KR OS: Enchanting Love lst part pg 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
wonderfull os...👏

kriya lost her job....no promblem iv hai to select bhi ho jaye gi

sharon is vry bubbly..😛..she selected sexy outfit fr kriya..😳..luv it

krisha convo r vry sweet

rey kriya ko akele chod ker chala gaya....chalo wapas aaya..😛

dono abhi bhi kitna pyaar kerte hai..😳..es bar kriya ka k effect chale ga..😊

love to read more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
mannet...

part one...awsome... 👏

loved it...

the way u described each and every thing...

the krisha part was amzing...

kreya rey on a date!! *waiting*

but i blue dress pe pink nail paint... accha nahi laga mereko
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome start...loved it very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Woowww mannu awsmee updte yaar u defobcan rite better then ne super cool yaar i loeved t i wnder wats gba happwn next oh plz mke kr meet and be tgether nw jaldi updte next part am waitng
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab start...all the best 4 ur xams...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
oh my!!
I luvv it !!
hope theyre getting back together!!:D
amazing concept !!
thamnx for the pm
update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Mannu its amazing..
DO update soon plz..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Amazing os.
Plz update next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome update..
it was superb..
loved krisha's bond...
rey n kria got separated...
n kria not willing to move on...
thats love..
sharon made kria but a silky dress n since kria ll not get it sharon s getting it for kria.. sharon blushing on swayam's name was cute..
rey n kria met again by bumping into each other..
kria feeling d same warmth in rey which she always felt..
kria asked rey y he felt but instead of answering it he asked her out..
waiting for d date...
sharon saw them together n teased kria abt it.. n said ll b busy wit swayam n not to disturb her was cute n nice..
finally kria al set to make rey out of breath wit her dressing n now am waiting to read wat s gonna happen in d date...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyo here, I'm with the last part. I'm early then I mentioned. Enjoy.

Part 2:

Before beginning here's kriya's dress:


Just imagine the dress to be a little short than this and in blue color.😳

Rey was totally mesemerized by her look. He couldn't take his eyes off. Oh!! How he wished he could just go and capture those rosy lips in between his...neverthless their date has just begun. "you never know what happens" he thought.

"You you look...uh gorgeous," Rey said while closing the door behind Kriya. He actually couldn't find the right word to describe her. He could clearly see the crimson hue on her cheeks. A whisk of her enchanting perfume seemed to be working as a sedative for rey. Throughout the drive rey was controlling himself. Her slender long exposed legs were making it difficult for him to concentrate on the road. Very soon they reached the restaurant and Rey being the gentleman opened the car door for kriya. "Thank you," kriya replied, smiling as she slid her arm into his and leaned closer.

Kriya lifted the crystal glass to her lips and sipped the bubbly champagne, cool and refreshing. "Rey, I'm so glad to see you again. I've missed you so much."

"I missed you more than anything," he replied, wishing her dress would blow away in the breeze, leaving her bare, tender flesh in his arms. His eyes were roaming on her body and the exposed cleavage wasn't helping either. His intense staring warmed up her cheeks, turning then crimson.

Kriya looked up, meeting his tender gaze. "Then why did you leave me?"

"Dad"

"Dad?" Kriya repeated.

"Uh actually 2 years back dad was seriously ill and the business wasn't running well either..so he wanted me to come back to Canada"

"You could have told me...we couldn't found a solution"

"Every one's a little hasty, at times and so was I. I thought uh maybe the long distance relationship would not work" Rey replied with guilt in his voice.

The waiter arrived with two bowls of soup, setting them on the table and leaving, without saying a word. Kriya sighed amd started stirring her soup quitely.
"Yumm...this soup is delicious" she said while having it.

"Kriya, you're ignoring me."

"Rey, of course I'm not. I've waited so long for you to come back to me ... now, you're here." She paused for a minute and then continued speaking.. "Its just that I wish you could have told me earlier"

"I'm really sorry kriya...I am..please forgive me" Rey said to which kriya smiled at him and said "I already did"

After decadent meal, kriya set her spoon down, pushing her plate away from the edge. She opened her purse, planning to touch up her lipstick, then she felt the warmth of rey's hand on her arm. She looked up, his tender gaze reaching inside her.

"Would you like to dance?"

Before she could reply, she was swept into his arms, the tenderness of his touch softening her heart, melting her in his arms. She only embraced him closer, tighter, longing, depending, wishing he would stay with her forever, feeling the warmth of his body reach through the thin silk garment covering hers. They spent the rest of the evening in silent appreciation of one another's company, except for the occasional soft kiss on a tender cheek. Time passed so quickly. The guests thinned out and the orchestra stopped, giving place to a recording over the stereo system. In the darkness of the back side garden, Kriya stood at the railing, with Rey at her side.

