Virmaan : Ek jid Ek junoon : 1st thread : NOTE-144

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
Cont soon khushi

i m just come here to gave next part... I m updating as soon as i write...

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

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PART-2(b)...completed
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Virat stood up from his chair nd looking at her without single blinking..she wearing pichle color patiyala dress with one side hair..she looks like angle..mixture of innocence nd beauty of nature..here maanvi confidently looked at boy nd steped forwards towards him..she didn't noticed virat who stood besides him..
M-with full of confident-sharma maanvi..first year student..first day in college..first day in Mumbai..nd first bed incident of this day..
Boy looked at her surprisely..all also get surprised..but virat..not surprised but again impressed with her..
M-i hop aapko answers mil gaye honge..
Boy abt to say something when virat stopped him by plasing his hand in front of him..
V-jane de ise..he said sternly with staring at her..
Maanvi heared it nd looked at him..he gave smirked..she first germ confuse but then she ignore it..boy looked at virat..
B-lekin..
He cut by virats deadly gaze..virat looked at him angrily..nd like already everyone knew his nature no one has dare to argue with him..nd he looked down nd steped back..maanvi saw all this nd get surprise..just then arati come there..
A-shouted behind from maanvi-hey maanvi..tum yaha ho..
She come near to her as maanvi turned towards her..
A-tum yaha?..in seniors k saath kya kar rahi ho?..agar tumhara principle darsan ho gaye ho to chale?..ghar k liye late ho rahe hai..
M-haa..chalo..
A-to virat-hey bro..sorry aaj meri nai friend ka first day hai college me so i have to go..i catch u later..ok..bye..
Virat just one time looked at her nodded positively with smile nd again looked at maanvi..maanvi feel his continue gaze on her but she ignored nd walked with arti..virat just stood there nd looks her leaving..he smiling continuesly like crazy..her dairy still in his hand..
FLASH BACK END..
IN PRESENT..
Its early morning in Mumbai..virat still remembering abt her..how she made him Made for her nd then refused it innocently..
His chain of thoughts break with her leaving scene..he looked down again nd saw her smile..he again moved his fingers towards her lips when he noticed some red colour on her lips then he noticed that his fingers cuts by the pieces of the broken glass frame..he looked at his hand nd then her photo..he smiled..he moved his hand towards floor nd wrote her name in same pattern which he saw in her diary..he teach her patterned name writing..how to wrote it in whole night when they met..he teaches this from her diary..he write her name with his blood on floor by his cutting fingers..he removed her hand away nd looked at her name passinotly..
V-pata nahi kyu dil ko ye yakin nahi hai ki tum kisi aur ki ho sakti ho..dil ne us din bhi kaha tha ki tum sirf mere liye bani ho..aur aaj bhi ye yahi kahe raha hai ki tum abhi bhi sirf meri ho..sirf meri..he said passinotly..
After this he clear his thought nd called his manager nd ordered him to cancel his all meetings nd recordings for today..he stood from floor nd went inside the washroom after placing her photo on table..
Other side..in viren's house..maanvi sitting on bed with her back resting on behind wall..she also not sleep whole night..she also thinking abt him..her one hand cressing sameer's hair carringly..she looked at out of window..she slowly come out from bed after covering him properly with blanket nd sit near the big open window..she can saw sea in front of her in betweens the trees..she see the first light rays of sun trying to come out from ocean..she saw the waves hited with stones..just like her feelings..everytime when virat looked at her..her heart feel same thing..she again slips in her thoughts..
FLASH BACK..
Its 5 years back..
Its second day of maanvi in Mumbai..she come here with her mom supriya-s..they only two soles are there for eachother..her mom working in one wedding planner company..like this maanvi also have intrest in it..she always helps her mother in her projects..she likes it..her mother transferred here by her company..they now living in companies flat..maanvi nd her mother both hated his father for some reasons..she also does not like to talked with male persons..she only concentrated on her study nd her month..her life always like rollercoster so she take like as challenge nd promised herself to be independent on her own self nd become support for her mother..
Its second day of her college..she hurriedly come out from her house after saying by to her mom..she always like to use bus travelling..she knew her mom doing very much for her so she take care her every steps..she reached at college nd meet to arti in class..now they are good friends..in evening after last class maanvi come out from her class when she remember that she fagoted her dairy in cafe yesterday so she told arti to go..she has some work..she reached at cafe area nd asked abt her dairy to receptionist..he told her that she can get her diary from library..she has to check their..she thanked him nd walked towards library..
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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Fabbb...Awww virat is such a majnu...cont soon

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

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MAANVI ENTERED IN LIBRARY ND LOOKED AROUND FOR LIBRARIAN... BUT NO ONE THERE...
M-AB KYA KARU ..? YAHA TO KOI NAHI HAI...
JUST THEN SHE HEARED SOMEONE's FOOT STEPS COMING TOWARDS HER.. SHE IMIGEATLY TURNED.. ND LOOKED AT DIRECTION.. SHE SAW THE SAME GUY WALKED TOWARDS HER.. WHO HELPED HER TOMORROW ND ARTI'S BROTHER... SHE CALLED HIM BRO... YESTERDAY... SHE GULPED NERVOUSLY AS SHE FOUND HIM COME NEAR TO HER...SHE DIDN'T KNEW WHY BUT SHE SCARED OR GET NERVOUS AFTER LOOKING IN HIS EYES...
HE COME NEAR HER ND STOOD IN FRONT OF HER... HE LOOKING AT HER CONTINUESLY WITH SMILE... MAANVI LOOKED DOWN AS HIS SMILE TURNED INTO SMIRKED...
V-ISE DHUNDH RAHI THI... HE SAID CLAMILY WITH RAISING HIS HAND TOWARDS HER..
SHE RAISED HER EYES LITTLE UP ND SURPRISED TO SEE HER DAIRY IN HIS HAND... SHE COUGHT HER DIARY ND TRY TO TAKE BUT SHE CANNOT BCZ HE HELD IT VERY TIGHTLY... SHE IMIGEATLY LOOKED AT HIM...
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