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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1051

Prologue:

Wow so khushi is getting engaged'' Wait a minute if it is arnav then why is she so agitated and unsure.😕 O God whom is she getting engaged to????

Nahi!!!!!!!!!!!! khushi and snake.🤢 Chalo lets see how this one unfolds

Chapter1:

OK so we are back and doing our favourite pastime is it?? Driving fast on the streets of delhi. Wait a minute what is he doing with a syringe''Drug addict???😲 Nahi!!!!!! Shubh shubh soch toh sab acha hoga has to be INSULIN.

Ahh so they meet.😉and we once again start with 'you fall I catch' song. Arnav and khushi 1st meeting always has a charm of its own...😳

Wow the 'motis' also make a comeback'. Khushi and Arnav meet for the first time and 'dhak dhak' so fast already' 😃No wonder this FF is called 'scandalous'

Liza

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1052

Chapter 2:

So what is this job that khushi has picked up has she decided to be a model'''.👏 At AR is it????⭐️Yay so I knew it Khushi is at AR'.Calendar photo shoot wow'''.This is just awesome''''⭐️

The 2nd meeting and the first official Rabba vey and you have recreated the same magic... So arnav wants Khushi and Khushi is already engaged so I guess next we will have the most favourite(at least my all time favourite track) 'Farak Nahi padata track''

Ahh the engagement ring time for my all time favourite scene ' Yeh tum kya kar rahi ho'??

Hey you are combining 2 of my favourite scenes here'Ahh I really... I just... I don't know what to say???

Liza

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1053

Chapter 3

Girl don't kill me here, you are giving me all of my fav scene one after the other.

'Bhaad mein gaye app aur bhaad mein gaye apki naukri' I think I am dead.👍🏼 How are you even doing this..Looks like this was written exclusively for all the fangirls me especially to enjoy all our favourite scenes once again.

Oh the damn Contract so ASR is going to use the contrct to get his desired effect is it???

Hate him right now but I guess that is natural before I go and fall head over heals in love with him??? Ok I need to snap out of this I am drooling like a lunatic teenager here and God knows I am definitely not one. Ahh the injections are mentioned again😕...I think I am convinced that they are insulin doses so I am not really that concerned (mentally praying to god to be correct)😎

Liza

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1054

Chapter 4:

Hey I thought Di's marriage did not take place so did she get married to another person????😕

Nahi!!!!!!!!!!! Snake cant be di's patidev here.😳 That would be too predictable and that's something you are not...So di meets khushi and bonding will start''

Aww the concerned and chweet arnav makes a comeback. I don't think i could ever get enough about this personality of arnav...

I am loving this you are awesome I love where this whole FF is headed''waiting for khushi to admit 'haa mujhe farak padata hain'.

So whats the big news''''.guess something to do with La.

Off to thread 2 see you there.

Liza

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1055

Finally I is here! raksha karna devi maiya?

I really enjoyed the beginning, how you set the scene using Payal..

I laughed,

"Why does everyone think that he is a good match for me?"

reminds me so much of a scene in this movie socha na tha.

or just another day in life.

Such a good question..how do u ever know?! And here payal gives all these excuses being pragmatic.

"he appears to be besotted with you!" (instinct says shyam!)

But obviously this khushi has been watching tooo much IPK and reading way tooo many FF's or has been hanging out with anjali too much!

"but we come from such different worlds" (instinct says arnav)

Wow who knew payal was such a pushover!

"You have to make yourself believe that."

You go sister...

"I'll be there with you, every step of the way."

Its nice to see a payal who has man-ed up. The way you describe it..I cant help but question if this is really for khushi's welfare..?

Wait shashi is in a wheelchair?! Is there potentially a psychopathic-villian lurking in the background?

"neither of them had any blood relatives among the guests today" (instinct says shyam)

"He didn't seem to notice the hesitation" (instinct screams shyam)

You write like the best prologues. I don't think I was this on the edge of my seat..even when narcissa came to check if harry was dead or alive!

Hitashi

ps. Thank you for letting me be harry potter + ipk phangirl here!

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1056

"it's frenzied pace a testament to the agitated state of mind of it's driver."

INSTINCT SCREAMS ARNAV!

"Why couldn't she understand?"

I thought he was talking about anjali

I like that you put arnav's scandalous past, present and little bit of future (views on marriage) on the table already. And hence giving us an arnav who:

"worked hard, and played harder"

"his black leather jacket and dark jeans"

Who can resist a bad boy and a rich man? (sarcasm or maybe?)

I have full faith in you to make lavanya a character with a backbone..even if she appears for ek chapter.

"I'm Lavanya Kashyap, his fiancee."

And then:

"But Di had intervened."

HAHAHAHAHAA a day in life of arnav singh raizada. such an ipk flashback.