"Touch me, rey, Let me know that this isn't just a dream, soon to pass away," kriya pleaded.

Rey let out a breath and made kriya face him. Her gaze was down and her breathing was fast. Rey slowly cupped her face and planted a kiss on cheek. Kriya closed her eyes feeling the warmth of his touch and inhaling the fragnance of his cologne. He then moved towards her lips. He placed his lips on hers and for a moment they stayed in the same position out moving, feeling the softness of each others lips. As the breeze blew their lips moved rythmically.

Breaking the kiss, rey drove her home, courteously unlocking the door for her. He set the key in her hand, then kriya slid her arms around his waist and held him close to her, lifting her chin to receive his kiss. Rey covered her lips with his tenderly, embracing her softly in the moonlight.

"Can't you stay? Kriya whispered as softly as the breeze, their lips close to each other.

"I think so."

Rey softly embraced her luscious body against his muscular one, pulling her into a closeness she always remembered, as the warmth of his body radiated through the thin material which clung to hers. They kissed, his tongue penetrating the moist, soft recesses of her mouth, like kriya had never experienced away from his loving arms.

"Rey," kriya let out a moan, as his hands caressed her back, soothing her tense muscles. Rey's hands moved from her waist to the back of her shoulders, softening her tense muscles at his gentle touch. Unable to resist, she shifted her weight in his arms, searching for warmth and comfort. All her cares and worries seemed to flee away, leaving a yearning and desire in their place.

"Do you love me?" This time kriya asked him.

"I've always loved you, and will always be loving you and only you" rey replied while setting his hands on her waist pulling her more close against him and kissing the nape of her neck, then moving one hand upwards. To his surprise, her luscious body leaned naturally into his, softly falling into the comfort they held each other in. His hands started wandering over her stomach and sliding upwards her cleavage, crossing the two buttons which fastened her dress, then moving upwards. Kriya gasped as a chill ran through her spine, then rey covered her lips with his, feeling her desire to have him. Her cheeks were as red as a tomato because of his little teasings.

"You're so soft, so delicate, kriya."

"You're so gentle, rey ... please, I just don't want you to go away."

"Looks like you're mind is set on more distant matters," rey said, while delicately sweeping her into his arms and setting her on the bed, then he embraced her warmly.

"I can't help it."

"You're melting in my arms, my love. Just stay there."

"You are the most beautiful women I've ever met would be an understatement kriya...you're more than beautiful" he said while looking into her loving eyes.

Rey's hands moved further up her rib-cage, bringing her flesh alive with his touch. Rey reached beneath the silk dress, his hands against her velvety flesh. She moaned as his hands started fondling her curves. He kissed her lips, and she answered with more response than she had ever shown. Yes, she wanted him. She reached out and touched him, feeling his body hardening at her touch. She sensed the warmth of his breath of skin, then his soft lips touched the valley, sparking a yearning desire deep within her. He caressed her bosom with his lips while his hands made random designs on her waist.

"Make love to me," she hummed, softly, her eyes closed.

Slowly, Rey undressed her, while kissing her passionately. Her hands hovered on his shirt's buttons and she soon unfastened them. To make her work more easy, he arched back and threw his shirt some where on the floor. His lips meet her curves, slowly and gently stroking and fondling them. He lowered his lips to the tip of her curves, massaging one with his tongue, then turning to the other, bringing her senses, passions, dimensions to life under his touch. He slowly moved down leave a trail of kisses on her stomach and waist. Soon they got rid of their clothing. Rey was very strong, yet so gentle and compassionate, bringing her life to a new peak. With every kiss their passion and desire burgeoned into a new level. They rolled and kriya came atop of him. The gentle touch of her lips on his skin created a havoc in his stomach. They conveyed all their emotions of longing, love, anger, every thing through their lips. The desire for having each other reached the zenith. Slowly ... ever so slowly, he moved inside her, until she begged for more. A tension gripped his body as he thrust deeply into her sensitive body, her soft body joining his movements, holding him close, needing to feel his hard body inside her soft, accepting one. They moved freely together, their bodied twined and joined, begging responsiveness, flowing moistly, pleasure entwined with desire, dampness against heat, hardness against softness, strength against gentleness.

Soon, all turned silent as they were swept into a tide of never-ending sleep, the warmth of their bodies forever in their souls. Softly caressing the tight, pink buds of her curves, Rey relaxed on the bed, with her head on his chest. Soon, drifting into a deep, pleasant sleep, the night passed away and they slept, only aware of each other's presence. The world was theirs ... to share, to have, and to hold. In his sleep, he massaged the gentle curves of her body, leaving his presence forever in her mind. They embraced each other so tightly never wanting to let go of the other and just stay in their world of enchanting love.

So, hows it???

I hope it turned out well...

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Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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