Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 6) - Page 6

The update was long but yet at the end felt like its not so long😊 that addictive your writing is! This was such a fantabulous update, I never expected either of them to confess before the marriage I thought it will happen after the marriage. So this was par excellent and beyond amazing. Khushi finally gathered all the courage and took the initiative of expressing herself, so cute the way she has sent Prakash to get a rose for her to make her confession more romantic and of course to convince Arnav that her feelings are real. The sense of humour you have added through Arnav's sarcasm prior to the confession was sweet, you have written the whole scene very well even the smallest actions like how he was rubbing his eyes to get rid of the sleepiness has added a sense of realisticness and of course could imagine everything as if watching a movie.

In return Arnav asking Khushi to sleep with him, he actually couldn't find any coherent words to express his feelings but eventually did and I'm sure the confession was far more better than what he had expected it to be😃 the most prominent thing in the whole update was both of them have fallen for each other for what they are, you have shown it in this update through Khushi's monologue in the beginning about Arnav and then Khushi confessing her love not knowing he is already in love with him and accepting the fact he doesn't believe in love but still gong a head with the confession simply because she has accepted his flaws just the way she embraced his good qualities.