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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome precap.. Virman meeting wow excited update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
haaye kya precap tha meri jaan... ufff now i cant wait for the next part...
update soon... :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update n wot n amazing precap...
Virat felt her presence...aww..
Is Sameer her real brother???
Cant wait for the nxt update...Virman meeeting...so guess loot of intense passionate moments frm nxt updte... [:D/]
Plzz cont sooon...n plzz do pm me wen ya updte!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


haaye kya precap tha meri jaan... ufff now i cant wait for the next part...

update soon... :) :)


thank u...
Waise u r not well right?...
So take care...
I will continu soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alicemath

Fabulous update n wot n amazing precap...
Virat felt her presence...aww..
Is Sameer her real brother???
Cant wait for the nxt update...Virman meeeting...so guess loot of intense passionate moments frm nxt updte... [:D/]
Plzz cont sooon...n plzz do pm me wen ya updte!!!


thank u so much...
I will continu soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar pleasee continue soon...
Cant wait Virman will finally meet eachother...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update.. Milke k bhi nahi mile dono.. Precap is awesome.. Loved it Khushi 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-9(a)
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Its morning of next day..maanvi still in hospital..she didn't sleep whole night..just stay with her mom..she loved her mom a lot..she sitting near her bed where her mother lying from last two tears..she remembering all days which she spend with her..her childhood to her teenage time..she grew her by single handed..she gave her both love..as well as mother nd father..she left his father for goodonce..for her good future..she supported her everytime..nd now when she was able to support her..make her happy with all luxuries nd happiness at that time she was lying in front of her in deep sleep..long nd deep sleep..her chains of thoughts broked when Dr.manan entered in room..she looked at him nd stood up..
Dm-maanvi tumhari mom ab out of danger hai..tum ab ghar jaise sakti ho..nurse hai yaha..aur sameer ko bhi tumhari jarurat hogi?
Maanvi turned nd looked at her mom..nd then Dr.manan
M-yes doctor..plz..agar aur koi problem ho to..
Dm-tumhe call karduna..like always..smile
m-smile-thank u Dr..
V-take care..nd don't worry..
Maanvi nodded nd left with looking at her mother..
She reached at her apartment nd just opened her flat's door nd saw sameer was ready for school..she entered in hall nd sameer looked at her..he smiled nd run towards her..
S-with hugging her-di..aap aa gaye..look i m good boy..aap ne bola tha na nishadi ki baat manne k liye..dekho main ek dam se ready ho gaya..
Maanvi smiled nd go on her knees..
M-brushing his hair-are wah..mera sameer to bada ho gaya hai..u looking cuty..
S-no Di..main bada ho gaya hu..say i m looking handsome..he said innocently
m-smile-no but i found u looks more cute..
Just then nisha come out from kitchen..
N-hey sammi ur water bag..nd she saw maanvi there..she comes near her..
N-hey maanvi tum aa gai?
M-stood up from floor-yeah..i hope sameer ne pareshaan na kiya ho uncle+aunty ko?
S-di..i said na i m good boy now..
All laughed..
M-okey..u r..-to nisha-nisha kal sab thik se hogaya?
N-haa..don't worry humne sab ko achchhe se receive kiya aur sab ko preparations bahot achchi lagi hai..
S-hey..aap yaha office office mat khelo..mujhe late ho raha hai..meri bas aa gai hogi..
M-smile-okey..chalo main tumhe chhod ati hu..
N-nahi maanvi tum rest karlo sameer ko main chhod ati hu..kyu sameer?
S-yeah..di aap so jao..rat ko bahot kam kiya hoga na..main nishadi k sath chala jaunga..
M-lekin..
S-di..main chala jaunga..remember i m big boy now..
M-smile-okey..my big boy..u go..she bent nd kissed on his cheek..thik se jana okey..
Sameer smiled nd nodded..he happily come out from flat..
S-nisha Di come fast..main aunty ko bye bol k ata hu..nd he went to her house..
Nisha smiled nd come near to maanvi..
N-aunty kaisi hai?
M-ab thik hai..tu asa kar sameer ko chhod k aa ja main fresh ho jati hu phir hum hotel chalte hai..
N-nahi uski koi jarurat nahi hai..Maine rahul sir ne baat ki hai..aur unhone kaha hai ki tum rat bhari soi to hogi nahi to tum abhi rest login aur jab fresh feel karogi tabhi vaha ana..vaise bhi abhi Mahanadi hai Jo main sambhal lungi tu asa kar aram kar aur sham ko sameer k school se ane k baad use mom-dad k paas chhod k direct sangeet ki rasam pe hi pahochna..
M-lekin..
N-lekin wakin kuch nahi..aur dupher ko ek baar aur aunty se mil ana..teri ye baki ki chinta bhi dur ho jayegi..okey
maanvi smiled nd nodded..she hugged him nd thanked to her..
S-shouted from out side-nishadi jaldi..
N-aai..nd she left..
Maanvi smiled nd walked towards her room..
Its evening now..
Maanvi come out from visiting hospital second time nd bring sameer from school directly..nd again make him understood that she come late night so he has to again stay with aunty but this time she come to night nd he agreed..
After some time..
In marriage place..second saremony started..yash nd arti sitting in front of stage nd guests stars come at hall..virat nd his family also present there..he stood in corner with bored expression..he didn't like this marriage atmosphere..he just tolerate this for arti..now more gusts reached at hall..some girls saw virat in function..they come near him nd starts talking with him..he hardly stood there..he try to move but they stopped him..he getting irritated..he know how famous he was but he didn't liked all this..finally he gave up nd walked out from there..arti saw him walked out from there..she follow him..here maanvi reached at hotel nd hurriedly walked towards function hall..she was busy with talking on phone with nisha's mom nd her eyes searches for nisha..she was looking front..
Virat at to reached at door nd take turned to go right side but he accidently bumped with some one..its maanvi..
Both-oouuchch..
Virat looked at front nd shouted angrily..
V-what the..but he shut as he saw the person..his eyes gotten wide with spark nd wide smile crept on his lips..
Maanvi also looked at up in front of her nd get shocked..she felt ere heart stopped beating..he saw virat in front of her..she even not remember abt her call..she scared..
Virat just staring at her..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Update...~! Nw since he knows she is the planner what will Virat do next..u have kept the story intact...waiting for the next:)!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...
Loving Nisha n her family in the story n sameer seems too cute...😳
But khushi ji ...dat was a wrong time to stop...Virman meeting...nw cant wait for the next update
Plzzz cont sooon n thnx a loot for the pm!!! 😊

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