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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mira4

SUPEBBB KUSHI PLZZZ CONTINUE CZ I JST LOVED UR STORY


thanks...
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i m updating in few hours...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-2
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VIRAT looking at her photo passinotly..he remembering all the moments when he saw her in that one year..her smile..her antics..nd sudden expression changing on her face after seeing him..he smiled slightly..he clearly remember his first meeting with her nd first time when he heared her voice..he lost in flash back..
Its 5 years before..
Its early morning time in Mumbai..in virat's house..he early wake up nd go for some Jim nd then shower..he was the one nd only son of her mother vanshika nd his lat.father Mr.bharat vadhera..his father was DSP of police who died in one fight with some drug smugglers..after his fathers death his mom nd he only live in house nd his chachu live in poone with his family..he loved his mom..he has no close friends..he studied in last year of college..nd yes..he was the GS of the college..
Its his biodata..now some personal information..he loved his mom nd very sweet with her but same time he is Mr.attitude..with rude nd stubborn behaviour..he was more confident abt his choice nd his demands..he believes that he can get everything which he likes..nd if not then he destroyed it..but mostly he never failed to get it..his knowingly people always pray that hope some one change his this negative part bcz they knew inside his hard heart has one soft corner..which he never saws to anyone..not even his mom..
Its 1 month passed when college started..its 2 Julyof rainy Mumbai..virat get ready nd walked out from his house hurriedly without rpl to his mom..who asking him for breakfast..he come near to his bike nd start it with his own style nd drove it towards his college bcz he want to reached college before raining started..he abt passed from one bus stop when suddenly raining started..he make irritating face nd park his bike on side nd rush inside the bus stop shelter..he make angry face bcz he hate rain..he muttered angrily with cleaning his jacket..just then he heared some soft music..unknowingly he turned towards that direction..he stepped forward from crowd..he saw one girl dancing in rain with some strit kids..her back facing him..she wearing white patiyala dress..with opened hair..then his eyes followed his ears direction..he looked down..he saw its music come out from her anklets..its sounds really beautifully..which makes lovingly smile across his lips..he never notice any girl like this..he just staring at her..she enjoying her rain dance..she looked really cute nd beautiful..he try to saw her face but he failed bcz her back facing him..just then he heared some lady called her..may be her mother..
Lady-mannu..kya kar rahi hai beta..bimar pad jayegi..vapas aa jao..
Then his eyes again looked at her..
Girl-maa..plz..thodi Der..nd she continu dancing nd jumping..
Just then there bus reached at bus stop..nd again he heared her mothers voice..
Lady-mannu bus aagai hai beta chalo varna college k liye late ho jaogi beta..
She heared it nd nodded..she bent little nd kissed on cheeks of the kids..at that time virat saw her half face..from left view..he smiled like mad..nd shook his head..he saw her entered in bus behind her mother..he just losted in her..he even not knew when her bus passed from him..when bus passed he come in his sense he abt to fallow her but its to late..he looked disspointed..after few minus rain stopped nd he leave for his college..
After some hours..
Its lunch break..
Like virat is GS of college he always surrounded by chamchas which he didn't liked it but as GS he has to stay with them..he sited on out door cafe area with some group of boys nd girls..he enjoying his black coffee when he heared one of them boys called one girl..the girl walked towards them nervously..virat sited with his back facing her..she come nd stood with some distance..boy come near to her nd walked around her nd noticed her up to down..other also looked at her..all are seniors..virat knew they get new junior bakra..he continu his coffee..boy saw one dairy in her hand nd one bag on her sholder..he snatched her dairy..she try to take it back but he stepped back nd sit on side table of virat with facing her..
Boy-ok..to tum new ho?..he said with placing her dairy on table..virat unintensnaly looked at dairy..its attract him..his hand moved towards dairy..nd he opened it..he saw one beautiful pattern made on staring..he understand its her name but its wrote with different pattern..he understood that she is in designer department..nd he try to understand the name..the alphabets engaged with eachother in patterned..just then the boy asked her something..
B-okey..now tell us abt ur self..like ur whole bio-data..
She looked around..
B-jaldi..
She took deep breath..
M-confidently-i m MAANVI...MAANVI SHARMA...
virat heared her voice nd turned imigeatly...
He saw her first time from front..he imigeatly recognize her..she looking at that boy...he staring at her..
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okey this is half part..half comes soon...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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#;okey guys... I updated half part in this story... I have some work so i m not sure abt other updates...hope u like this one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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#;okey guys... I updated half part in this story... I have some work so i m not sure abt other updates...hope u like this one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Pls dnt say like dis. .continue soon. .cant wait next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
wooow manvi is just superbbb
virat is in luv with her at first sight
update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Superb start.. Virat is already attracted to Manvi.. Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Awesome...love at a 1st side...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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knwing virat's character ek zid ek junoon is his haan
Manvi is nt tht confident i mean she didnt answer those guys
Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Update..! but y is Maanvi running away from Virat...as in koi panga or she isn't interested...?

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