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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Kareena1994
Nice

Thank u kare

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: sanalala1990
i'm just out of my words yaar maza agaya just loved it

Ohh dr ..out of word thanks ..
or mujhe bhi maja aa gaya sana..
thanks dr

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Jass_k5
awesome updat dr i love the cnvrsation b/t riya shree nd chuto update soon dr bt in tht update no present scene dr
bbt update awesome

Ohh no present scence hummm..kuch to kerna padega..
thanks jass..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Thank u so much dr..lvly frs for wauting ur valuable time for my this ff..
in last part no present scence...hummm
bez half he update kiya tha..or es liye pm bhi nahi kiya..
but dont warry..flash or present dono ka tadka hai next part main..
hop u enjoys...
abhi bhi chance hai apke pass..
bardash ker sako to ker lena..ager update jaldy chahiye to comment kerna mat bhuliyega...
samjhe ya samjhayon...
to update karon ya na karon..
hahhaaa..
sorry yr ..
bus thoda waite
lv u frs
ur piya

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

PART=6
"kyun to pass hoker bhi pass nahi.."

SCENCE-Arjun madly drive his car..riya tring to stop him,
but arjun is arjun,he running himself..
sudenly one small boy comes in from of his car..
riya screemed ..
Ri-sir vo chota bachha,
arjun imedeatly turned his car,
the speed of car is so fast due to this,
riya bangs on arjun's side arms,
sirrr..
the car is rotating circular..
.
riya fearly holds arjun's arms,
Riiya screemed arjun sirrr..
Arjun puts his legs on breaks after two three rotation car is stopped.
.

riya reasting her head on arjun side arms ,closing her eyes n holding his hands tightly,
she was very scared she dont kno is the boy safe or not,
when arjun saw that small boy in front of his car he imeadtly turned his car so nothing happened to anyone,everythink is all right,
the small boys safly crossed road n ariya is also safe,
Riya stil resting her head n holding his arms,
Ar-Riya riya r u alright,
but she didnt ans..her body is shivering,
arjun was bit warried,he moves his other arms n wanna to pathes his arms but litle hegitate,
Ar-riya..
arjun put his hand on her shoulder,
riya slowly opened her eyes n lift her face to face him,
arjun remove his hand on her shoulder..
Ri-arjun sir...
Arjun's eyes fixed on her,
riya tim thik to ho na,
she didnt ans she stil shivering,
arjun looking in her n she is in arjun,
.

Cup reha ker bhi yeh sab kuch kehati hain.
sab kuch keh ker bhi
Chup he rehati hain.
kabhi ankon se ker ke eshara..
they share a beautiful eyes look,
she hug arjun tightly n stared crying,i m sorry sir mera apko heart kerne ka bilkul erada nahi tha,i m sorry
Kabi bahon ka de ke sahara..
mera en rahon se hai rista koe..
anjaana saw purana kissa koe..
ense jo main pucho to kahe ye meri kahani..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

PRESENT-

SCENCE-Arjun watching riya outside OT..
riya janti ho ,us din maine tumhen ek bhi moka kyun nahi diya baat kerne ka..
kyun ke main tum se nahi khud se bhag raha tha,
main janta tha ke tum mujh se mafi mangna chahti the,
mujhe samajh nahi aya main tum se ,roshani se najer kaise milaon..
jab maine tumhare hathon main roshani ke file dekhi ,pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya..
mujhe bilkul pasand nahi koe mere personal life main interefare care..
per pata nahi tum kaise dhere dhere meri life main enter kerne lagi..
tumhara bolana tumhara husna..tumhara yun mujhe dekhana ..na jaane kyun mujh per effect kerta tha,
or jab anjaane main maine tumhen gale lagaya,
ek pal ke liye main khud ko bhul gaya,
ek pal ke liye main bhul gaya ke meri life main bhi koe gum hai..
tum sach main mere life main ek roshani ban ker aye..
umeed ke roshani ,pyaar ke roshani,
mare jeevan ke andhere ko
roshan kerane vali roshani,
tum ne mujhse vada kiya tha tum mujhe jhod ker kahin nahi jayogi..
to plz vapis aa jao mere pass,
apne arjun ke pass..
manta hoon main ye kehta nahi..or shayad na kabhi keh pata..
per aaj keh rah hoon..
bahoot pyaar kerne laga hoon tumse ,
nahi jee paonga tumhare bina ,
ager tumhen kuch ho gaya to toot jayega..tumhara arjun,
suna tumhen toot jayega..
sameer watching all this..
he realy feel bad for arjun,
sameer goes near to him..
put his hand on arjun's shoulder..
Sa-maine kabhi nahi chaha tha arjun..phir se tum es kader toot jaoge..
per ye waqt toot ker bikharane ka nahi..
balki himmat se kaam lene ka hai..
Sam aaj phir maine apni bebkofi ke karan..apne pyar ko es haalat main pahoncha diya.
Sa-just sut up arjun main kab se tumhen samjhane ke koshish ker raha hoon.
jo kuch bhi huya usamain tumhare koe galti nahi,samjhe tum,
arjun turned his face other side n closed his eyes.

