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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

i way u write is beautiful. its soo true. as if ur writing from experience.

its not like khushi is stating the obvious, but like she is expressing honest feelings..

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Brilliant and beautiful update, I'm glad all three were spending some quality time together just for themselves. I liked the part where Lavanya said to khushi she was running away where as Arnav was running after her, I'm glad khushi admitted that she is still in love with Arnav and even though it may seem like a distant dream at the moment, however felt sorry for heart broken Payal as she realised she only had memories where as khushi still had hope. Beautifully written update, continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

please make a confession will you? you are an established writer who has been doing a lot of writing!!! dont tell me you are just doing this on IF (writing fictions that is)...

it is not the story that is so special here but the way it has been told...

when you wrote about Khushi's confession that she still loves him and is holding onto a dream, i thought you will immediately focus the narrative on Lavanya and make her the object of sympathy but you shocked me completely by focussing on the person who is left without a dream really (I dont think La is completely hopeless) and made me realise that life can be even that cruel...

please dont stop writing...dont ever stop writing...you are that awesome!

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anannya

@aneelovesarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

chap18- We got to know about Lavanya's feelings for Arnav.

chap 19- Khushi certainly is an enigma. She surprises her friend and us readers at the same time..

Liked both the updates.

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

Awesome Updates...Read the last few together...Amazingly written...Loved them...😊

First Shyam coming to meet khushi... shyam anjali truth is out...So Anjali and Shyam were seeing each other and were physically intimate too...khushi knew abt them, why they got married and probably also abt Arav...Wonder if she knows abt sheetal too?

What shyam told Khushi is true...She shd have talked to Arnav she made a choice not to talk to him and that was her mistake but then why are he and Anjali not talking to Arnav abt it and clearing the air...If not abt the Arnav khushi situation then at least abt Arav...Sheetal and the blackmailing...😕..isn't that a bit hypocritical...

Glad that payal has let got of the anger and bitterness at least for right now...She needs closure and Khushi needs her older sister and best friend...

My respect for Lavanya has doubled...Inspite of being so deeply in love with Arnav she supports khushi and is being a friend to her knowing that she broke his heart...

You have penned the contrast beautifully where some parts of the world are very fortunate others are not so much as to living necessities like water...makes us think how lucky we are...

I loved Khushi's admission of her love for Arnav...she still loves him and hopes for a life together with him...I hope so too...

Waiting for the truth to unfold before Arnav and his reaction to it...Plz Update soon...

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Good one...deep n emotional...

Pity Payal though...

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

The way u write the emotions of all the three girls are awesome👏👏

loved reading it😊

Thanks for the pm😊

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Hey!

Well-written.

I'm glad that La, Payal and Khushi are somewhat taking taking this time out for themselves. To get themselves pampered. Look and possibly feel refreshed.

As for La speaking of Arnav, that must've really felt like air is being taken out of your lungs ... bless her. She was brave again. Putting her feelings aside in order to talk about what happened between her friend and the man she loves ...

Payal. Emotional. What Khushi said must've really brought all those memories back ... their love, Dev and his nature, laguhter, accident, his death ... 😭

Khushi. She seems open in terms of what she tells her friends and family ... with a few exceptions ofcourse. Love take time and space for one to get over another. Though she's been away for a long while, that never did. Her love for Arnav will always remain ... I hope.

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

The power a dream gives you, nothing else can; there you can do the impossible without any resources. I am filled with a sense of weariness reading this update. Khushi talks of loving Arnav and that she can never stop doing that, loving him. Yet she subjected him to seven long years of pain, would you do that to someone you love?

I hope to get an answer for that.

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

RB a nice dedication to the "feelings" of the "other" women...they are as strong if not stronger and many even reach further in the moral compass to have thier love unrelinquished...sacrifice because they came second or that the object of thier feelings loves another...

Most times we are so involved in morally chasticing the "other" man/women we forget the intensity of thier feelings...

in your story i wonder if Arnav makes La his choice will Kushi be able to accept it as graciously/stoicly as La...

will La be able to enjoy her love...knowing Khushi is on the side lines ...will she compare Arnavs love for her to his love for Khushi as time passes will she look over her shoulders all the time...

Lavanya has chosen the harder path whatever the choice...her "love' seems to be one that is going to be asked of ...a giving one ...