Second Love!!! #2 Part 8- Page 8 ( 23rd sept)

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dancersqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome...sharon kriya keliye kitna protective hai...pls reveal the mystery soon...

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darshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

wow!!!!!!!!1 that was superb and fabulous...
sharon is not agree with rey and swayan plan... the diva is back...
i loved the scene of canteen where kriya and swayan spent time to together...
rdx and nicale are back for their dance as profession...
kriya is get afraid to dance at least she start some how little dance...
continue soon and pm me...

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pinky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

wow really nice one...sharon atlast kehadiya hey ki usse kriya achi lagtha hai...

swayam's concern kriya...

aur rey aggresion kiskeliye...??

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

finally you updated this and i read it... although i am late but i didn't knew it being updated.. anyway coming to update..

do i have to tell u how much amazing it was...just fab..

sharon's being protective for kriya and rey making her understand dilemma of situation was really well written i was clearly imaging those anger frowns on sharon's face.. and then reyam sweet and short convo, mujhe humesha se hi buhat pasand hai the way you drag very essence of them in your stories...

hey nicole and rdx are here.. wow thats surprise, looks like you have planned something great for fuutre too..

and that dance, simply unexplainable.. you are quiet a pro at that, that was clearly a mix of passion, agony and anger... the way rey handled and pillared kriya being a man for his lady love kriya was portrayed very nicely...

you always give a brilliant update out of your kitty deetha.. and i really love reading them a lot...

so keep flowing us with them..

loved it..

plzz continue it soon...

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divyani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

ohh god !!! finally u updated :)

nd it was awesomeee

loved sharon's as well as swayam's concern fo kriya 😊

nd the dance sequence was bang-on ... u write tht very well ... :)

update soon ... nd pm me pleashh!!!!

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dancersqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

pls update this one and tere galti mujhse pyaar karna too...

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Blackheart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awesome uapdate
Update fast na yaar plz

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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Well I know I update very rarely but I am seriously dissapointed with the response !! may be not sending Pm's is the reason !! Thanks to all those who liked and commentd on my last update!!! I promise to send PMs once I update this !! :D

Have a good day!! Stay safe and healthy!!😃

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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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S e c o n d L o v e

-falling all over again for you love ❤️

Part- 8

"Inhe kya hua?? " asked a super confused kriya!!!

"kuch nahi "said swayam unconsiously!! He can partially understand why Rey left . All are quite shocked to say !! They never saw Rey this restless ever yeah he used to sulk but never he was this restless. While all are still in this thoughts Kriya left saying "mai dekh ke aati hun " .

Sharon realised soon and alerted everyone.
"guys kriya Rey ke paas gayi hai "she said as neha asked casually
"usme problem kya hai sharon!! "

"guys I know koi problem nahi but situation ko dekh ke mujhe lagta hai ki hume waha hona chahiye!!! All agreed and went in search of them.

He again literaly banged the ball into basket , he is feeling unasy, restless , angry !! He felt the need to shout the need to cry loud the kneed to beat someone to death!! But the only thing he can do is keep dipping the ball and throw it with all the anger . He is sweating badly!! His black vest is totally wet now. The burning hot sun is no help either. He fumed to no extents as he heard the voice .

"yaha ho aap??" she said taking a deep breathe and opening the gate of the court .

He felt that ignoring is good for both of them so he kept dipping never paying attention to her.

"I think kriya ko ab chup hona chahiye aur wapas aana chahiye!! I sense something worse on the way . "said vicky totally aware of Rey's this state. He knew if he is ignoring the words of the next person then its safe for the person to shut up...or they have to fave a hard punch for sure!! He thought remembering the hard punch he got in childhood and the five days of stomach pain because of that.

"swayam better you go and stop your bestie!! "vicky literally pushed swayam and he too went and stopped kriya from the continuous blabber.

"kriya hume jaana chahiye "he caught her hand and pulled her.

"ek min "she guestured and before swayam could do anything she ran to Rey stood in front of him grabbing the ball.

"aapme kitna attitude hai!! Mai kabse yaha aake aapse baat kar rahi"she was cut..

"leave"Rey said slowly gritting his teeth but his voice sounded deadly!!! This alerted sharon before she went to kriya ,kriya started again

"kitne badtameez ho aap ek toh mai.. "

She shut as the sudden growl threatened her.

"I said leave!! "he shouted right on her face glaring her with his blood shot eyes and without her notice kriya started crying and soon realising she threw the ball on him hard and ran away crying hard.

