ArIya FF: Dur se hi sehi(DISCONTINUED) - Page 55

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Sabi
yr u always made me cry
awesum
u r an amazing writer
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beautiful n heart touching
love u
tbj
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kya aapko pata hai, meri saare frnds and family mujhe 'Sabi' bulate hai.
Actually it's my nick name. Thanks for calling me that.(anjane me hi sehi!)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay!!!!!!! She's ALIVE!! Nd Arjun FOund her!!!
Isse kehte hain Saccha Pyaar!!!
Hayee.. I miss her statisctics so MUCH!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's been long, I read your stuff...I missed a lot!
Just read all the updates.
Thanks for PMing me, about this!
Continue soon.
Is Dimple, Riya...by any chance?


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Posted: 12 years ago
hi sabia🤗......itna achha ariya ff koi chupa kar rakhta hai kya😭😭😭😭...thank god atleast u pmed me😃😃😃...i read all the 25 parts togethr😆😆😆...they are awe...riya is just amazing lady...ab next time jaldi jaldi update samajhee ya samhau???😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it so so much
kya sach me riya apni memory kho chuki hai
ya sabse dur rehnekeliye aise behave kar rahi hai
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: life93


<font color="#990066" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hi sabia🤗...<div></div>...itna achha ariya ff koi chupa kar rakhta hai kya😭...thank god atleast u pmed me😃😃😃...i read all the 25 parts togethr😆😆😆...they are awe...riya is just amazing lady...ab next time jaldi jaldi update samajhee ya samhau???😆</font>



aare yaar...chupake nehi rakhi thi. Bass, pm karke disturb nehi karna chahti thi... Lekin himmat karke ek pm kar hi diya!
But I have to admit, u have a solllid patience capacity... Warna ek sath iss story ka 25 chapter padhke sehen kar pana...it's not a matter of joke yaar... Mai khud ke story ke update edit karte waqt hi bore ho jati hu!
Anyways, thanks for loving it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plss update soon.
Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey so sorry for the late comment./...!!!
and the update was superb...!!!
awww everyone remembering riya...!!! they are missing her so much...!!!
looks like dimpy hi riya hai???? and whom did the girls met, it was dimpy right?
and arjun did he find any clue kya??
continue soon...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Fascinating concepy dr.

Read it in one go.

All the updates r fabulous.

U potray each n evry character n their emotions exceptionally well.

Riya is the strongest character n u written her part beautifully.

Loved trio bonding n masti n Choree's care n concern for her.

Riya had suffered so much which is way beyond my imagination.

She's so selfless n full of life n made evryone smile, even that Akdu sometimes.

Loved the way choree teased her about Arjun.

Loved Riya's dialogue whe she tried to console the victim's husband but Arjun misunderstood her n blasted on her vry badly n maed her remind her horrible past unknowingly.

Samjun convo was emotional. He tried to made him realize tht he hd to move on before its too late. He is really a true friend.

Loved Riya's mind blowing ideas to teach those stupid boys a lesson.

Wht the h*ll!!!!!! He didn't wanted to accept his feelings for her n caz of tht he vented out all his frustations n anger on her.

Loved the way Arjun applied one of Riya's idea n got rid of tht girl.

The intro of Khala n 4 ETF boys was nice.

Thy all r shocked to see her totally shattered n lost in her own world. Feel really sad for Riya.

Khala's zindagi wala dialogue was really touchy.

He was really a confusing guy as he always kept the ques aside to answer thm later.

Shree's dialogue of electric wire about Riya was funny.

Wow she surprised all of thm caz she behaved so normally even after all tht.

Goa case was awesome.

Poor gal. While catching Suleman she remembered her brother's cruel death n caz of tht she started behaving strangly.

Bathroom scene was so much senti.

Rathod's bhagnay ki speed wala dialogue n Arjun's shock dene ki ooth wala dialogue was hilarious .

Loved Arjun's reaction when Riya got shoot. He really behaved like a lover.

She was really brave. The way she killed Sikander n took her revenge was simply marvelous.

Riya's past was so horrible. H w she beared tht much pain n still smile n gave happiness to others.

Ariya's little moments in hospital whn she was unconscious was emotional n sweet.

Awww Rathod teased Arjun.

Omg Riya was not responding on anything not even Choree's talks but atlast Arjun made her respond n tht too in his own Rawte style. Thts great.

Wow Arjun tried to kiss her in his anger.

Riya's marriage proposal incident was really hilarious.

Loved Arjun n Roshini's convo. Atlast she made him to accept his love for Riya.

She wanted transfer but just caz of Arjun, she withdraw her application. She was a true lover who can go to any extent for his love.

Lift scene n Rathod's failed attempt was hilarious n mind blowing.

Keys problem n Ariya romantic moments r lovely.

Wow Riya was kidnapped by Altaf n was badly hurt.

Her last lines to Arjun before she jumped frm the cliff n Arjun's breakdown was heart wrenching. Tht moment was so emotional.

Wow she also killed Altaf before she fell in to the river.

Awww He kept all her things as thy were n cherished thm. Thts really sweet.

Who was Dimple????? Who was the girl which Aisha n Liza talking about?????

I think she is Riya.

Cant wait to read further caz its getting more n more exciting.

Plzzz Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
didu i have no words to describe aapne jo likha... love the story alot!!!
specially humari dimpled doll ka "super special veja"... puri story aaj hi padh li
loved riya ka aunty ko diya hua jhatka n rathore's 1 ghanta wala dialouge alot... love this story alot... pls pls update soon na didu

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