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Presenting...

A M O R O U S .



Now... What do I say? Amorous... The word itself meaning love... the feeling of love that is... This work is completely different than what I usually write.

1. It starts off with marriage instead of ending on marriage 🤣

2. It's a combined work!! With none other than my love, LB šŸ˜Ž aka, Khushi... 😃

ps:LB hehe noticed the change???šŸ˜›

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A m o r o u s .

(Feeling' to be in love)

We thought and thought for a perfect song for this FF... like Sajda (by me) and Naina Tere (by DD) has. But we couldn't get that 'perfect' feeling when listening to choices. FINALLY, we decided on Bezubaan 😃 We dunno how apt or perfect it will be for this FF. Though we hope as time goes by, you will be able to make a connection to Amorous and Bezubaan like we did 😳


Though for this thread, we decided upon this song. You'll know why soon šŸ˜‰


Character Sketch:

Reyansh Singhania:

His dad is the owner of biggest Dance Academy of India. Reyansh is the heir to the Academy. He is the most irresponsible person and sometimes arrogant also for others. But deep down, he loves his family.

Kriya Ghai:

While she respects her only family, her mother, she loves living her life to the fullest and on her own terms. Her dream is to become a dancer but her irresponsible behavior always lends up in one sort of trouble or another.


Sharon Raiprakash:

Best friend of Reyansh. Understands him even in his silence. Partner in crime. She can go from rough to vulnerable in matter of seconds. All her life, all she asked for was love. One thing she could never say was her's and her's alone.


Swayam Shekhavat:

Kriya's best friend. Inseparable. Along with Vishakha, the trio just might as well be the three musketeers. Completely opposite from his friends and yet everyone gets along just fine. He is the one you can always count for.


Vishakha:

Kriya and Swayam's best friend. A sweet girl who almost always says the right thing there is to say. Though a girl, she possesses the ability to question even the highest authority and not an ounce of fear in her.


See what happens when their behavior land them in the sweetest trouble ever. One thing changes their life upside down and only time will tell its result.

Other characters that have side role importance throughout the story: Smriti (Kriya's mother)

Sujal + Kashish (Rey's parents)

Vicky and Neha.

Few characters come in and leave. Cameo types... only for 1-2 parts when their character plays importance.




Love, Khushi + Deetha

(twisted twins) šŸ˜‰

Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Okay now!!! i m quite shocked!!!second thread??? seriously?? LB i m fainting...
but on a serious note people please dnt spam to this extent.
mujhe chakkar aane lagenge...

socho..i mean just think tum log itna spam karoge aur hum chakkar khake gir gaye toh update koun dega??? please bhaksh do..

finally putting a fullstop to my drama i wanna say ..i m overwhelmed with the response... we expected a good response but frankly speaking i didnt expect ppl will like our combo to this extent ..I always feared people would say both are of different writing styles ...so this story is gonna turn out to be a big mess... and thus people will lose intrest...but very happy with your response

PS: LB i m still feared re...

chalo i will stop my bak bak here itself...

waiting for ur reviews!!!😃


scroll down for index!!
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Helloww peepss!! šŸ¤—

Kaise ho sab? Theek thak I hope 😃 Survived boards?

Thank you so much for so much love and support!! Pata nai tha aap sab hume itna pyaar karte hai. ā˜ŗļø Now that boards are out of the way and summermight have began, Deetha and I expect even more likes šŸ˜‰

Aur haan, inna thread ko kill mat karna 😳 You are free to come chat when either of us are replying to comments šŸ˜‰ Else, we gotta lay low šŸ˜› Warna hum dono ko chakkar aa jayenge šŸ˜†


Like DD said above, both of our writing style is very different and we weren't sure whether you'll accept us or not. You proved us wrong. THANK YOU for that!! ā¤ļø

I guess I'll stop here... We'll update soon 😃 Before the month ends for sure 🤣The chapter is ready.. we just have to find time to reply to comments.

A side note- Chapters 1-4 and CS + everything till that point were written soley by me... so any jhutta's if you don't like them, can be directed towards me 😃 DD ko blame mat karna tab tak 😳

I n d e x a f t e r A s m a ' s c o m m e n t .

Love,
-LB.
Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Hope this is the place I have to Res
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All our dear readers add this ID for PMs...



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Index for ...

A M O R O U S .




Thread 1 - Click here

Chapter 2- The After Effects

Chapter 3 - The Bride

Chapter 4- First Night

Chapter 5 -
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Edited by .Twistedtwins. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

res


Edit:

Lemme say, I am no mood to edit this right now and yet here I am though my mind is still stuck on the books I have been reading all over the weekend.

Sorry for that :p But coming to this story. Nice start and so its obvious she has not seen his face yet. Not going to comment much it was a great start can't wait to read more.

Good Luck, I am sure this one is going to be great success!



thanks a lot dear!!! hope really it would be a great success...

ps: frankly speaking feeling a bit awkward or may be weird talking to u ...i mean dnt take it other way but u see pehli baar baat wo bhi usse jiske saath tum koi kaam kar rahe ho...i mean ...*sigh* u get it right... hope that awkwardness vanishes soon...may be i m weirdšŸ¤”
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You edited all your parts already?!! Me so late šŸ˜† Plomish I'll do it soon-ish 😳

Comments reply kar.. I'll be back later :p

Tere parts pe bhi comment karna hai šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: angel_luvkreya

fantastic update

the bond of kria vish n sw was beautiful.
kriyaansh 1st meet was superb
kriya was cute in drunken state
rey pehle hero nd then kidnapper šŸ˜†
loved it



thanks a lot dear!!! yup i too loved KR meet!!! Rey antaryami hai 🤣...glad u liked it dear
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Originally posted by: *Khushii*

You edited all your parts already?!! Me so late šŸ˜† Plomish I'll do it soon-ish 😳


Comments reply kar.. I'll be back later :p

Tere parts pe bhi comment karna hai šŸ˜†



abhi abhi kiya re!!! take ur time...ji wahi doing...jaldi aana...

mere parts pe??*pout*

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