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Flashback-
SCENCE-IN ETF OFFICE-
today is shooting practice day..
Ri-Are wah chotu tum to aaj bade khush lag rahe ho..
lagta hai,aaj tunhen aapni 11:30 bali ka naam pata chal gaya..
Ch-are nahi riya ehse koe baat nahi..vo 11:30 vali to,
Sh-are ri tumhen pata nahi..ye kehna chahta hai..11:30 Vali purani hoo gaye..(In teasing way)ab ese 12:30 vali mil gaye hai..
Ch-abe shree ke bachhe kya bakbas ker raha hai ye to..
tujhe to main choodunga nahi,
riya culd not control her laugh..
hahhaa omg..tum bhi na shree..
bechare ke sachi prem kahani per sawal uda rahe ho..
Guys ye kya laga rakha hai tum longe ne..rathor yelled on trio..
Shree wishper..
ab ye rathor sir ke kya problem hai,lagta hai arjun sir ko miss ker rahe hain..

Kon mujhe mujhe miss ker raha hai shree jara main bhi to jano.
arjun standing behinds..
holding Ak47 rifal in his hands..
Ch-Arjun sir aap..
Sh-kahin arjun sir ne poora to nahi soon liya..
shree turn toward arjun..
Ar-Haan shree tumne bataya nahi kon mujhe miss ker raha tha..
Sirrr voo miss nahi i meen ..
acctualy main ye keh raha tha..hum sab aap ke shooting miss ker rahe hai..
App kya kamal ke shooting kerte hai..
realy sir grate..
kyun riya sahi kaha na maine..
tum abhi abhi to sir ke kitani tarif ker rahi the..
or etana he nahi..vo to aap se shooting ke kuch skill bhi sikhana chahati hai..
ab chup kyun ho,pehale to kitana bole rahi the sir se ye sikhungi vo sikhungi..

Ri-What main..? making smile on her face..n looking shree..
(In mind-shree ke bachhe main tujhe chodungi nahi..jab dekho mujhe phasa deto ho,tumhen to main dekh loongi,arjun sir joo gun le rahe hai ese gun se pehale tumhen he shoot ker doongi)
..
shree n chotu gigling..
Ar-riya ab vahin rehane ka erada hai..ya shooting bhi shikhani hai..
arjun give her a what look..
Ri-aye sir..

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Arjun yelled on riya..
pehale gun ko thik se pakadna sikho..
shooting to doir ke baat hai..
tumhen gun to thik se pakadani aati nahi..shoot kya khak karogi..
Ager es tarah tumhare haath kapenge to dushman ko shoot kaise karogi..
riya reply very slow voice-
Ri-kya her ek ko marna jarory hota hai,hum kise ko bina mare apna kaam nahi ker sakte.
Ar-vo criminals hai riya aam log nahi,
hamara kaam..doniya se criminal ko khatam kerna hai..samjhe tum.
Ri-per sir criminal ko khatm kerne se kya crime khatm ho jayega.
arjun didnt say for few minute..but before living he reply.
Riya hum bus koshish ker sakte hai.
but arjun satisfy with riya's word she was right.
criminal ko khatam kerne se crime nahi khatam ho sakta.

After a shooting practice they got a new case.
the case is very complecated.
six hours r left but stil etf did not found any clue.
Rathor is very fustrated .
dam it shaam hone ko aye or abhi tak hamaare pass koe bhi clue nahi.
One man is found dead in his apartment.
but stil no evidence.
so ariya goes hospital..for some information about his death.
SCENCE-Outside hospital.
Arjun stoped his suv.
both comes out fromthe car.
Arjun throght keys toward riya n say park the car first.
n murched toward enterence..without turning back..i hop ye kaam tumhen achhe se ata hoga..miss riya mukharjee.
Ri-What.? main car park karon,ye arjun sir samajhate kya hai apne apko..
enhen ehsa kyun lagta hai ke main koe bhi kaam thik se nahi ker sakti.
after parcking car,riya wanna to go inside,he saw arjun sir came back,
Ri-sir kya hya report mile,
Ar-usane report dene se mana ker diya,vo keh raha hai shaam ke time koe report nahi milati
TBC
pre-Aurat ke kabiliyat per kabhi sak nahi kerna chahiye.
present scene-arjun enterS inside OT
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Ab jaldy se comment do
BORE tha YA ACHHA,for next part verna

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

beautiful dear read in go

aur pata hi nahi chala kab khtm ho gaya

sorry cant hit like button its not working

so keep it n update soon

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: kgmu86
beautiful dear read in go
aur pata hi nahi chala kab khtm ho gaya
sorry cant hit like button its not working
so keep it n update soon

Ohh koe phark ne penda dr..
or kab tak hitt karogi like butten..ek jagaha ho to chalega but chaar char jagah..hehheee..but age bhi likha hai...