As the ball hit rey he garbbed it once it bounced back and bet it hard on the fencing fuming to no extents.

"sharon I think right now you are the one "he said and she nodded understandingly.

"guys tum log bhi mere saath chalo "sharon said . She knew even though rey is her bestie these two men of her life need some time together at some situations of life . She accepted and adjusted to it long back. She went in search of kriya with the gang to console her baby sister.

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"rey!! "he called slowly grabbing the poor ball on the floor.

"leave swayam !! mujhe kuch nahi sunna !! " Rey looked away!! many emotions waiting for a chance to escape.

"par mujhe hai!! "he said dipping the ball and never looking at rey.

"matlab?? don't irritate me dude "rey said looking back at him.

" mai nahi kar raha hun!! bas mai tujhe sunna chahta hun!! " he made a basket and looked at rey.

"Dekhna hume khushi tab hi hoti hai jab wo ball basket se bahar aajati hai!! same with feelings so spill it out " he finally looked at him!!!

"How dare she !! "he folded his fist and was about to bang into the floor when swayam stopped.

"shaant mere bhai!! maine bolne ko kaha aise boxing karne ko nahi!! " he grabbed him to the stairs and both sat.

"dude wo aise keh bhi kaise sakti hai?? how dare she!! I mean uski itni himmat "rey was feeling so suffocated that finally he ended up crying.

"I never thought wo aisa bolegi!! How dare she swayam!! " he hugged swayam and let his heart out .

"I understand rey! tujhe uski dance bohut pasand hai !! par tu itna kyun affect ho raha hai? I mean I understand dude but itna restless kyun ho raha hai!! "

"because dance is the only thing I want in her nothing else!! its the main reason and way she came into my life !! humari mulaakat dance se hui and meri dance ki wajah se usse dekh paaya usse mil paaya aur uski dance ki wajah se hum thodi der aur saath rahe and we laid an unknown path for us in our life "he said lost .

"Dude!! okay! I agree par iska matlab ye nahi ki tum kriya ko aise dhaatoge?? being selfish I didn't like it.. tune use rulaya!! I am really annoyed with you!! " swayam said to lighten up the mood.

"chal bohut naatak karli!!! "rey said finally laughing as he realised why swayam is doing the drama and both started to go to the gang. They were in front of the RH where the gang finally succeded in consoling the hyper soul!!

Suddenly rey stopped and thanked swayam and they both hugged as finally they both were back to normal!! Kriya saw this and walked to them .

"mere bestie pe haath kya baat bhi kiya toh.. "she is fuming now and rey is enjoying and swayam is quite surprised at this possesive feeling.

"toh "he counter questioned..

" aapke mooh mei mirchi powder dalungi !! huh!! "she grabbed swayams arm and pulled the poor soul along with her leaving a open mouthed rey.

" vicky ice lao kuch jal raha hai " sharon teased from back and rey laughed accompained by the whole gang.

As they reached the canteen they saw a poor swayam sitting like a frightened puppy and a furious kriya. They moved a bit closer to hear the convo which went like this

Kriya : tum mere best friend ho

swayam nodded his head like a small kid.

Kriya: mai tumhari bestfriend hun ! right??

swayam : donon ek hi toh hai kriya !!

kriya : shut up!! you have lost the right to talk .

Swayam made a puppy face.

kriya : tumhari himmat kaise hui teri best friend ko dhaantne wale ko hug karne ki!!

swayam was about to say something but shut up seeing kriya's stern gaze.

kriya : so ab mai jo kahungi wahi karoge tum .

swayam nooded immediately.

kriya : mai burger aur coffee leke aati hun donon keliye rukho yahi pe..

swayam again nodded and as soon as she left he grinned and sook his head.

swayam : so sweet!! I love you my cutie pie .

"mind your tongue " he heard a voice and burst out laughing. these two will never stop acting childish.

"has kyun raha hai bey?? "rey sat in front of him and the whole gang now chuckled along with swayam.

"tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?? " kriya narrowed her eyes at rey holding the a burger in each hand.

"wah nice job!! lao yaha "rey ignored her and was about to take the burger when kriya shoved his hand.

" mai aalsi logon ko nahi deti apni burger !! especially jab wo mere dushman ho toh ... ye pakdo swayam!! mai coffee leke aayi "she placed the burgers in front of swayam and walked back to the counter .

As he saw her walk back he grabbed a burger and was about to eat when she pulled it .

"sharam nahi aati dusron ki burger khate hue?? khud khareed nahi sakte??"she barked

"oh please mai khud jaake kabhi nahi kareedta!! "he tried to grab the burger to teased her more.