And she brings with her sense, not unlike payal then. What happened to the "sanse ruk jayegi" lady? I for one am not complaining!

the constant mention of "his jaguar"...I really like that car. (pokerface)

You capture his driving skills perfectly. Just like you did with the swimming scenes in secrets, so I am secretly hoping there is a pool here too?

Ok ok i am out of the gutter..now that we are on the topic of devi maiyya aka destiny aka juhi!

"a red and green tent"

"the cool ,refreshing breeze"

("The wind was flowing in from the surface of a small pond" - How to kill rabba vey 101!!!)

And as always boy catches girl..I loved the three thoughts of his as he did so. That is the arnav I already know.

The who wants to be millionaire question ""Tum theek ho?"

And for once she actually replies..I have always imagined that scenario in my head hahaha

Juhi as far as first meetings go this was perfect..you create magic *insert harry potter reference*

This khushi seems so much younger, naiver, innocenter, dreamier, curious-er.

Hamari sanse ruk gayi "I was...looking for you." Its funny how khushi can turn a badass asr into cheesy mush. oh and not forget a crazy stalker as well (i get an eerie feeling like there is role reversal happening between shyam and arnav)

"His fingers grasped the dori at the back of her blouse" Ah you and your subtly inserting ipk into these stories. lurve.

Hahaha when you put up shyams story like that he also sounds stalker-ish or maybe my creep instincts are on high alert after reading through sins!

Hmm.."protective instinct" ok I dont think I can see payal with any ulterior motives..error in judgement.

Cant wait to find what "scandalous job" khushi is taking up...A model perhaps? how else are they going to meet right?!

This

"His description of her life after their wedding made her feel caged already"

maybe its not just about the physical effects, but more...

Tumne bichare arnav ki life ulat-pulat kar di..! just in couple of minutes..and you gave khushi acidity...devi maiyya ki jai ho! Both those scenes were AMAZING. You write that rabba-vey and dhak-dhakness really well.

PHONE? abhi? it must be shyam "khushi what are you wearing?" *shudders* (please dont do that to us!)

Hitashi

ps. This has to be the longest comment in the history my comments on your stories.

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1057

OMG how the Bleep did I forget "NANDKISHORE!"

This is really scandalous khushi ek..chahanewale teen?

Ok i shall stop my unnecessary comments and move on..

So scandalous job lo aur shyamji se shaadi karo!

Khushi is being pushed around for real. She is again becoming the bichari..is this because of her i-have-to-make-everyone-happy-by-being-an-agyakari-daughter! Partly but it seems like buaji presented an air-tight case and everyone else fell for it! Buaji is like all the annoying rishtedars in one.

Ah the perfect wedding vs the perfect man dreams.

I am excited for khushi's job..somethings just make me laugh

"She would get the chance to live out a fantasy, and she knew that whatever her life might be like after her marriage, this would be a beautiful memory "

because I hear a lot of people say this, and it never fails to strike me how real khushi's character is..specially the way you have made it here. So relatable..with this whole marriage and is he the one thing!

I feel the dhak dhak when she thinks of him. Yeh tumne mere saath kya kar diya?!

"some rain very soon"

Are you giving us another rain sequence..or devi maiyya strikes again! That whole scene was beautiful. You never disappoint me in the rabba vey department.

Ah this arnvaji is arrogance ka dusra naam! And he is actually using his shatir dimag, power and money...hiring private investigators and all.

Oh and the trait that is ever prominent in arnav:

"He just had to."

have khushi!

Ok is this a future wala bomb: "I'm sure someone in Shantivan will be happy to hear that."

I am loving every word of this story. I knew khushi would want to be a model. I love their eyes meet part. I have no words:

"It was as if time stood still."

Because she read THEY had finally met, and this time without any exit strategies in place!

You re-created the photoshoot scene! "she became aware of the fact that her saree pallu was about to fall off her shoulder."

This is story about passion then..how important is the pull? the sensations in the air? Trust you to write about this..Then the commitment, morals etc come in. "Was she being punished for her shameless thoughts?" Am I reading too much into this..probably. But I cant wait to see where you take this!

Nannav mere bhai..its not destiny its not luck..its juhi.

The perfectest part was the way you described how arnav approached her in the beginning and her blushing and his conclusion. And everything that follows..like the 3 questions (I think you are also getting influenced by KSBKBT!), the 3 things she is not "Neither was she shy, reticent, or even indifferent." and his smile.

Shows how much of an ASR he really is, or maybe he is the trelawney of eye-reading..he has figured out so much about her in just a couple of minutes!

HELLYEA. Shyam cant make it. It amazes me how quickly I have jumped on the ASR bandwagon..i guess I have always been there..despite sins.

THE RING. This is what ipk would have been like if arnav already acknowledged his feelings towards her, even if they were of possession, ownership and not ishq-wala love yet..PERFECTION Expelji!

Hitashi

ps. dont know if this is important but your link to chapter 2 takes us to pg62, whereas chapter 2 is on page 61. I am just being OCD.

