virman: arrange marriage(by sakshi) part 52on page 84 (21 decmber) - Page 53

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Posted: 11 years ago
I m sure its all rakshits plan to make a good image in vadheras eyes...n thnk god virat is allright...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved tis part..
continue soon pleasee
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eeekkksss!!!!!
Awesome going of storyyy
Woahhh
luved it
Virat and manvi emotions awww
Continuu sooonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum update yaar
loved it to the core
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update plzz
Its quite long time u hv'nt updated plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago

Superrr update..

I really thought that Virat accident happend.
But thank you that he is back..
Pleasee update soon..
Really wanna now how is Rakshit..
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Posted: 11 years ago
babu dkh m frse tre stry strng se pdh rhe hn.. ab too mjh p thdi daya kr or js time mjhse bat krti h ush time p updt kr... plzzz 😭
agr updt nhi ml mrko too m ajse tre sth BENGALI m bat krng pkka
Edited by pritivirman - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sory sory sory i no its long time but i was very busy in my studies and other activities..hope u all still interested in my ffs lol...here comes the ff

Part 51

Manvi collapsed in virat's arm...virat took her in his room...n karan call the docter...after chek up when dr. Come out...virat rush towards the dr.

v-dr. Hows manvi what happen to her? She is fine na?

Dr- mr. Vadhera relax mrs. Vadhera is absolutely fine..bs thoda sa stress maine neend ka injection dedia hai..kuch der aram krengi thk ho jaengi...

Dr.. look at everyone in house..-mr vadhera if u don't mind..can i talk to u in private...

Virat look at everyone and nooded yes to dr..n they went in study

v-what happen dr.. ap aise...sb thk hai na..koi problem to nhi

dr(smile at his care for manvi)-mr vadhera she is absolutely fine...as i sadi before as well...bs kuch bat krni ti...

v(confused)-what dr.

Dr-mr vadhera...manvi ko normal stress wala stress nhi hai jo sbko hai..use kisi cheej ka dar hai...jaise vo apne dil mi bht cheeje chhupake uska samna kr rahi hoo...thie can b harmful for her health...coz aise cheeje mind ko bht affect krti hooo..or iske kafi results bhi ho skte hai...to i think..u should try something to cheer her up..jisse ki unka dar chala jae...

Virat lost in his thought-dar..chupana..manvi kya chhupa rahi hoot um...

Virat come out of his thought when dr. Pat her sholder

Dr-i should go now mr. Vadhera...do tc of her...

v-ofcorse dr...

they come out of study...karan guid dr. The way to go out...n virat n everyone went towards virman' room...manvi was sleeping but still there was worried lines on her forehead...

v-aa..manvi is sleeping now..when she will wake up i'll let u no all...u all should also sleep...

everyone nodded giving them some privacy...they all left to their respective rooms...

virman's room

virat brushing manvi's hair with his hand n lost i his thought looking at her...-manvi kya ho gya..tum to mujhs ekbahi kuch nhi chhupati ti aj kyu fir...kya chhupa rhi hoot um mujhe...

he ome out of his thought when manvi moan in sleep..which she usually not

m-viratji...nhii..raks...(then she stop moaning)

virat lay beside her n hug her tightly kissing her forehead n her hair-shhh manvi mi yahi hoo tumhare sath..or hmesha rahega...he hug her tightly...still thinking about..what happen to her...

v-ek mint manvi abhi kah riti...viratji nhii...raks...is raks ka kya mtlb hai...or manvi ne ye kyu kaha..he look at manvi again..manvi cant se u like this tumhe mjjhe btana hoga ki kya bat hai jot um apna chhupae hue hooo...

manvi move in her sleep n hug tightly tightly...virat smile at her..manvi wake up from sleep...she too smile back...he kiss her forehead...-kaisa lg raha hai(both still lying in each others arm)

mavi suddenly sit in shok..virat too..she cupid his cheeks..cheking his hand"viratji apko kahi chot to nhi lagi na...kahi kuch hua to nhi na..plss mi first aid leke ati hoo..jaha lagi hoo btaiega..

manvi about to go when virat hold her hand n make her sit again on bed..cupid her face-manvi realx..mi thk hoo bilkul thk hoo..tumhari tabiat thk nhi tum plss tension mt lo plss...

m-magr

v(put his fingeron her lips)-shhh...no more magr...tum yaha chup chap batogi meri achhi manvi ki trah and mi tumhari liy kuch khane ko lata hooo...

