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umamah70

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

wow...

loved it...

awesome update...

loved the ariya scenes...

update soon...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

MY POV:-AS I FEEL TO EXPLAIN ARJUN EMOSTION..
SO PLZ READ...

PART=17
"Kyun tumhare anshun(tears) mujhe effect kerten haiii.."

SCENCE:-
PRESENT:-ARJUN POV:-
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Arjun looked riya's room from inside..
it was first time he looked her Room carefuly..
the room r neatly organised n all other thinks r placed their usual place..
he lift his graze here n there..
All walls r covered with his riya n babies pictures..
he closed his eyes as wanna to feel her presense in room..
her nonstop chit chate, her cute dimple smile..flashes in front of his eyes..
a big smile crept on his face..
after few minute he opened his eyes..
n moved near wall..
Where one ariya pic r hangging..
he touched her pic face by his hand..
janta hoon main bahoot sawal honge us din tumhare maan main..
but why riya why u covered ur pain behind ur smile..
her ladki ke taraha tumne bhi apni shadi ko leker kae dreams dekhen honge..
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arjun clenched his fist us din jab tumhari maasi ne..
tumhare baare main etana kuch kaha..
nahi rok paya khud ko nahi..
tumhara dard mujhe effect kerta tha ..per kyun shayad ,
sabko samjhane bala ye arjun khud ko samjha nahi paya..
shadi ke baad jab tum pehali baar es gher main aye..
tumhare chehare per vo mausi saaf saaf dekh sakta tha..jab. maine tumhen. tumhare room main jaane ko kaha..
he laugh lightly himself -
vaise to shadi ke baad husband wife ek saath ek hi room share kerten hai..
per shayad hamare case main..
(he stoped in mid) hamare case main ehsa kuch nahi tha..
i can clearly saw in ur eyes..
i can clearly heared ur unspoken word..
but i prefer to be scilent..
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flashkback:-
Arjun signal riya to go inside her room,
before going inside she turned her face toward him wanna to saw arjun onces time,or as wanna to say somthing,
but she stood Quite n looked him...

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

As she lost her eord somwhere else..
arjun feel her graze on him..
but he neglect his graze n moved inside his room..
riya stood there for few minute more..as she waiting for him..but nop he dont come back his room..
she took long breath n goes inside her rooms..
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on the other..
arjun fighting with his mind n heart..finaly his mind is win..
he chose to stay away from her..
thats night is litle restless from him..
nop..vaise to her raat arjun ke liye restless hai..
but today is somthing different..
now his responsibility is increased toward her n her baby..
noo noo no not her its my to..our baby..
he correct the word in his mind..
arjun took his laptop n sit on a bed..before he open n do somthing in lapi..
sudenly one Question stuck in his mind..
Is riya sleep properly or not in her room..
He forget to ask her if she need any think or not..
Arjun goes n stood outside her room,
He slowly opened her room door n looked inside..
Light is stil on..Riya lying on a bed..her face looks so dull or pail,
arjun muttered himself Ohh god ye ladki bhi na..
sonne se pehale light band kerna bhul gaye..
arjun slowly moved inside ..
without making any noice,
arjun noticed her sliping position..she hug herself tightly ,her one hand rested her belly as she wanna to secure or feel her baby..
Arjun open blanket n covered riya..wanna to go..but he felt somone hold her hand..
he turened back n saw riya holding his hand..
arjun tried to remove her hold without disturbing her..
at last two three attemt he successful to free himself her hold,
he looks onces again her sleeping face,
n then bend litle down,
wanna to touch her belly but stop in mid..he wihper..good night princess n princess mom..If u fill scared my princess..then call me imedeatly papa is sleeping next to ur room,
arjun off the light

