ArIya FF: Dur se hi sehi(DISCONTINUED) - Page 60

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Posted: 12 years ago
great update. waiting for more. ssuperb. he has found riya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u 4 updating after a long time ..
it was awesome upt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sabu!!!
amare tumi PM na pathaile ekkebare khayalamu!!!!
bujjho to!!!
Plz upd8 dao na!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Sabu!!!
amare tumi PM na pathaile ekkebare khayalamu!!!!
bujjho to!!!
Plz upd8 dao na!!!



Shon Sumu...gaali ta r dilam na...


Ajk je jalano ta tui jalali amak...


R jara jara ei FF er pm chay ami na taderke amar 1ta post like korte bollam??


Tui to okhane like hit korish ni...

To amio pm kori ni!

P.S: don't u even think that tui amak kheye fele etto shohoj e hojom korte parbi...

Ami maal boro jotil!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok...I finally finished reading all the chapters...Wow!!

I really love the way you write and I like this ff, it's different in its own way!!


DIFFERENT IS GOOD!!!
Update soon please😃👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG..!

Arjun found her!! YAY!! LOVE him!!

But have they met? Why is Arjun behaving so weird?!

OMG... Lots of questions..!! Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Sabia nxt update kab milega dr????????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aks13

Hey Sabia nxt update kab milega dr????????




Actually...now a days, my brain is betraying with me yaar...!

Kuch achcha sa dimaag se nikalta hi nehi...

What to do?


Actually, study pressure ke vaje se sochne ka mauka nehi mil raha hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 27




Arjun just stood still at his place. He couldn't move an inch... He was numb. For a moment he felt that it was just a hallucination. He thought as Riya always ruled his brain and mind, he was seeing her everywhere!




So, he turned back then and there and clenched his eyes shut for some moments.




After a while, when he felt his heart beat had come to a normal level, he opened his eyes and turned slowly...




Nope...Riya wasn't there!



'Riya...what have you done to me!! Kya tum mehsoos bhi nehi kar sakti ke mai tumhe kitna chahta hu? Har taraf sirf tum hi dikhai deti ho mujhe...' Arjun said in mind and started to walk back.


But...wait... He was again seeing her! She was now on the School building...umm...on 2nd floor with a Sister.


Now, Arjun's cop mind started to work. Nope...now that can't be hallucination...definitely!


'I have to find out...' he decided in mind and thought of gathering information about this matter at first. He didn't wanna stand in front of her now.


'If she is my Riya...then why she is here?? Her place isn't here...usse mere sath hona chahiye tha! Kuch toh chut raha hai... I have to dig out the matter...at any cost!'


So, he at first decided to ask the Sister about her.




He waited for the Sister to find her alone and yeah...he got the chance.


Arjun: Hello Sister...


Sister: Hello beta!


Arjun: Sister I need to know something...actually, about someone!


Sis: About whome beta?


Arjun: umm...actually, I saw a lady talking with you a few moments before there...on the 2nd floor. I want to know about her actually...


Sis: ohh... About her? Ok...she is Dimpy...she is a teacher of this missionary school.


Arjun: and...


Sis: and what? Look beta, you r a stranger...and, this information should be enough for you about her...



Arjun: no sister...aap samajh nehi rahi hai... This is not enough...not enough at all!



Actually Arjun was getting too hyper and desperate...so he literally shouted!



Arjun: tell me everything about her!!



Sis: There's nothing more about her! Look...I thought you r a decent guy just asking about a teacher of our School. But, little did I know that you r following her to gather info about her...and to disturb her??? Just get out of here...or else I will call the security!




Arjun understood that he actually behaved so rudely. He shouldn't have behaved like that. So, he requested Sister politely...but, nope, Sister was adamant now.


So, he was compelled to use his Cop identity now...


Arjun: now, tell me everything about her...and I mean it, 'E-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g'!


So, now Sister told him to follow her. Arjun followed her and now, he was in a office room. Sister brought out a record file and gave it to Arjun.


Sister: here is her record file officer. You will get to know everything about her frm here...


Arjun opened the file with shaky hand...



There she was...smiling at him! Actually, her pic!




He read the profile and found that she was an orphan frm a hindu family. There was a birth cirtificate of her with the seal of required authority. Her academic qualifications with certificates... And, many other things that was enough to prove that...she wasn't his Riya! She was Dimpy!


Arjun couldn't stand on his feet anymore...he just slammed on the near by chair...




'Ek choti si umeed ke kiran jala tha...aab wo bhi bujh gaya!' he couldn't hold himself anymore!


He just stood up, said a quick thanks to the sister and rushed out of the school...


He drived the car like a maniac and reachd there...yeah, there, where he lost his lady love...where he lost his breath!


He just ran towards the end of the cliff and shouted...


'Riyaaa...!!!!'


