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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 55

LAST PART

It was the wedding day,, khushi was making ansh ready,, when her cell rang,, and she looked it,, it was from arnav,, and ansh saw this,,

Kiddo: mamma,, ho??

Khushi: it's your papa,,

Kiddo: papa,, kiddo talky,,

Khushi: ok,,

Then khushi gave the cell to ansh,, and arnav when he saw that the call was attending,, he was going to say khushi but he heard his son's voice he smiled,,

Kiddo: papa,,

Arnav: ansh,, kid,, aren't you ready yet??

Kiddo: mamma kiddo reedy,,

Arnav: oh,, and where is your mamma??

Kiddo: mamma ish hele,,

Arnav: ok,, today kid and mamma will come to RM,, and to papa forever,,

Ansh smiled and said,,

Kiddo: folevel,,

Arnav: yes,,

That's when they heard vasu's voice,,

Vasu: khushi beta you aren't ready yet,, and anshu,,

Khushi: no mamma,, wo,,

And vasu saw ansh is talking to someone in the cell,,

Vasu: who is khushi beta,,

Khushi: mamma its arnav ji,,

Vasu: ok beta,, you talk to him,, anshu are you done then come naanu maa will make you ready,, your mamma also have to get ready na,,

Kiddo: pal papa,,

Then ansh heard arnav saying,,

Arnav: ansh you go with your naani papa will talk to you later in RM,, ok,, now give cell to mamma,, you have to get ready na,,

Kiddo: yesh papa,, ok bai,,

Then ansh gave cell to khushi and went with vasu,,

Vasu: beta you talk and don't take much time ok,, la is already ready now it's your turn the girls will come to get you ready,,

Khushi: ji mamma,,

Then they two left from there,,

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Arnav: khushi everyone left hai na,,

Khushi: ji arnav ji,,

Arnav: how are you looking khushi I know your are beautiful in the red lehenga hai na,,

Khushi: I didn't dressed in that yet arnav ji,,

Arnav: ok,,

Khushi: and you,,

Arnav: in that maroon sherwani you selected for me,, looking handsome and hot,,

Khushi: I know,,

Arnav: khushi you know I am feeling really happy and fresh,, everything new,, when it was our first wedding I really didn't give any importance but now,, I am happy that I am fulfilling all the rituals,,

Khushi: ji arnav ji,,

Arnav: and I am really waiting for the time when you and ansh will come to my life,,

Khushi: we are already entered in your life arnav ji,, and in few hours will be with you forever,,

Arnav: yes khushi forever,,

Khushi: and we will have everyone's blessings we will live happily,,

Arnav: yes khushi,, and I promise I won't do any mistake like I did before,, I will make you happy always,, and won't give a chance to complain,,

Khushi: arnav ji,. [That's when khushi heard knock on the door,,]

Khushi: arnav ji someone is at the door,, may be the ladies are outside waiting for me,, I also have to get ready hai na,,

Arnav: yes khushi you go,, will meet you in few minutes,,

Khushi: yes arnav ji,,

As khushi was about put the cell down,, she heard arnav calling her again,,

Arnav: khushi,,

Khushi: ji,,

Arnav: I love you khushi,,

There was silence for a minute then khushi said,,

Khushi: I love you too arnav ji,,

Khushi then placed the cell close to her heart not wanting to say or hear anything,, she is so much shy now,,

Arnav also felt his heart beat is racing, this is the first time khushi replying to his words,, and now he could hear her heart beat,,,

He whispered,,

Arnav: khushi,,,

Then khushi cut the call and opened the door,, the ladies made her ready,, after that khushi looked herself in the mirror,, she is looking so much beautiful today,, may the love arnav poses for her made her beautiful,, her cheeks turned red,, by the thought of arnav,, and the others teased her,,

And then they took her to the hall,, where la is ready and waiting for her,, even vasu and ansh also ready ,,,

Seeing khushi la and vasu came to her,,

Vasu: khushi beta you look beautiful,, Kisi ka nazar na lage,,

Then vasu put a kajal teeka on khushi's neck,, khushi shyly smiled,,

La: yes khush you look marvellous,, you know,, ASR will go flat in front of you,,