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

N left there..
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(loll as i wrote in privious part..riya is restless n not sleeping whole night..
when arjun switch off light n goes back to his room..
in midnight she feel thrusty..
as she opened her eyes n looked the room..
whole room r dark..
she scared n imedeatly on light..she tightly clenched the blanket n looked here n there..
it was not her room..
After few minute she realised, she was in arjun's house..
she took a long breath n closed her eyes for that second..
ohh for one second i forget, now i m arjun's wife..
to main ab apne gher per kaise ho sakti hoon,
she fell inner happiness..
but nop poor she..she tried her best to sleep again but all vain..now sleep is so far away from here..)
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on the other when arjun goes to her room..
he took his lapi n start..some work..its not related to his work..its related to somthing esle..
the whole night he passed in work..
at last he cloed his lappy,when his worked is over..
that time,time may be 4o clock..
arjun. looked his watch ,its four o'clock..he opened his bed room window wanna to saw outer veiw..(The same time when riya opened her room window)
its stil dark..
Arjun feel coold breez ..on his face..he closed his eyes n lightly hug himself(the same time when riya hugged herself)..
he feel litle warmth or some type of happiness,when arjun hug himself..he feel somone presence in his room..
(loll wind bhi dono ko moka de rahi hai ek dosare ko mehsoos kerne ka)
arjun goes washroom n that time riya goes kitchen for preparing coffee for herself..
after few minute arjun come back..
n he heared some sound..its comming from ...aaa may be kitchen..
Arjun looked time ,its only 4:45..
es waqt kitchen..kahi riya ko kuch chahiye to nahi..
he wiped his face in tawal..
n goes outside his room.
sudenly his graze fell on riya..she runs

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Her one hand on her mouth n she runs toward her room,
before he could say or shout her name,
riya opened her room door n goes inside washroom,
arjun imedeatly rushed inside her room,
he heared her vomiting sound,

he impatiently waiting for riya ,
he moved here n there..
now its almost 30 minute,she stil in washroom ,
its scared more arjun,
At finaly riya opene washroom door n comes out
arjun didnt noticed..she
wrapaed only single tawal around her,
when arjun heared ,washroom door is opened,
he turned n moved toward her,
in very concern-
he hold riya by her shoulder n ask her is u ok or not..but she didnt reaply,
(Arjun ab or tenstion main aa jata hai,he didnt understant why she is not answering his Q)
when riya lower her graze..n arjun feel litle vibration on riya body..may be she is shivering,
arjun lower his graze n looked her..his eyes widened to saw riya in single tawal..he looked her from top to botton..for that second he culdnt take off his eyes from her,
How beautiful she looks,
his heart start jumping n he heared soft maledy in his ears,
before his desire overtake him,he scold himself n comes out his thoght,
he remove imediatly his hold n moved outside,
if he turned back n looked her again then its imposible for him, to stop himself,
without turning back he says her to take roshani cloths,
he goes kitchen,
he feel thristy that time,
his mind is didnt work,
he badly needed his cutting chai,but dont hav power to make,
arjun saw one cup of coffee on self..he took that coffee cup n drunk,
(Loll arjun drink the same coffee which riya left)
in office when choree tease riya,he heared everythink which choree said to her,
Arjun got angry n same time feel gilt,
he dont hv a guts to face her,so he turned his face other side when she looks him
TBC
MAST YA BORE ME WAITING

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

UnRes*vapmu

yiepee me first
so it was arjun's pov 😃
great piya di..
I really wanted to know ki arjun kya soch raha tha...

And arjun usk room mai bhi gaya tha..
Wow..phir blanket..
Riya ne uska haat pakad liya 😳

and wo dono hi jaag rahe the itni subah... And the opening window 😳

and wo coffee...lol..
Phir arjun riya in the room..and riya in towel..
He was mesmerised by her beauty.. 😳
bg mai melody..lol.. 😆

awssm update..
Mai toh 1st part mai hi aa gayi thi..
Bt aap k baki ka past res tha..

Luv u di..
Thanks fr pm..fr next part..

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Thanx swthrt me really w8ng 4 tht update

Ho sakay to jaldi kr diya Kro g

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Abhi kiya nahii poora ...
he he he kucu kaamaa gaya so bich main he rok diya..
ab phir se likhane baidiii hoon...lolll he he he...
doo chap likhingiii bardash ker sako to ker lena