But nope...there was no one who will ans his call with a cute dimple smile, 'Yes Sir!'


After an hour, he reached the hotel, went straight towards Rathod's room and...demanded a medical leave.


~~~FLASHBACK END~~~

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Posted: 12 years ago
Arjun was back again in Manali frm Mumbai...


He was standing in frnt of the mirror. Yeah, in that hotel room, where onece he shared a beautiful moment with his lady love.



He was standing in front of the mirror, with a file in his hand...




He fished out the mobile from his pocket and dialed Sameer's number,


Arjun: hello, Sam...


Sam: haan, bol Arjun.


Arjun: Shree aur Chotu ko lekar bass tu yaha Manali aa ja...


Sam: what happened Arjun? Is everything alright?


Arjun: yeah...actually no...I mean... Tu bass aa ja...


Sam: okay...okay...! Calm down! We are coming...



Arjun cut the call. He was now looking at a pic...



It was Arjun and Riya's pic... Where they were acting as a couple... It was a sweet romantic moment between them which was captured by Shree.




Arjun was furious at Shree for capturing this pic. He even scolded Riya...but for what? Huh...actually he was the one who was loosing himself in Riya's beauty...! But, he didn't want to admit it...moreover, his that feeling of betraying Roshni...


Little did he know that this pic was going to be the best pic of his and Riya!




He was now looking at the pic...Riya was smiling...and her dimple...!! And, Arjun was just lost in her smile!


He hugged the pic and sat on the bed... He didn't know when he dozed of.
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Soon Sameer, Chotu and Shree reached at Manali. They reached at the hotel asap. They all were hell worried for Arjun...




Sameer: what happened Arjun?? Aab to kuch bol


Arjun: bolne ke liye hi bulaya Sam. Chalo, mujhe tum sabko kuch dikhana hai...


They all went towards thAt market place.


Sam: why are we here Arjun? What's...



But, his words remained unfinished because of Shree's voice...



'Riyaa...!!!'



Then and there Sam and Chotu turned towards that direction where Shree was looking at.




There she was...Riya? Or should I say Dimpy?


But, the three didn't know anything about Dimpy. So, definately, according to them, she was Riya!



Sameer, Shree and Chotu were dumbstruk! But, Arjun wasn't. That's didn't go unnoticed by Sam. So, he just looked at Arjun. Arjun was just about to explain, when they again had to turn their head towards HER.


A boy was disturbing a College going girl. The girl was saying him not to follow her...but, it seems he wasn't gonna stop so easily. So, it was clear that, he had to be stopped by someone!




Chotu was just about to go, but Arjun held his hand indicating him to stop.




There she was...now heading towards that boy!



Dimpy: excuse me!


Boy turned his head towards her.


Boy: haaye...bolo janemaan. Tumhare liye to saab excused!


Dimpy: wo saab baad me, kya aapko pata hai uss ladki aapse dur kyun bhaag rahi hai?


Boy: kyun??


Dimpy: aapne joote ko thoda achche se dekhiye, pata chal jayega.



(Actually, she observed that the boy stepped on some dirt, as a result his shoes became dirty!)


Boy: are haan...ye to bohot gandha ho gaya!

Dimpy: wahi to! Waha dekhiye, wo electric post ke niche jo taar jhool raha hai, waha jaake jaldi se joota saaf kar lijiye.


Boy: haan...thik hai, thik hai. Mai jaa raha hu!



So, the boy went there, and started to clean his shoe by the electric wire. He was moving left-right, up-down to clear his shoes.




Here, Dimpy went little far and started to shout; 'Hey bhagwaan!! Aare bhaisaab...dekhiye, wo aadmi ko electric wire se shock laga hai! Koi to bachaiye ussko!'




Then what?? Don't ask me about the poor(!) boy!!


People started to run towards him with wooden stuff. Before he could understnd anything, he was showered by so many hit of wooden stuff! People was thinking that they were hitting him to save frm electric shock! But only SHE knows, who was saved actually!




She just smirked and left frm their leaving the poor(!) guy there!



Shree and Chotu was laughing like mad...just like the old days!


Sam: aur zor se haas lo, taaki yaha pe bhi thoda log jama ho jaye!



Then and there they stopped, but then they again came to the main point, 'Who was she???' and they looked towards Arjun with this question in their eyes.



So was Sameer! And, moreover with another question, 'Why Arjun wasn't shocked by seeing her? Did he know about her before?'


so, Sameer spoke, 'Arjun, do I have to ask you now???'


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Assala mu alaikum! Here's another part... Don't know you are gonna like it or not. But, don't know why I feel like that...actually I'm not satisfied with myself! But, please let me know you are satisfied or not. I don't want just one word appreciation...please! Tell me the truth...! Long comment me gaali bhi de do yaro, to bhi chalega! But, let me know...! Will be waiting!!
Edited by BDCTG - 12 years ago

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