Khushi: thanks la,, [again she said smiling,, now she only smiles,, where as about few years ago,, she only cried on her fate,,]

Then someone said,,

Lady: vasu ji we have to go to mandir soon,, the grooms were already there,,

Vasu: yes come,, khushi beta , choti,, anshu,, come,,

La: yes mamma,,

Then vasu, khushi la and ansh sat together in a car and the others in another and left for mandir,,

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As they reached they saw many cars and other vehicles there,, yes the grooms were there,,

Then they helped khushi and la with their wedding lehenga ,, and they slowly climbed stairs,,

Arnav and nk looked down and saw their brides coming, they look so beautiful,, and everyone's eyes were on them,,

Anjali, payal and the in laws also came to them and hugged and wished them,,

Anjali: la, khushi bahut sundar lag rahe ho you two,,

Payal: yes khushi,, you two are like shining moons,,,

La: thanks di,,

Then their gaze went to their husbands,, they two also staring at them like they are seeing them for the first time,,

The pandit ji called them,, and the couples went to him,, and they prayed for their happy life, togetherness,,

But the time ansh was getting irritated by his sherwani,,

Kiddo: papa,, kiddo ilching,, [everyone smiled at him,,]

Arnav: ansh about few minutes then you can remove this,, ok,,

Kiddo: pal tish ish needil,,

Then anjali came to him and said,,

Anjali: anshu baby,, you know it's your parents wedding and you are the special one here,, so you should wear this,, and show hem that you are the bravest boy,,

Kiddo looked at anjali and said,,

Kiddo: shash mein,,

Shyam: yes,,

Anjali: and you are Jr. ASR, so you will do this,,

Kiddo: yesh ASR,,

Shyam: and ASR's wont get itching fast,, they are strong,,

Kiddo: kiddo ASR,, stlong,,,

Arnav: that's my boy,, [arnav said kissing his forehead,, proud of him,,]

Then the rituals get started,, pandit ji did the arti of devimayya and then give prasad to everyone,, and blessed the couples,, all the while ansh was with arnav and khushi,,

Pandit ji: now the couples should sit here together,,

And they did what pandit ji told,,

Pandit ji then gave the mangalsutra to arnav first,, and he tied it on khushi's neck,, a lone tear escaped from khushi's eyes,. This time of happiness,, and then pandit ji gave the mangalsutra to nk,, and he also tied it on la's neck,, a little fast,,

Then pandit ji forwarded the sindoor also,, and arnav first put sindoor on khushi's partition,, and then nk did same as pandit told him,,

Then pandit asked to gave them the varmala,, and shyam gave the varmala to pandit ji,,,,

Pandit ji: now you have to make this wear to each other,,

And then handed over that to them,, and first arnav put varmala on khushi then khushi put on arnav,, and then nk put varmala on la,, and la put next,,

Pandit ji: now groom's sister should come and do the gadbandhan,,

Hearing this anjali came to them,, and did the gadbandhan of arnav and khushi first,, and caressing their face lovingly,, and then,, she went to nk and la also did their gadbandhan,, and caressed their face too,, as she showed her happiness and love for them,,

Arnav and khushi looked at each other admiring everything,, and then smiling at each other,, for their new found happiness,,

That's when pandit ji said,,

Pandit ji: now bride's father should come forward for the kanyadaan,,,

That's when everyone looked at each other,, khushi became sad,, her face became teary,, la looked down in shame or her lose,,,

That's' when raj said,,

Raj: pandit ji wo our bahus don't have their fathers,, they lost them,, [he said covering everything,, and la and khushi looked at raj with gratitude,, he smiled at them,,]

Pandit ji: if father not alive then brothers, or brother in law,, can do this,,

Raj: brothers,, and brother in law,, [raj looked at khushi and la confused]

Pandit ji: devyani ji jaldi muhurat will end soon,,

Then khushi said,,

Khushi: pandit ji my brother will do my kanyadaan,,

Raj: brother??

Khushi: akash bhai wont you do your sister's kanyadaan??

