Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi Part 9 Page 123 (Mar 4)

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Awesome ,superb, lovely...
all in all I enjoyed it from shuroo se lekar ant tak.😃
In last Arnav's entry as Shyam Manohar Jha's family...dhmaakedaar.

aap itna achhchha likhte hai ki mann karta hai aaj 10th part bhi mil jaaye. hum pratiksh mai hai.

thanks for the pm.

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Loved d update
but a cliffhanger 😭
pls update soon

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Awwwsome cutie pie update...

Humari jalli Khushi is sooo cute...i love her...

She stared at him for a while, and then said softly, "This world is a very ajeeb place. Or I am very ajeeb. Jhoot moot ki girlfriend-baaifriend, dhak dhak & acidity, panting for breath as though I just climbed the Himalayas………" She placed her hand on her head. "I am going home. I have panted enough for one day. Bas."

They will falll in love soon... 😳 😳 😳 😳 may be they already are...they willl realise it soon...

Khushi clutched her thudding heart. "Don't look at me! Don't come near me! I know karate!", she threatened him.

Arnav choked with laughter. "Really?", he drawled.

"Really.", Khushi lied. "And don't use black magic against me. I will put poppy seeds in your drink and make you cough all night."

Arnav burst out laughing, watching Khushi scurrying away.

Thats a cute warning...

and this is how our Devil reacts to threats...🤣

"You stored my number under Banke Lalji? Excuse me?", Arnav asked.

BANKE BIHARILAL KI JAI... aapna kamal dhamal dikhayege Bankelal ji... 🤣

and finally... "Who are you, Nandkisore?", asked poor Buaji.

"Shyam Manohar Jha's family.", said Arnav.

and the Snakwa will run... 😡

Rashmi...i am waiting for ur post...

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 12 years ago

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Ha ha the whole update was just AWESOME
Loved it :) pls do continue soon
Thanx

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

In this update Khushi's part was 🤣
Arnav,s part was 👏👍🏼
Anjli's part was 😭

all I want to say that I enjoyed it very much.😃
Arnav's entry as SMJ's family...dhamaakedaar.

you are an awesome, superb...writer.⭐️

thanks for the PM.😊

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Pavithra

@alicepuppy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

happy.atleast Shyam was caught soon in this OS...

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sib_12

@sib_12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

beautiful update ...loved it very much😆

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Brilliant and amazing update, awww the temple conversation was so sweet, khushi is just so simple, innocent and adorable. As usual there telephone conversation was cute and khushi had saved Arnav's name as banka lalji, that was funny. Finally the family has arrived, this is so exciting, I can't wait to see the family's reaction, especially Anjali's, hope she is head strong and slaps the snake Shyam, beautifully written update, continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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Neen

@nnsunn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Amazing update.
Its bad 4 both our hearts, lol. She s so innocent and childish. Perfect timing 4 ASR's entry at khushi's engagement. Wonder wat wil be anjali and shyam's reaction. Pls update soon.