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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Firstly congrats on new thread... comment on chapter 52 after some time

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

wowww...awesome..nice...good going..interesting...continue soon..😊

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

CAHPTER 52
loved it superb update... I loved the way Arnav told Khushi to come where they kissed for the 1st time and he actually remember the place coz they kissed... Aww Khushi asked him to stay on phone coz she is afraid of dark and he said I am waiting... I loved how Arnav told Khushi everything himself and my fav line was
"Maybe it needed a bit breaking, Red.. Pata toh chala kuchh tha waha par!"

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

this is such an amzaing ff. i wonder how i ever missed reading it before.thanks to samyaipkknd post of ff's.

i love farah's writing style, it keeps you engrossed till the last word and even after that you keep thinking what will happen. the characterisation is excellent, simply love these two arnav and khushi.

and like all the nagging readers, i must also say "update soon please"

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

ch 53:
I liked the opening ...the cryptic message of khushi was too cute so was Arnav's response.

finally the kp's was earned and gave much more than a kiss...what a heated moment... All smiles...

loved their banter...god they are so comfortable with each other.

surely khushi would have felt bad to have not tended to his wounds...but people observed the bite...aww ...how embarrassing.

oh but good everyone Has got a hint that Arnav is seeing someone.

new entry shyam and NK...sure this would add enough spice to the series.

loved the update

thx

sri.

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Okay this is for the chaps 52:-
Loved the chapter as usual. I loved how she goes full on bonkers on him when he calls her, it reminded me of that payal's mendhi wala scene. How she goes to meet him despite being scared of the dark him talking her out of her fears. How he talks about his bar fight with Karan to her because he wanted her to know about it the first and through him. Love how she supports him regarding that matter. Love how she clears his misgivings about his behaviour and daddy issues. Khushi knows he loves her...!! yay...!!!😃😃

Edited by acklesmanic - 12 years ago

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Now coming to chaos 53;-
It was bombastic.
"Pehle pehle humne bhi samajhne ki bohot kosish ki, par samajh nahin paye.. Bhoolne ki kosish ki, par bhoola nahi paye.. & then, finally one day.. I got it! Aap bhi samajh jaoge.. Thoda waqt lagega, but I'm sure, Devi Maiyya ki kripa se, jald hi aapki ki Harvard wali dimaag ki batti jal jayegi!" loved it...!!!
Loved the cashing in of the legendary KP's. Its like their first kiss, with her secure in the knowledge that he loved her too.

Now coming to the hickey, Loved their reactions to it and the way khushi drags in her kitty wale pj's to disguise her embarrassment and his cheeky reply to that. Now wht a monster has he created???

Loved how all arnav was searching for was khushi during the chaotic care being showered on him by his siblings and her feeling helpless at seeing him in pain and not being able to help in any way. When she got the haldi wala doodh i half expected her to apply it on him. Loved how the whole family reacted to his fight with karan, specially Akash.

And their reaction to seeing that hickey was again downright hilarious, how everyone seemed to know he is seeing a girl, but not who. I bet they wouldn't even in their wildest dreams thought of khushi as that girl.

Now I was traveling in a bus when i was reading and laughing so hard that people around me were looking at me with a look that deemed me an assured resident of NIMHANS...!!!
lOVE,

Anjali...!!!😃

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Fabulous update, Farah! Btw, I DID recognize the 'I am waiting' dialogue as soon as I read it, in fact, i could 'hear' it in my head as I read it. I just didn't comment on it, but I did. The hickey bit had me falling off the chair, laughing at the sight of a nonplussed ASR, ha, ha!

And now 'I am waiting'- for this fortnight to go by and for the next update. Thank you for a lovely long update, much appreciated👏

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago