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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
very interesting.
Feeling bad for Nupur.
Ab jldi update krna.
Bt as usual ur link is not working.
Mujhe tujhe stalk krna para .😒

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irum.

very interesting.

Feeling bad for Nupur.
Ab jldi update krna.
Bt as usual ur link is not working.
Mujhe tujhe stalk krna para .😒


sorry guys
bear with with me till i finish 100 posts

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please update soon...
I am desperately..waiting for the start...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Nice concept
want to read more
update plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
tommorrow i will update guys
Love?
Sunday
Yaadien
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yaadien.kiran

tommorrow i will update guys

Love?
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waiitng for ur update Kiran

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey plzzz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Here i updated first part. Enjoy reading

Part 1

In mumbai, early morning 4 O clock, not even darkness disappeared in the lap of sunrays. A beautiful angel is sleeping peacefully on a corner of a room on the floor. She is in her deep sleep because of tiredness. She and her family reached mumbai only 3 to 4 hours before. After settling and arranging their beds to sleep, she only went to sleep only 11/2 hour before. In her dream, she is wearing a beautiful white dress. she is looking very pretty and beautiful. She is like goddess, she is like an angel... she is standing alone in a sea shore. Suddenly she saw a white horse riding by a prince. He is nearing her in a lightning speed. His horse making thunder sound. But his face is not visible. The dust covered his face. Within a few seconds he came to her, at one jerk he pulled Nupur on horse. It seems like he is ending all her fear and problems. She crossed her tiny and delicate arms around his neck. she know very well her Mother send her dream rajkumar to save her, she buried her face on his chest. She know very well this is her actual place for her. Her face can feel his body warmth by his chest ...Next minute he carried her protectively ... where no one can trouble her.

I know, you will come for me one day. I read my mother diary, she told me she will send one angel to protect me from this world, nupur told him.

Nupur is in heaven. She is flying in air. She tightened her grip on his neck'.claiming him as hers. Suddenly a very cold water splashed on her'whole dress drenched by cold water. it is too cold. She didn't understand few seconds what is happening. In front of her step mother lalitha is standing with a jug.

After few minutes she understood'she is not on the horse with her angel, she is not with her dream prince which her mother has sent for her rescue, or she is not wearing any white dress. She is wearing same old salwar kameez. Which is already torn two sides and it is too old already the color also shaded. Actually she had only five dresses which her cousin gave her. Three for her daily college use and the one now wearing is as her night dress.

"how many times I have to call you'already it is 4:00 still you are sleeping '"lalitha shouted with anger spilting eyes where nupur will scare more..

Nupur now, she is scared 'yes its already 4:00 how come today I slept so much'.then she remember late night she slept at 2:30 finishing her homehold work arranging all members beds to sleep. Still her eyes are burning.

Lalitha shouted holding her long hairs and dragged from her mat. " go, fast 'there are plenty work is pending'"she pushed her to wash room.

Nupur didn't feel bad it is her routine ,everyday lalitha will scold her some unwanted reasons. Nupurs day starts from lalitha's scolding and ends by lalitha's scolding. Some times she will get beatings from her too. No one will come for her rescue not even her father seshi. In her childhood, she always waited for her father to react and save her from lalitha. But as the days passing, she not even crying. Before she feel bad but nowadays even she is practiced for everything.

She smile only when she get her prince come in her dream. She has full faith that one day her mother will send one angel to protect her from this humiliation and bad things of the world.

There is lot of work for her to finish and then she is allowed to go to college. She went to clean vessels first, followed by clothes washing and cooking. She is young but still mentally she is an innocent and matured. She has to finish her works soon to reach her college in time. Actually she didnt know how far her college and she didnt know the route too. First she has to find the route then some part time job for her fare expenses of city buses. It is now 9'o clock, nupur ran to washroom to get ready for college. She took one salwar suit among the three and got ready. She took her college bag and quickly prayed her god and mother. Before going to college, lalitha warned her to return home as soon as possible.

At Sharma Mansion

A handsome hot guy in vests and tracks is sleeping peacefully on a large king size bed in his hugeee large size double bed room.

Shilpa sharma entered slowly in his bedroom and sat beside him.

Mayu...get up, she said ruffling his hair

Hmmm...He just rolled to other side lazily.

Shilpa smilled seeing his cute son and kissed on his forehead. Slowly whispering mayu, i bought your favorite car for going college.

Mayank at once jumped and stood on his bed.

Shilpa stood smiling with keys in her hands showing mayank.

This brought a huge smile on mayank's face.

Thanx mama..., he shouted and hugged her

Anything for my mayu, shilpa said.

Ok now get ready. Its getting late for your college.

Yes...mom, i will be at breakfast table in 10 minutes. He rushed to washroom for getting freshup

Mayank is very excited to go to college in his new branded sports car which her mom gifted today.

Within half an hour, he is in his branded car on his way to college.

Here our nupur is on her way to college at one of the bus stop.

Both are getting towards the same destination, their college. They dont know what the destiny stored for them.


This is the end of 1st part. Sorry for mistakes. Hope you enjoyed this part. Thanx guys for ur support and love till now. Please guys hit the like button

All types of comments both negetive and positive are welcomed. Thanx guys for ur support and love

Please add yaadien.kiran for getting pms of this SS

Edited by yaadien.kiran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
wow
it was awesome start
simply loved it a lot

keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
one thing i forgt to say- my eyes become moist while i was reading nupur's part
hope use maynk ki pyaar jaldi mil jaye

i want a bit longer part frm u



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