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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Cindrella3
Amazing...!!!👏Loved it. Please PM me when you continue.

Thank u dr..
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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: arnavkhushi1206
Awww loved the way Arjun took Riya her house and talked to her aunt but u didn't lyk the aunt at all I mean she's supposed to support riy not talk bad to her 😡
The doctor scene was good...finally some sense comes into Arjun 😊
He arranged for their marriage awww 😳
Loved how Riya hugged Arjun and even he hugged her back 😳
And yes finally they got married!!!(doing happy dance lol) 😃
I lived this new caring side of Arjun!!!
Precap sounds interesting!! 😊

Ohhh thank u so much dr for such a sweet n lvly comment...
i m so happy after reading ur comment...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

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PART=16
"Dhere dhere tere sath a new shurouat huye hai..."

SCENCE:-PRESENT--
Arjun took a long breath..
n marched toward riya's room,
He stood outside riya's room,
is i open her bedroom door or not..
arjum tried to convince himself,
finaly he prepare a mentle note himself or..
opened her bed room door..
Arjun looked here n there as he first time looked his room..
(Ariya lived seperatly after marrige)
Waoo room r perfectly organized..
no its not his first time in riya's room..
but every time whenever he comes..
Its always looks neat n clean..
arjun lightly smiled on himself..n muttered himself..
obiously riya ka room hain..saaf to hoga hai..
miss higenic frenk..her chij ko ehse obserb karegi..jaise pata nahi kitane jums hain esamain..
(I hop u enjoys litle litle thinkg of riya)
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Flashback:-
Riya yelled on choree..
ehse kya ghur rahe ho tum dono..
Chotu in concered voiced..
Ch-riya ye tere ankhen etani sweelling kyun lag rahi hai,
or tera face
(comes closer to her n pointing toward her face)
etana dull kyun lag raha hai,
Ri-kya bol raha hai chotu thik to hai..(toched her faxe with her hand)
Ch-noo riya Ehsa lag raha hai,jaise sari raat nahi soe hai,
Shree also comes closer n obserbing her face..
In bit teasing way--
Sh-Are chotu to bhi na..kuch nahi samajhata..teri ek gf uske baad bhi tu sawal puch raha hai..
thoda dimag per jor dal..
Ri-shree tum ehsa ka samjhane ke koshish ker rahe ho chotu ko..(She looks enquirly to shree)
shree smiled evily n reply..
Are chotu nahi samjha..kal he to eski esale samjhe ya samjhayon ke sath shadi huye hai..
To esake or arjun sir ke kal raat first..Samjhaye ya samjhayon,
(says in arjun style n start laughing madly)
Shree kya bakbaas ker raha hai..riya yelled on shree,
tumhen to main abhi batati

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hoon roko tum..
Shree start running..
Are riya etani hipper kyun hoo rahi hai..
Maine galat kya kaha..
mujhe nahi pata tha arjun sir etane naghty honge,
ke tumhen sari raat etana tank kiya,
Ri-Jaisa tum sonch rahe ho vaisa kuch nahi..main sari raat soo nahi paye kyunki vo arjun..
choree didnt listen n continue his teasing..
Ch-Dammit yakeen nahi hota..(act as rathore sir)
kadus ne sach main riya se shadi ker le,
Ri-what kadus tumne arjun sir ko kadoos kaha..chotuuu
Sh-haan chotu mujhe bhi ek pal le liye yakeen nahi huya jab..arjun sir ne phon per apni or riya ke shadi ke arrengement karne ko kaha..
Kuch to chut raha hai chotu
(act as arjun sir)..
Kya chot rahha haii shree..
Trio shocked n turned toward the voice..
Now trio ke avaj he jaise rook gaye hoo..
Shree wishper to chotu
(ye arjun sir kahan se aa gaye or kahin enhone sun to nahi liya..)
yr kuch bhi ho sakta hai shree enke chehare ka gussa dekh ker jinda rehane ke chance bahoot kam najer aa rahe hai..
Riya looked up to face
arjun ..
but she felt as arjun avoid her..
when she looked toward arjun ,Arjun turened his face to other side,
Riya (to herself )i m sorry arjun sir maine jaan bujh ker kuch nahi kiya..
mari esmain koe galti nahi,
--
.
few time before-
.
it was the first night of riya in arjun house..
(Vo kaphi koshish ker rahi the sone ke per uff ye kambakt neand jaise aaj hide n sik khail rahi the)
she lying on a bed looking at the wall clock,
it was showing 4 o'clock..
the whole night she is constantly looking the watch..
she has now no patient to lie on a bed ,soon she got up from the bed,
Aaj raat etani badi kyun lag rahi hai..
Riya opened her bedroom window..
its dark outside..cool airs comes inside..make a shiver down her baody,
she hugs himself..
she got irritated not realizing its mor 4 am..n she woke

