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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Yipppeee me first

Well well, it all fell so direct nah considering Riya really was a reporter😆

Lovely scenes if Arjun,Riya and Pari

Arjun really looks very happy...

and the way he wanted a GM kiss🤣

But Riya intelligent hein, bhaag gayi😆

and then Arjun trying to make her jealous😆

Pari is so cute🤗

and finally Riya is in as a reporter😉

Lovely Helna😉

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Awesome OS dear!

and i am so happy that u took inspiration from KC! thanks! 😉

Pari-Arjun-Riya were cute!

loved the romance and the idea of bringing Riya into ETF!

Cont soon!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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abjeya

@abjeya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

loved it. please continue. arjun aur sameer ka reaction mast hai.

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Sanjana malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

WOAH!!! Sakshi ki jagah riya! Aweome!!

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

thanks for writing this di...
it was awesome...
loved the dialogue by arjun to aisha- isse saara kaam karwana...
loved it...
pls do continue...😊

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ramya_ln

@ramya_ln

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

hey kunchu... nice os... loved it..

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Krinal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

It's amazing! 😊

Arjun, Riya and Part scenes were really nice

Loved it and really enjoyed reading it

Yous should continue it

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

riya instead of sakshi!!! wow... continue soon.. looks like arjun is happy with riya n pari!!

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#389

awww it was such a cute and sweet os...
arjun pari and riya scenes were really adorable... ❤️
loved how arjun wanted GM kiss from riya... 😉
and the way pari and riya were teasing arjun was lovely... wow arjun trying to make riya jealous... 😆
aur end mai riya in etf as crime journalist wow cool...
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next update...

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#390

Dear Kunchu,

This is all very nice and sweet, and you will give your readers a good idea of what happily ever after means. But as for me, I tire very soon of too much of sugar and sweetness, and as you know, I have very limited interest in romance in what should be a crime series, whether Ariya or Arisha or Arni or whichever other permutation you girls like.

So, I hope you are going to do something other than saccharine stuff with this one, but if not, mujhe baksh dena. In any case, you will have any number of ardent admirers for your Ariya romantic scenes, while I spare myself possible diabetes!😉

Shyamala Aunty

hello everybody...

any one missed Har Pal?? well I did for last few days..

tho aaj wapas ayi..

borrowing the OS sequel idea of KC from dear Vidya chechi... here I come...

with an OS sequel for Har Pal. ab iske kithne parts hoge... that will be depending upon your response..

and before I begin... Arakshi fans.. I'm sorry...

kyu?? jaldi patha chalega... here it comes...

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