" besharam kahike !! "she hissed and bit a large amount of burger stuffing her mouth full and placed in front of him .

"ab khao jhoota wala!! huh!! "she walked proudly thinking that he will never be able to eat HER burger but stopped in middle.

"swayam maine bola na tum mere dushman ke saath nahi rahoge?? " she glared at him and swayam immediately ran behind her and winked seeing back once she looked front and both went out.

"this is so funny dude!! chal chal basket ball practise keliye jaana hai!! " simmi said .

"aur hume tumhe sikhana hai "he said dreamily when she smacked his head and walked out .

"I love you so much baat cutter "Rey said and grabbed the burger to have his delicious piece of burger!!

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its been a week since that day but still kriya was angry and poor swayam his condition is still the same and his own gf laughs on his face as he shares what happens the whole day making it more worse. That day all are waiting for kriya to start the reharsals!! The whole gang literally used to slap themselves to believe that sharon was the one who tried very very hard to make kriya dance and make her mentally fit not to remember the past of her dancing thing.

Kriya had a extra lecture so she had to attend to gain the minimum attendance. So all were waiting and chatting for the whole 1 hour... suddenly something caught rey's attention!! No credits for guesses!! yes its the white angel Kriya!! She is dressed in a cute white top and a black jean with it. Soon after seeing her he sprang up from the floor and adjusted his jacket with a smirk playing on his lips.

"hua hua rey?? "swayam asked a suddenly excited rey.

"apna kaam pe dhyaan de bas "he said never looking at him and grabbed the ball !!

He walked out of the RH turning the ball over his index finger!!

sh: kuch toh chal raha hai iski dimaag mei !!

said sharon as all looked out. All gave a "expected "look and sat there waiting to watch what rey has now in his mind. Kriya not knowing what.s coming was walking across the atrium totally engrossed in her classmates book explain her a doubt . As he got near to her he skilfully slipped the ball away and what next a falling kriya and our super hero rey and finally they ended up with kriya in his arms eyes closed tight!!

"shit!!! yeh toh humare prank ke time bhi hua tha "nil stood up!!

all were tensed now!! even thought they knew kriya is a bit mentally strong now they don't wanna risk.

After few seconds after realising that she is no more hurt but safe she opened her eyes and got lost in his eyes filled with love for her. She blinked dreamily for once as she got a flash of him leaning over her exactly like this.. she frowned stressing to know when it happened before !! seeing the change in her expressions he spoke out.

" kuch din pehle mere room mei aayi aur ab seedha meri baahon mei?? what's cooking?? itna acha lagta hai meri arms mei rehna?? wo kya kehte hai ?? heaven?? "he smirked which he knew boils up his own baatcutters blood!! and how can he be wrong about her!!

"heaven my foot!! chodo mujhe!! "she flared up and pushed him back standing but due to his chain which got locked up with her shirt button both fell down with kriya on Rey and she held his jacket tight closing her eyes with fear of getting hurt!!

Rey is lost in his own world while his love is still busy fearing but both never noticed they had become the centre of attraction for whole college already!!

After a few minuted when his dreams reached earth he spoke up!!

"agar mujhe gale hi lagana toh kehdeti aise girane ki jaroorat hai kya?? mai toh free mei tumhe gale laga leta!! Because I know you love it !! "he said as she glared at him!!

"besharam kahike!! " she shouted untangled his chain and stood up to go when he slightly kept his leg in between but she composed herself..

"do baar khafi nahi tha ki third time ki try kar rahi ho?? " he said sitting up folding his legs.

"apna aapko itna jyaada important mat samjho " she made a face and walked into Reharsal hall.

Rey laughed and then realised that the whole college is seeing him with shock as they never imagined their "THE DUDE Reyaansh Singhania "will sit on the floor dreaming about a girl that too in middle of that dusty and dirty atrium!!

He scratched the back of his head and quickly went to reharsal hall as they need to practise .

I hope this is long enough keeping in mind that I update rarely!! If not then really sorry !! I can't type more!! this update itself took a whole of two apples and a glass full of glucose!! :P I am so strong na !! LOL! Well I am sending Pms from both the account this time!! Well Pms will be sent tomorrow as I will finish my gallery update today!! all the links will be found there and please do check it for updates and loads of new OS I never sent pms for!!

Hoping to see some interesting comments!! DO like please!!

Be healthy and safe buddies!!

Have a good day!!LuB you all!! ❤️

- Deetha😳

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago