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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: Japonica
, biut

Thanks Japonica...I think it's We, the people writing [which I have been for past four hours - reading and writing that, that is] which is making me difficult to truly expand on the nuances of what I really want to talk about. Maybe tomorrow morning after I finish writing a 100% angst filled chapter, I should be able to explain better.

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arshihydfan

@arshihydfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

U r an amazing writer, straight to the point, very realistic. 👏

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Absolutely loved the bond between Lavanya and Khushi & the time they spent in the orphanage . Loved the end where Arnav helps her crossing the road . Hope this leads to the most awaited conversation !!! Fabulous chapter as usual . I personally love crossing the roads holding up the hand and stopping the traffic :)

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#514

A little bit of Hope,Wish,Pray,Plead,Mercy... maybe there is light at the end of the tunnel !!

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Sandhya

@cindistan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#515

so finally they meet and will talk now...waiting for the lunch part eagerly!!!!

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

just read all 14 parts of this FF

loved it

totally different concept of Arnav being left at the mandap by Khushi

cant wait to read what caused her to leave

and Sheetal backmailing Shyam and Anjali? what's up with that?

please PM me when you update

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#517

La-khushi part was a reminder of khushi's wrong decision.
Arshi part was just fabulous.that simple gesture was so touching.
And as for ur question,unfortunately that never happened in my life.still waiting for that warm hand to clasp mine.*winks*.

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: Philana

Aarya,

No? I mean, about the extra 'l' ((: So, I was named after my father's great grandmother, and her husband - as her beau before he married her - addressed her so in some letters that came to me among other legacy. I liked it enough to take it on; think the extra 'l' adds a caress to the sound of it, don't you?!

Re: one-dimensional - oh I was talking about Khushi realizing only just that Lavanya isn't at one dimensional as she may have imagined. That on account of a drastic change of attire.

I'm not finding any characters in this story one dimensional. Categorical, sometimes, one dimensional, not really!

I hope you mean "intriguing" in a good way! ((:

I have always been fascinated with Greek names and the extra 'l' is just adored, completely! :-)

If I were to tell you that I am intrigued by the smile upon your face, and the sadness within your eyes, which way would you have taken it 😉

@Japonica, good to see you here M :)

@S, give WTP a break and put some light into the angst :)

Edited by -Aarya- - 12 years ago

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#519

Awesome...arnav came and led her...waiting for next update...Thanks for the PM

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#520

Great! So Lavanya is ready to revive their friendship. Will she be still so if Arnav too decides to accept Khushi back? He is not over her at all, as I recall him telling L that he is a vegetarian. He helped her to wade through the traffic. I hope he will be there to clear her blocked mind too. This chapter lighted some hope that things may be set right.

Speaking of traffic, I often find myself inhaling all exhaust and getting angry looks of drivers, trying to cross the road. May be some day, I hope somebody will hold my hand too ;)