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Sandhya

@cindistan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#781

wow!!! that was a really nice one...you described so brilliantly Lav's feelings...I loved the way she was there as a true friend when arnav really needed her...she could have easily instigated his mind against Khushi and confessed her love but she stood beside him as a true friend...

True friends are really rare these days to find and I absolutely loved the way u portrayed Lavanya...

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Niks

@NiksAngel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#782

I Cried again...damn emotional n touching...!!!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#783

Poor La! A case of unrequited love. So many people fall in love with their class mates in their adolescence but as time passes thry get over it. For her it is the love of a lifetime. She lost the train twice and knows that Arnav can love nobody but Khushi. She is such a good friend to Khushi, Arnav and Payal. She deserves all the happiness but won't ever get her love, Arnav.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#784

A lifetime of unrequited love is terrible enough, to have to see the love of your life with your best friend, worse. To see the friend throw it all away, even worse. And the man is still in love with her. Worst. I mentioned this before - for Arnav and Khushi we have hope. But for Lavanya and Payal...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g9PYPvMz-Wc[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago

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lighttheworld

@lighttheworld

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#785

The most scary feeling in the world is not being loved. La knew that she wasn't. Yet she was there. She was there for her best friend. She was there for her unattainable love. She was there for the tortured soul her best friend so loved. She was there for Payal who knew what lost love is. But no one knew what she needed. The ones who knew couldn't provide what she needed. Oh dear sister you are a true friend.

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

Hats off... hats off... i bookmarked this because kalyaani suggested this ff... but dint get the time to read it... my sister "asr2kkg" started reading this FF and has been going gaaga over it for the past one week... today i realized how right they are... Thank u kalyaani for suggesting this FF...

I m floored... U are an amazing writer... Oh mine can someone write this emotionally... I m yet to come out of the trans state which my mind has taken after reading this FF... every single word written left an imprint in the mind... the letters especially... god i m stuck for words to describe what i feel for each n every character... amazing writing and the pain u wanted us to feel for the characters is felt... hope arnav lets khushi have another chance..

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#787

Ola...caught up with missed out updates of past 7 days...nine chapters in a go.

No words...Brilliant work...loved the way u build up story.👏

Love between Arnav and Kushi, Love between sisters...and the lost love of La. Everything plotted perfectly. ⭐️

La reminds my state in past ...being in love with some one who loved my friend and myself playing the role of his best friend all through out his ups and down...by the time he knew my role in his life, i was married to some one else for ever and for good. 😉

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#788

Brilliant and amazing updates, just read both chapter 17 and 18 and both were beautifully written.

Chapter 17 - I don't think Shyam is a negative character, but I don't understand why he showed the photo only to khushi and not Arnav or Anjali. But I think he was right by saying to khushi she did have a choice by showing the photo to Arnav, but I guess she was scared of the consequences.

Chapter 18 - Loved the update from lavanya's point of view, poor girl I feel for her and she loved Arnav so much, but left it too late too confess and has only become his friend. Loved how you had penned down her emotions and feelings, brilliant.

Continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#789

Oh Lavanya, my heart goes out to her.

But is it possible that she was so involved with her fantasy about Arnav, that she ignored the happenings around her? Maybe Arnav was subtly hinting Lavanya about his feelings towards Khushi... Lavanya might be blinded by his love to notice little details about Arnav's expression or his behavior.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#790

So La loves him? Unrequited love is very sad. How did she do it all this time? Question is will Arnav realize this and picks her over Kushi who has hurt him? Hope not.