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wok up early ups sorry no early accualy..she is not sleeping whole night..
due to this her face looks dul n her eyes gets red or lilte swelling easaly seen in her eyes..
She didnt know why she felt restless..

may be its new place for her..or may be its a first night of her wedding..
n nothing happened anything...as every girl think in her first night..
the night of lv..
the night of turst..
the night when two soul become melt n made a one..
she is also a normle girl n her dreams is also similer or look like normale girl..
.
She felt hungry..but she didnt know how to cook..except her coffee n his tea..his special cutting chai..
she smiled herself..muttered(poora ek din yes poira ek din lagaya tha arjun sir ke special cutting chai sikhane main..
or vo bhi us chai vale se..bechara kitana pareshan ho gaya tha..(she start gigling like a small child)
per chotu usane use etana dara diya..bechare ko majbori main mujhe chai sikhani he padi),
she goes kitchen for making somthing for herself..
arjun sir ka kitchen to kaphi well organized hai..
ups per mujhe to coffee or arjun sir ke chai nahi chai nahi special cutting chai ke alava kuch ata nahi..
(she pouted her mouth)
finaly she decided making coffee for herself..
.
she took two sipp of coffee..
Yaak..
ye coffee ka test etana aajeeb kyun lag raha hai..
she feel vomting n imediatly rushed to washroom(Inside her room)
after few minutes of cold shawer she comes out washroom..wrrapped around one long tawal arroung her..
when she goes washroom..she forget to take her dress but soon she realize,usaki yahan koe bhi dress nahi hai,
unwere the fact that arjun already present there..
when she comes out..
she was lost in her thought..so she cant notice arjun in her room..
Arjun marched here n there..as he wauting for riya..when he heared...

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Shanafr

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice part piya love it pleas cont soon 👏

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

For riya..
Arjun imediatly rushed there n hold her by her shoulder..
riya feel his hand tough on her bare shouder..
its increasing her heart bit..
Ar-riya r u all right.. i meen jab main room se bahar aya to maine tumhen tumhare room ke taraf bhagte huye dekha..
Arjun ask her the same Q again..but she didnt speek..
She is like a satue..She lower her graze ..
voo oov o vo..but she didnt able to complete...
When arjun's graze fall litle lower..now he froz like ice..
arjun looked her from top to bottom..she was only in single tawal..n his hand on her bare shoulder..
for few second arjuns looked her without blinking his eyes..
but soon he snnaped out his trace n imediatly removed his hold n tured to opposite side..
without waisting any time he rushed toward the door
(loll lagta hai sharma gaya
bachha .. )
he opened door but before leaving(Without turning back)
Es ward room main roshani ke kuch dress padi hongi..
tum chaho to usamain se koe ek..
Arjun ko room se gaye 15 minute se opper ho gaye but she stil stood there without taking any single minute..
---
she snapped out her thought when choree waves their
hand in front for her..
Riya ab to ghurana band ker tere samjha samjhayon chale gaye..
both easly saw her shocking n blushing face togethere..
--
last suside case is stil pending..
so all working on a case..
rathore enters in conference room..
N yelled..
Damittt abhi tak koe surag nahi mipa hai..
mujhe to lagta hai ye ek sidha sadha suside case hai..
Ar-ye koe suside case nahi hai rathore..use mara gaya hai..
Ra-tum etane yakeen se kaise keh sakte hoo..
usake suside note main saaf saaf likha tha..ke vo shadi se pehale he maa banane vali hai,
(at the same time both ariya looked each othere,but arjun imediatly turned his face)
Or uske boy friend ne usase shadi kerne se
usak

