ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 1 - [Completed] - Page 83

Each time I read an update here, I have a lump in my throat. The way you write about emotions is incomparable. Love the way Khushi declares her love. But she dorsn't know how her declaration will affect the people around her. It is surprising that she still hasn't realised that Lavanya too loves Arnav. Best friends normally know everything about each other even better than family.

Ok RB I am literally running short of words to describe ur writing! Lets just say I had tears in my eyes reading this and thnks for the pm. Do you have an index of ur works?. I am reading ur FF we the people as well. Any more stories? Would love to read them. Pls could u pm me your index? Thnks.

RB really don't know what to comment...just reading this beautiful story written brilliantly...

Is it me or its evryone!!!! i'm 100 % sure u're an established writer bcoz u wud b lying if u deny dis fact bcoz u're write just perfct...!!! d emotions, the ordeals, d feelings, d rejection, d betryal...all potryed just d way one needs to be..i've to confss wen i strted reading dis one i was against it bcoz everyone blamed khushi but lyki a moth attracted to lite i wishjed to read futher...nd i'm not disspointed..i wasn't at dem as well buit i know i cudn't really digest such stries of pain,separation to c how it all goes..u're writings have something in dem bcoz i can actually feel d pain in dese words u write..i dn't how u're able to deal wid dis one..its not a happily evr after but dat distant dream u talk bout u cant help wishing for it...

d last chpter bout La..man is it vry hard to be dat lyk la all forsaking it out for some1 whom u love..unrequisted love ius d most hardest i feel!!1 nd dat was d bst chpter till now..bcoz dere was an honest emotion in it...just some incompletness...wether being late is gonno b too late...idk..u've blown me over nd thnks to kalyani i'm honoured to be ble to read such smart stry...:)

Beautiful... every one has d hope of a distant dream at some point of time... u always manage to prick my heart...

😭 and thats where u capture our feelings

Your writing awakened many mixed emotions in my life. Maybe there is hope for my distant dream too.

Omg... Such a marvellous story...
Yaar... U should go & try for writting in films...
I will advice you to copyright this story immediately... Otherwise someone will steal this story & make a film...
Kya story hai yaar...wah...wah...

The way u have written each of their emotion...innerturmoil...state of minds... Everything is absolutly beautifull...

Omg this is sad. khushi still loves him that we know but the way she told lavanya was kind of sad I felt sorry for him.

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