Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi Part 9 Page 123 (Mar 4)

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Just read this, what a wonderfully different perspective to the tale! Looking forward to where you take this!

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saavan_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Awesome update! LOVE this OS <3 I am loving this angle of the story :) Both of them teaming up to bring Shyam down! That's the way it should have been in the show too...but sadly that didnt happen :(

Look forward to reading more :)

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anusada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Arnav and kushi teaming up for shyam!!!!
I love it!!!
So badly wanted to see it onscreen!!!!
You made it true :-)
Brilliant concept!!!!!!
Superb story!!!!
Next one today only pls!!!!!

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laddoo598

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Smita, I am so happy you started writing these one shots, I was missing your writing after "Keeping Khushi" ended.

Fabulous start, I can't wait to read more! :)

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

She looked like his plants after the rain, all fresh and bright and thriving. loved this comparison... as kushi and plants will always be an integral part of Arnav's life

The update was really Awesome and loved how this angry ASR was speaking so softly with kushi...

i really love kushi character.. she is so innocent and cute but at the same time so sensible and mature...

and i am really loving how you have changed the situation and the part that i loved the most here is first arnav agreeing to show true color of shyam to anjali and the second when she mention about shyam putting the blame on kushi and her family after getting caught...

Now i am eagerly waiting for the next part😃

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snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Great update love how they are teaming up together to get Shyam. Love how Khushi's craziness shows through and how cute she can be

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Shweta1691

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Arnav sounded so anguished...

Khushi thought of all the possiblities including his family's reactions...even in a situation like this she is using her brains and heart together...good girl

Looking forward to more

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

loving it a lot...awesome and tooo good...❤️

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

awesome update! Good thing Arnav believes her now. I hope they get rid of that disgusting Shyam ASAP. Looks like Arnav is already attracted to her. Can't wait to read the next part!