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Posted: 12 years ago
I absolutely love their banter. The way they accuse each other and then simultaneously realize their need to be the only one in each other's life was very well written. I s is samiya in the precap ? I think teri meri best suits Arhi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, they're both so jealous and possessive over the other...but I loved both their confessions to each others equally!!

Who's going to catch them in the act? Can't wait to find out!

As far as song, Teri Meri seems like the obvious choice, but two other contenders could be Tumhe Dekho Na from KANK (sorry if that wasn't spelled out right) or Saiyyan by Kailash Kher (the song which played in the hut scene).

Also, I'm not that great with Hindi...can you please send me a quick message on what the song that Khushi was performing with NK meant? I would really appreciate it so I could understand the story fully!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah, I loved the confessions between Arnav & Khushi very, very much. I am so glad that Arnav is taking baby steps towards the realization of his full feelings for Khushi. I loved the line that he said, "I am never as Arnav than when I am with you". It just showed the extent of his feelings for Khushi...

But at the same time, I am finding Samiya, annoying & most importantly superfluous to the story. It is your story, & you know best why you have brought her along, to make Khushi jealous I presume. But as I said before, there was no need to make Khushi jealous, since we have already had Khushi being jealous in the past due to La & Arnav's escapades. If you have brought Samiya to reveal Arnav - Khushi relationship, then you could have utilized anybody else from the existing characters, so, I really dunno what this Samiya is all about?? 😕

Shyam seems to be the same sickly guy he was in the show, somebody we could have very well done without. Your story was so refreshing just because it was dealing with Arnav & Khushi falling in love on the sly, with both the loving & interfering families being oblivious to what was happening right under their very noses, but somehow with the addition of Shyam & Samiya, your story is losing its unique charm. Sorry, but those are my feelings, don't mean to offend you with them. But that's honestly the way I feel.

Hopefully, you have something up your sleeves, which will make me feel better about the storyline :)

Precap: Based on what you've mentioned before, will Samiya be throwing another jealous fit in front of the families like she had done in the past?? So in effect bringing Arnav's & Khushi's relationship in the open or will she be blackmailing them??
Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome really Awesome update.
Loved when arnav said"& I am never as
Arnav as when I am with you".
Aww!!!the precap! Cannot wait for it.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Definitely... Teri Meri... no other song can suit them better...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update cant wait for their dance when will they confess their love to each other i hope soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Farah...super cute update and the pre-cap my God...super hot...I love your writing its very mature! Thx so much you put my in IPK land...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.


thanks 4 d pm
Edited by Stapleton - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love how arnav is slowly realzing his love
and dang the precap...i am so excited

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