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Shadi kerne se maana ker diya..
that time riya feel bad for her ..She touched her belly n think luky to herself,bez arjun accept her n her baby.. (looked arjun with her corner of eyes)
She can sence anger on his face..
Arjun is angry bez how any one could do this..its discusstic..
But is is sure the girl didnt commite suside,
Ar-kisi bhi nateeje per bina sonche samjhe pahoncha naa khud ke liye achha hota hai,na case ke liye rathore..
or main ye sabit ker doonga ye ek suside nahi hai..

ariya n chotu left for crime scence..
leaving behind fustrated rathore..dammit..hamesha apni theory..
---
(its changed not like show&n i m not using sequal wise case..i m using according to my story..)
Crime scence:-
College building terries..
Arjun looks down to the terries..its to high,
arjun observed carefully the hight of boundry..
Ch to riya-riya ye arjun sir boundry ko etana dhayan se kyun dekh rahe hai..
jaise ye khud he chikh chikh ker batayegi katil kon hai..
Ri-Shut up chotu..ager arjun sir ne son liya to..
riya n chotu goes near to arjun sir..N looked down the terries..
Ri-sir mujhe laagta hai,usane pehale vo sucide not likha..or phir yahan se niche kud ker suside ker li..
Arjun give her r u sure look..
Ar-to thik hai..tum kud ker dikhao..
Riya n chotu r shocked..
What,.?
Ri-sir aap majak ker rahe hai na..
Ar-arjun give a shut look..
Riya tried to climed the boundry..
Roko riya pehale dress change ker ke aao..
Ch-What..?dress change..(confused) marne ke liye dress changed kerne ki kya jarorat hai..
--
After few minute came back the same type of dress..
(Loll dress kahan se aye ye maat poochana kyun show main
🤣. bhi nahi dikhaya tha)
Riya wears one short red dress..she looks like cute angle..when she moved toward him..arjun cant off his eyes for a second..
Ch-not bad riya..

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ri-thanks chotu she gives her cute dimple smile..
n moved toward arjun..
(arjun is stood near railing)
Riya hold her dress using one hand n tried to climb up..
its to hight..if she wanna to climb up ..(her dess also lift up)
She tried to hold arjun hold..but arjun took his hand away ..
riya looks suprisly to him..
(in mind)enhen samajh pana shayad etana aasan nahi..
Kabhi to etani conceren or kabhi..
Chotu riya ke help ke liye pass ata hai..
but arjun stoped him,
Ye kya ker rahe ho chotu..
Ch-sir riya ke help ker raha hoon or kya..
riya fustrated shouted on arjun ...meri madad ker raha hai or kya..ek tarah ke dress main esake opper bina kise ke madad ke chadna namumkin haiii...
Arjun turned his face to Other side..He is standing one mischivious smile on his
fase,with cross folding his arms across his chest...Exectly ab samjhe ya...
n marched down the terries..
Both looks impressive way to arjun..
RI-(in mind)to ye reasion tha arjun sir ka or mai..make a pupy face main bekar main he arjun sir per naraj ho gaye..
bahoot kuch hai apke baare main janane ko..
or shayad meri poori life kaam pad jayegi..
She looked his back without bliking her eyes..as wanna to caputure his pic in his eyes..
soon case is solved...
TBC-
UPSS I M TIRED KALL PIST KARONGI..
ARJUN KA KYA HALL THA US RAAT...
ONE CASE..
HEY HELP US FILM STAR KA NAAM KYA THA JISE RIYA LIKE LERTI THE..
BEZ NEXT PART BASED ON THAT CASE...
MAST YA BORE...??
IF BOTE THEN PLZ DONT THRIGHT EGS...HEHEHHEHE
Ur piya phir milenge...

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Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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