ARIYA FF:Kya yahi pyaar Hai...???(Thread two link add) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
wow awesome...👏
shree chotu scene was funny...🤣
loved that cutting chai scene...🤣
loved the ariya scene at last...❤️
THANX 4 PM...🤗
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
nice nice really very nice,
wow great update, I have no word to express,
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
All d posts are Awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Ohhh i m realy realy happy..
or un sab ka reasion aap sab hai..
i realy wanna to write one ff jaisa show main dikhaya tha...but thoda twist ker ke...


n thank u so much for liking n leaving ur valuable comments ..
ur comments is realy meen for me..
its realy importent me to write next part..
i meen next part se mera matlab hai..
aab sab story enjoy ker rahe hain ya yahi..
so back with next part hope u like...!!!!!
ager bore kiya to bhi baata dena frsss...
lv dr frs,
next time sab ke comment ka seprate ans dongi..realy sorry..not reaply each comment..realy bussy yrrr
ur piya-
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Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

PART=5
"Teri ankhen sab kuch kehker bhi chup rehati hai..
"main janta huin tumhari ankhon main kya hai ,phir kyun chup rehta hoon.."
jaanti hoon maine dil
dukhaya hai aapka.. "


SCENCE-Unkonwingly arjun hug riya n crying..he lost his lady lov, he lost his wife,
but when riya hug him back n pathes his back,
Sir arjun sir sambhaliye apne apko..when arjun feel his tuch,
Arjun brock that hug n pushed her away, n left office imedeatly,
riya was stunned but she knew she did wrong today,
Ri-i m sorry sir aaj meri vajah se aap etane heart huye hai,plz ho sake to mujhe maaf ker dena,mera apka dil dukhane ka koe erada nahi tha,
(all says to herself),
a tears roll down her cheeks,she wipes her tears n comes out arjun's cabine,
Sh-Ri tu kahan reh gaye the,main tujhe he dekhane ane vala tha..
or ye arjun sir ko kya huya,etane gusse main kahan gaye, maine unhen aavaj bhi lagaye, per unhone na to meri tarph dekha na koe jabab diya,
Kuch to hai jo chut raha hai..
But riya didnt say anything,
Sh-hey riya kya hya,main. arjun sir ke tarah acting ker raha hoon,or tu notice he nahi ker rahi,
Ri-humm shree ehsa kuch nahi hai,trying to make smile in her make,vo kya hai shree ab jo arjun. sir ke cabine se nikalega,to jante ho na uska kya haal hoga..
Sh-hey riya tum mujhase kuch chupa rahi ho ,akhir baat kya hai..
Ri-vo ..lokking down ..n thinking what she did..
Vo shree maine arjun sir ke wife roshani ji ke murder case file dekh le,or ajun sir..
look up..
sh-what..?? did u hv any idea what u hv down,tumne ehsa kyun kiya riya,tum janti bhi ho arjun sir apni wife se kitana pyaar kerte they,
Or tumne?
Ri-i kno shree maine sir ke personal life main,but realy i dont kno us file main kya tha,
Sh-its ok ri,ab pata nahi arjun sir kya karegen,
Ri-shree i realy feel bad for him




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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

hey tum dono yahan kya ker rahe ho..
lagta hai tum bhul gaye,tum yahan kya kerne aye they,
chuto comes closer rested his hand arround his shoulder n say,
lagta hai,rathor sir ka dar nahi,to janta bhi hai kitane gusse main hai sir,
.
abe ye kya ker hai,mujhe mare gaa kya..pehale ye apna dhae kilo ka haath piche rakh,
Ch-kuch yad aya sir ne tujhe yahan kyun bheja..
shree-ohh god main to bhul gaya rathor sir ne mujhe
yaha tumhen or arjun sir ko bulane ke liye bheja tha..
main to poori taraha bhul he gaya,
per arjun sir..
Ch-vo to kab ka conference room main tum dono ka wait ker rahe hain..
hey riya tujhe kya huya..tu etani chup chup kyunlag rahi hai,or face ko kya huya..etana utara huya kyun lag raha hai..

Ri-chotu..mujhe kya hona hai,confference room main. chalen varna sir..
riya n shree giv high fy..
Riya tring her best to control her emosions,
IN CONFERENCE ROOM-
trio enters in conference room-
Ra-ho gaya tum logo ka,ya abhi kuch or bhi baki,ager baki hai to bata do,hum case baad main disscuse ker lengen..
All sorry sir-
n sit their respective sheats..
riya looks in arjun direction with her conner of eyes..
she can easly read tension on arjun face..the pain he trying his best to hide but..he fail,he hide his pain in his angry mood.
~

Ra-To guys case per focus kerte hai,

One girl megha apne hostal ke room main mari huye paye jaati hai,
kaise kab koe nahi janta,
.
Ar-usaki frs ka kahna hai,vo room main akeli the,usaki tabiyat theek nahi the,
Ri-esliye vo room main he the,
statics ke hisab se 90 percentage cases main murder ladki ka bf ya koe karibe kerta hai,
koe ehsa jo use achhe se janta ho
Ar-statics ka rata kaphi achhe se lagaya hai tumne,
riya looks in arjun n he turn his face
.
Rawte tum or riya uske hostal jao or uske dostom se pata karo shayad koe info mil jaye,



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

chotu tum uske college jao or pata karo,kuch info mile to batana
or shree tum mere saath us ke ladki ke gher chalo,
all left their respective places..
arjun stands cross folding his arms across his chest n waited for riya outside etf office,
riya marched toward arjun..
Riya looks in arjun..
Ri-Sir vo..main sach main..
.
arjun looks in riya onces time..without say anything opened suv door n sit driving sheat,
riya silently sit next sheat..
arjun start his suv..
arjun drive his car silently n riya look outside..
she think in mind..how to say sorry to him,
Ri-main arjun sir se sorry kaise kahon vo to meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe,dekhana to door vo to mujhase baat bhi nahi ker rahe,
lot of Qs running in her mind,
she compose herself n collect all her caurage

after few minute-
riya lift her face n look in. arjun,she took a deep breath
Ri-sir ..r i ...i know ,jo maine kiya vo mujhe nahi kerna chahiye tha,
arjuns mind again thinking his roshani,
some flashes comes in front of him-
1-Roshani ka hasta chehara,
2-arjun tum ye kya kar rahe ho,aaj office jane ka man nahi apka,
3-arjun hug roshani from behind,
all happy moment that he spent with her..
but very soon all happy moment is venush..
Ri-sir mujhe nahi pata tha ke apki wife ab es duniya main..
last word is hit his heart,
arjun. increaed his suv speed..
Ri-sir aap ye kya ker rahe hai..yahan trafic bahoot jayada hai,or aap bahut speed se car chala rahe hai,
but arjun increased his suv speed ,
arjun wanna to run his painful memory,
he drive madly,
Sir same dekhiye..road per ek bachha hai,
sir vo bacha..
arjun turn his suv fast as posible as soon,riya almost bang his sides arms,
riya closed her eyes tightly holding his hand n almost rested her head his side arms..Arjun sir
arjun puts his legs on breack n car is stoped
TBC.


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
loved it dear read in one go
loved the way story is progressing but in there is no flashback scene
Edited by kgmu86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
awsum update...
loved it...
shree is a true friend he knew riya was hiding something...
lol teeno scolded by rathore... hehe
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry double posting
I kno its to small part n uncomplete..but realy tired ..but next past posted tomarrow promise..
n pm bhi kal he karongi...
ager bor kiya ho to maafi chahongi
Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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