m-khana...ohh shit mujhe to khana bhi banaya

v-shush..maine kaha na tum kuch nhi bologi(bit angry even worried)

manvi made cute innocent face n look down..but took deep breath n cupid her face-m sory...but tum bolti itna ho ki..kisi ko bolne hi nhi deti...(making fun of her...biting his lower lip to hide his laugh)

m-kya..mi bolti hoo..jaiye mujhe to apse bat hi nhi krni...bilkul b nhi(anry towards towards other side folding her hand on her cheat like a cute baby)

virat shok his head -achha baba tum ruko m just coming okk...

manvi didn't reply virat went to kitchen n get some food for her-manvi

he look here n there but dint find her on bed...he look all around the room...but she was no where..even washroom was empty...-ye kaha chli gai...

virat about to go out of room in search of her when manvi can running to him n hug him tightly-viratji kaha chle gaye the ap...aise koi jata hai kya...apko bilkul b akal nhi hai..aise apni wife ko nhi chodke jana chaiy...

she was cring virat hug her bac-manvi kya hua...tum aise q rori hooo..plss mujhe tao...

manvi brok the hug-pehle ap btao ap kaha chle gaye the..

v-mein tumhare liy khana lene gya tha...bhool gai kya...

manvi look down-but mujhe to ap kitchen mi mile hi nhi the...

v-ohh hoo..mi maa ko bolne chla gya tha ki tum uth gai hoo...

m-ohhh

v-haa ohh..chlo ab baitho khana khao...

virat make manvi sit on bed n sit beside her...put plate n juice in front of her..manvi made face that she is not hungry..virat give her angry look..n srt feeding her manvi like a good girl strted eating... virat about to go to put plate back in kitchen...whenmanvi hold his hand-dont go plss...

virat got she is worried he slide the plate on table n make her lay on bed even he lay beside her hugging her manvi too hug him tightly

v-virat ji apse ek bat pochho...

v-ha pochho...

m-vo apki car waha aise...mtlb ki...

v-manvi ye sch hai car ka accident hua tha..but mi thk hoo...

m(worried)-kaise hua accident..aj dekh k drove nhi kr skte..kitni br bolna pdega..ki car chlate time fon mt use kia kro..ya dhyan idhar udhar mt kia kro...but ap to meri sunte hi nhi...

manvi turn back..her back was facing him...virat give smile on her concrn n hug her from back-are maine kab kaha mi fon mi laga tha...mi to kisi k bre mi soch rata...

still hugging her from back

m-kiske...

v-hai koi...mere dil k khrib...

manvi brok his hug n turn-kiske ..kaun hai apke dil k kareeb..(cutely)

v-nhi manvi chhodo tumhe bura lag jaega...

he lay straight..njoying teasing her...

m-virati plss btao na...

v-no..tum so jao..vo koi..mera sapna mi mera w8 kr raha hai...

manvi turn him towards her n hold hic ollar-dont u dare..agr kisi ka sapna dekha to...verna mi

virat slide his hand on her waist n pull her towards him..but manvi didt notice this-verna kya krogi...

m-verna mi apse kabhi bat nhi krogi...bol deti hoo haa...

manvi leav his collar n about to get up but found his grip on her waist-chhod mujhe...mujhe apse bat nhi krni...

v-q(pulling her more closer)...ab vo koi khas hai to mi kya kru...mujhe tum kyu naraj hori hoo...

m-virat ji maine kaha chhod mujhe...

virat nooded no n rol on top of her..paste her had in bedsheet-viratji...ye kya kr rhe hai..chhodo mi..apni us khas k pas jaiye...mujhe chodiye...mujhe nhi krni apse bat...

virat move his face closer to her-abhi b nhi krogi bat..

manvi gulp n nodded no...virat move more closer to her his hot breath for tickling her neck..manvi strted shivring ..something happening in her stomach

v-abhi b nhi...

manvi nodded no...virat move more closer///manvi close her eyes-abhi b nhi

manvi push him aside wid full frce..breathing heavily and blushind.. n stand near window-nhi bola na maine...

virat smile and suddenly he realise he want to ask manvi about what is she worried about...

hope u guyzz like it...:D

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Posted: 11 years ago
like kya baby i lovd it...
amznggg
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suprb se bht bht uprrr wl updt h..
virman rmntc momnts hayyy... m too hmsa aise updt k wt krt hn.. jldi se sb prblm k slv kr or frse virman romnce.. ayy hayy... 😉
agr tu aise hi achhi wl updt krg too roj tjhe updt k lye pdshn krng babu...
Edited by pritivirman - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update he so caring to her
so she will tell him about her
past about soon

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