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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma


ab ye boss kaha se aa gaya?

lolzzz dil se aya he meri jaan
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

lolzzz dil se aya he meri jaan


what?
:D
bt why suddenly...!d!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update n nice precap😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear...just read all the parts./.loved it <3
pm me the nxt time u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-11
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Maanvi smiling from inside after hearing his stupid fandas..she thought that how mad he was..why didn't accept the truth which she told her..why he building illusory wall around him..in this walls he want that everything was in his under control..her smile nd happiness vanish when she realize the reality..she has to make him understood that he has to move on..she looked away nd abt to leave the place when he come in front of her..she looked at him..
V-seriously-iska to jawab de sakti ho?
Maanvi gave him confuse look..
V-waise to mere liye ye pata lagana mushkil nahi hai..lekin agar tum khud apni shadi k bare me batao to bahetar hoga..kyuki phir mera tarika tumhe pasand nahi ayega..now again he going to hard for understood..
M-looked away-tumhare liye woh sab jaruri nahi hai..agar kuch hai to ye ki ab main married hu..bas..
V-bas..he crussed his word..
M-looked at him-haa..bas..na humare bich kuch hosakta tha..aur nahi ab..
He getting angry by her answer but he controlled nd smiled forcefully
V-na Maine tab har mani thi na ab..aur is bar to tumhe kahi aur Jane dene ka irada bhi nahi hai..
Maanvi get worried by his words..
Just then nisha come their..
N-hey..maanvi..Mr.chopra ka call tha mujhe jana hoga..kya tum yaha sambhal logi mujhe unke family function ki preparations dekhni hai..
M-okey..waise bhi function khatm ho gaya hai..main bhi thodi Der me nikal jaungi..bas Jane se pahele sab ko kal k function ki instructions deni hai..tu ja..
N-to virat-okey sir nice to see ur second side..
Virat smiled nd nodded
she abt to leave when maanvi stop her..
M-nisha..ruk..main bahar tak tere sath chalti hu..
She try to escape from there nd virat understand that..
N-okey..chal..
Nd they just virat stopped them..
V-hey nisha..he called them..hearing this maanvi scared..now what?
He walked towards them nd nisha turned towards him but maanvi still stood with her back facing him..she gulped as he walked towards them..
V-normally-actually mujhe aapki wedding planner ka number chahiye tha..
With hearing this maanvi looked at him..
Nisha gave him confuse look..
V-no..kuch galat mat samazna..woh kya hai naa..jyada tarif jyada tar logo ko apne kam se distract kar deti hai..
Both looked at him..
V-continu-aur main nahi chahta ki aapki in wedding planner ki kisi galti ki vajehse meri bahen ki wedding me koi problem ho..so just for that..aaj bhi to ye late aai thi..aur sangeet se singer bhi to gayab tha..
M-little angrily-i m sorry for that sir..lekin mere late ane ki koi personal vajeh thi aur isi vajehse mujhe singer k bare me kuch pata nahi tha..lekin age se asa kuch nahi hoga..me khud personally sab karlungi..so don't worry..
V-smirked-woh to dekh chuka hu..aur aap personally yaha sab kuch kare isi liye number chahiye..
Nisha saw situation going to worse so she intrepted..
N-okey..sir..i will send u number..
V-nahi..mujhe aapka numbere nahi chahiye aur nahi apna aapko dena chahta hu..mujhe ladkiyon se number exchange karna pasand nahi..aap inka number bata dijiye main yaad karlunga.looking at maanvi..
Maanvi just staring at him..
N-okey sir..
Nd told him her number..maanvi cannot do anything..he looking at her with serious look..may be bcz of her angry tone..she looked away..gulped..
M-ab chal yaha se..nd takes nisha from there..
They walked out from hall..
N-yaar kya inshaan hai..kabhi kitna rude aur kabhi kitna polite..
M-chhod na..ab tu ja varna late ho jayegi..phir ghar bhi to jana hai..
Nisha nodded nd leave after giving her hug..
Maanvi turned nd again walked inside the hall..she walked towards her wedding planning helpers nd workers nd make them understood there tomorrow work..
After all this she checked the time..its to late..she walked towards arti nd yash who come out from dining hall after dinner with their family..she hesitatly walked towards them looking for him but he was not there..she take relief breath nd met them to before leave..
After meet them she hurriedly walked towards parking area..she just passed from her car to her driving seat when she heared his voice..
V-ja rahi ho?
She turned back nd saw him stood with leaning on side car with crossing hand
V-walking towards her-thik hai..kal vapis yahi aao gi..nd stood in front of her..
She looked away nd abt to turned..
V-main drop kar Deta hu..
M-looked at him-no thanks..main kal time pe ajaungi..angrily..chinta mat karo arti ki wedding me aur koi problem nahi hogi..
V-passinotly walked towards her..she scared nd stepped back with his every step..she stopped when her back hit with her car..
She looked at him nd gulped..
V-come close to her-passinotly-maine kaha main ghar chhod deta hu..bahot late ho gaya hai..nd don't worry us din mall me Jo kaha tha waisa kuch nahi karunga..viren ko touch bhi nahi karunga..nd he walked to other side..
He opened car door for her..
V-ab ander bethogi ya jabrajasti bithau..warn her
She turned towards him hearing his passinote tone..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bluemehra

amazing update dear...just read all the parts./.loved it <3
pm me the nxt time u update.


thank u so much dear...
But sorry...
I cannot pm any one...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

<font color="#0000FF" size="3">amazing update n nice precap😊</font>


thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update.. Virat is very smart.. He got Manvi's number.. Looking forward for the next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice plzzz plzzz update soon😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow yaar awesome pleasee continue soon..

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