Akash looked at khushi shocked,,

Akash: Bhabhi I,, I am ,,

Khushi: I know you called me always bhabhi,, but you always saw me as your sister,, and me too,, so you are my brother too,, so I am wishing you to do my kanyadaan,, and not alone,, along with dad,, hai na dad,,

La: yes dad khush is right you two have the right to do our kanyadaan,,

Raj: of course beta,, we will hai na akash beta,,

Akash: yes uncle ji,,

Then they two came to the couples and do their kanyadaan,,

Raj: keep my daughter always happy,,

Arnav: of course uncle,,

Akash: I will watch you bhai,, every minute that you keeps my sister happy,,

Everyone smiled at them,, then they came to nk and la,, and did the kanyadaan,,

Nk: dad I will keep oyur bahu always happy,, and will do everything she says,,

Akash: we know that nk bhai,,

Nk: but today I want something from mamma,,[vasu looked at nk puzzled,,]

Vasu: nk beta??

Nk: mamma from today you have to stay with us,, in RM,, as la's and my mamma,, please,,

Everyone surprised,, as they thought nk is always funny ,, but today he said something he should do as a son,,

Vasu: nk beta,,

Nk: please mamma if you see me as your son,,

Vasu: yes beta you and arnav beta are my sons,,

Arnav: then you should do what nk said aunty,,

Daadi: yes beta,, kids are right,, we all can live there happily,,,

Khushi: mamma,, because you we are getting all the happiness, and if you are not there then,,,,

La: yes mamma please say yes,,

Vasu shook her head,, then she felt a tug on her sari,, and she looked down and saw ansh,,

Kiddo: naanu maa u shay kiddo na,,, kiddo wan naanu maa shory,, [kiddo wants naani's story,,]

Vasu: anshu,,

She gets emotional by this,, how can she away from her grandson,,

Kiddo: naanu maa,, kiddo ood oy,, naanu maa kiddo shath,,

She kissed and hugged anshu keeping him close to her heart and said,,

Vasu: yes anshu,, naanu maa will be with you ,,

Kiddo: folevel,,

Vasu: yes forever,,

Then composing herself and controlling tears she said,,

Vasu: see nk beta what have you done, you made me cry on this good day,,

Nk: mamma,, [nk whined,, as vasu caressed his head,,]

Everyone looked at the three and admired them,,

Pandit ji: now you should do the pheras,,

Nk: ji,,

Then first arnav and khushi did the saath phera together for their togetherness till their life's end,, and then nk and la,, they prayed for their bright future to god,,

Pandit ji: ab wedding is completed and you are husband and wife from now on,,

Everyone clapped and congratulated them,, then they posed for a snap,, a full family snap,, and then the couples only,, then arnav and khushi with their life,, ansh,, in the middle,, he is so happy,, by all these form today he will be with his both parents and his family,,

A new life with everyone,, every relation……… without any mistake.. only with love and care……………….

**************The End**************

Guys I know this is the last chapter of my FF ** THAT ONE MISTAKE**,, but don't worry I will give you an EPILOGUE for sure,, and keep reading my works,, I have many stories for you,,, so keep reading liking and commenting to my stories,, THANK YOU so much for everyone who read like and commented,, THANK YOU SO MUCH friends……………

Maithly…………

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! I loved it!!!😊
u did a fab job with this FF.. 👏!!!
looking forward to the epilogue😃
great job. keep it up...
Edited by Swaran13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Yey!!! They finaly got married.🥳🥳 🥳
I am so happy for them.👏👏👏
I am so happy for Ansh.👏👏👏
He finaly gets to live with both his parents.😃
I am looking forward to the the epilogue.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭😭 no it is the last chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last part was heartwarming

Excellent
zemeera thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
was so cute,sad that it ended so soon,waiting for the epilogue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no going to finish...
waiting for epilouge
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update
will miss this story
looking forward for epilogue
please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow such an emotional end!! i literally cried:( so good and cool update!!
Awesome!! loved it!!!
now waiting for the epilouge!!
I will be missing this work:(:(

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