ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 1 - [Completed] - Page 74

A glimpse of what happened.. I still don't understand the need for Shyam to show that pic to Khushi if is not some evil mind.. Why is he here if he thinks he has done nothing wrong

Shyam and Anjali are confusing. What exactly is their story?

Somany emotions gud stry plz cnt...

Really Loved Payal and Khushi's convo😃

I'm loosing my stalker skillz :(

In a maze of emotional breakdowns, loneliness and some weird sort of perceived masochism, its always easy to form delusions I believe. Just btw, so much drama!

In the end... isnt it always about choices? The paths we choose ...and even more about the paths we do Not choose...

Phew! That was one hell of a chapter, perfect, I really don't know how you manage to do this chapter after chapter! Brilliant. I truly agree with Shyam even though I don't like him!!!. It's all khushi's fault. She could have very well spoken to arnav than disappearing !. Thnks for the pm.

there is more is ths shyaam khushi conversation.
is anjali really behind all ths plans to avoid khushi frm arnav's life?

Its a single choice that can change the course of our lives for the better or for the worse. In this situation it was unfortunately for the latter. After going through your story in a go, i must say what a commendable job you have done. Its strange but because of some twisted logic i dont blame Khushi for the choices she has made. Rather I sympathyse with her. I think its human nature to arrive at the most irrational decisions when stuck in a situation like this.
I liked the way you have portryed Payal's character. It is but natural for her to blame Khushi. Maybe that was the only way she could have moved on in life.
Shyam and Anjali have too much mistery surrounding them . It would be a delight to watch how their characters unfold.
For me, Arnav seems to be stuck in limbo. He tries hard to move on yet is too much involved to let go of his past.
Lavanya in this story comes as a breath of fresh air. She is the only sensible person around here who tries to percive things objectively.
Your charactersation of Khushi reminds me of the ancient mariner. Both made a grave error because of a moment of foolhardiness and are now bearing the consequences. Both have set upon the path of redemption . Both carry a terrible guilt on their shoulders and itch to confide in someone the reason behind their actions. Their ravaged souls are in search of salvation.
Sorry for such a long comment but i needed to pen down my thoughts cause for the first time on this forum i have had my mind blown away. Your story is simply magical. Or in the words of Holden Caulfield I wish that you were a terrific friend of mine and i could call you up whenever i felt like it.
Thankyou for such a breathtakingly beautifull story!