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1058

I like how you began this chapter as it also goes with my ASR-the-tempting-bad-boy theory..

"Fear and fascination, in equal measure."

The crux of passion vs traditions?

Some beautiful scenes have been intricately woven into this chapter...the ones you recreated were brilliant..whereas others I was just reminded of.

1. The ring scene

WOW. Absolutely love the direction this conversation took. It did absolute justice to both the characters. He throws the ring!

2. The scene after ASR prepones his wedding

Ah her tears affect him as intensely as always.

3. The scene where khushi insists on pheras before suhagraat

The ritual-wala argument.. toh kis cheez ka matlab hai..."Yes, that I want you, dammit!"

4. The contract scene.

Something that actually made sense, because it was supported by sound supporting facts.

5. The scene where Lavanya/anjali inquire about khushiji's fiance

The ending bit

Arnav's life just changed, turning him into an impulsive possessive unreasonable hottie. No wonder he wants khushi to do the same with her life too..I love how both of them think they are being rational about their points. I love that they are arguing instead of khushi just backing away or arnav no knowing what to say after what the...! It feels khushi is trying to convince herself as much as him..why she should not break up the engagement..or my wishful thinking has taken over.

Time and again I realise that if without khushi arnav is nothing..well if arnav wasn't there khushi would never have been pushed to extremes to realise who she was or could be. For the last 3 updates I had mistaken your khushiji to be meek with not that much to her...clearly i was wrong. Because arnav singh raizada is khushi kumari gupta's biggest challenge thrower and vice versa! I hope that this arnav brings out a fight for herself wali khushi, not the orphan dying from the weight of gratitude for buaji etc on her shoulders.

NK the friend! I forgot you gave him jeff+akash's combined role from the photoshoot. And lavanya's for teasing him with the fiance.

HE DRIVES HIS JAGUAR. HE SKINNY DIPS IN HIS POOL. POOL. POOL. I think I am in ASR heaven!! Dont get him out of there. Ah if only Karan Johar directed IPK.

This arnav realises his sins 1 day after meeting her..! Has good argument..he is sure "fiance" is not what she wants. He is second guessing himself. He is jealous. He is arrogant as sin..and throwing that ring out was scandalous? So the strategy changes from Force to Charm. Lets see how that works.

Hitashi

ps. pool.

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1059

Welcome to a day in life of IPK if Arnav was a charmer...

"Kis mitti ki bani hai yeh?"

When does he say this on the show?! and how could I have missed it..ahh

This scene was hilarious, and ironic, but ROFL worthy:

"there might be other Shyam Manohar Jha's"

really NK? Its just a coincidence that you both know a person with the same name, middle name and last name?! I thought highly of you...but tum toh poo-jali se bhi less perspective ho!

And what do u know, ASR at least tries to prode further:

"Chotey?"

The world famous interrupter of IPK universe decides to appear..DIII.

Why I love this arnavji apart from his badboyness:

"he couldn't believe the arrogance that had blinded him yesterday." - and how he came to this conclusion, I liked that part!

"A pendant in the shape of a star." - he remembers everything in minute detail (I mean thats a given its only been like 2 days and his life just changed, kind of hard not to remember!) and even if he doesnt know why they are significant yet..he knows they are significant!! bas!

"Too late, sweetheart. I've seen what I wanted to." - the charmer!

"Take a shot with her looking over her shoulder at the camera, with her back facing you." - he knows his camera angles!

"her beautiful eyes had spoken volumes about her hidden desires" - He is a certified eye-reader..and has surpassed the trelawney level of eye reading.

"He wanted to say all this" - If Only

"Her fiance was a man of limited imagination" - man of humour our arnavji.

"he knew that he could never approach her this afternoon." - This is probably the epitome of my liking at this point. I loved this scene juhi, it was so well written.

Why I am apprehensive about this arnavji:

"He still wanted her."

What does that even mean? Is she a building, a jaguar, a tv...?

Khushi:

She is like a putty in arnav the charmer's hand.

I loved the scene with khushi getting her photos taken..perfection!! So natural.

"aware of a strange feeling of betraying the man she was leaving behind."

Jalebis and what ifs are back...YAY

But then damn Shyamji and his crap timing. I knew you had something even better planned...

and you took us to POOL heaven. Although would have been more appropriate if arnav was in this calendar too. But the whole concept and the effect of it was magical...I could feel the rabba veys coming at me from the screen again

"She was now sitting with one arm trailing in the water,"

And you even recreated the bangle falling in the water wali kiss!!!! WOW.

This is why I love this deep-chlorine-infused-body-of-still-water.

I was thinking if you were going to do all those accidental wale engagement, mehendi etc type ceremonies here..and You got them engaged..kind of.

What is Aaj Tak saying now..?!

Hitashi

ps. alright I will have FUN..cause i am on a roller coasterrr wooo