shut up!! you have lost the right to talk .
Swayam made a puppy face."---i so loved these convo of them real kriyam r back he he dono kitne cute lag rahe the..kria angry n swayam puppy face deadly convo
kriya : tumhari himmat kaise hui teri best friend ko dhaantne wale ko hug karne ki!!
swayam was about to say something but shut up seeing kriya's stern gaze.
kriya : so ab mai jo kahungi wahi karoge tum .
swayam nooded immediately. ha ha ha main itna life mein kabhi ni hasi...this was so cute , i really liked to see these scene in d3-kriyam love them yaar
"tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?? " kriya narrowed her eyes at rey holding the a burger in each hand. --- lol junior RLB
"wah nice job!! lao yaha "rey ignored her and was about to take the burger when kriya shoved his hand.---aweee so cute baby
" mai aalsi logon ko nahi deti apni burger !! especially jab wo mere dushman ho toh ... ye pakdo swayam!! mai coffee leke aayi "she placed the burgers in front of swayam and walked back to the counter . ha ha ha ha
As he saw her walk back he grabbed a burger and was about to eat when she pulled it .
"sharam nahi aati dusron ki burger khate hue?? khud khareed nahi sakte??"she barked
"oh please mai khud jaake kabhi nahi kareedta!! "he tried to grab the burger to teased her more.
" besharam kahike !! "she hissed and bit a large amount of burger stuffing her mouth full and placed in front of him .
"ab khao jhoota wala!! huh!! "she walked proudly thinking that he will never be able to eat HER burger but stopped in middle. i am so much in these scene man..i really love ur kria deetha
"swayam maine bola na tum mere dushman ke saath nahi rahoge?? " she glared at him and swayam immediately ran behind her and winked seeing back once she looked front and both went out.
ha ha hah aha ha ha haha loved theses covo man -i really loved it
"I love you so much baat cutter "Rey said and grabbed the burger to have his delicious piece of burger----this was so like real rey..ise dekhkar toh my eyes got moist...
in all i really loved this chapter, i really loved the way u created every situations
u really created magic with ur dialogs.. i really loved the dialogs.. ur dialogs have the magic trust me...always continue this magic in this ss
Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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