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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

That was lovely. I love how Arnav was honest in telling Khushi about his character..

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MamiaRehman

@MamiaRehman

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

really a lovely one... actually i read it in the valentine contest OS before... 😊

plzzz write this kind of lovely OS frequently ... 😊

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Ah, Arnav proposed...aww...and soo in his style!!! plus the video was so suiting!! good job!

thnx 4 pm.

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

hey that was very nice

good job😊

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

it was adorable!!...

thanx for d pm...

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

AWWW !!
Sch A Cute OS ..
Very Well-Done Girll <3 !!

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shivanisaur

@shivanisaur

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

This was an amazing OS!
It did justice to the characters of Arnav and khushi since it was as spontaneous and impulsive as one would have expected given their nature. Furthermore you gave them a different back story which made the reader think.
The writing style was great and contributed to makingg this OS a great read. In addition the romance in this was not sickly sweet. It was simple and yet so adorable to read.
You artfully encapsulated both romance and realism into your OS!
I loved it!

Thanks for you pm! :-)

Edited by shivanisaur - 12 years ago