OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#1

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#931

Oh..how much I love this story...and nows it's ending...well loved it immensely...

And looking forward to your next story...love your writing!

Thx so much...for your amazing work..

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Oooh, whats cooking in the Captain's mind ?

Payal's love ishtory was soo.. sooo.. it reminded me of 27 Dresses. Only this was waaay better. So nice!

Varunji, sorry, Vikramji's transformation from the shy guy to the shameless flirt was amazing. Kiss Payal's face of, please!

Louvely. Can't believe its coming to an end Four delectable and amazing men in one story, you know how rare that is? A huge loss to womankind.. the end of this series. Sigh.

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Disha

@dishashah4176

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#933

gr8 update such a relief for u asr lolzzz

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deepa

@deeswarna

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#934

really glad u did not forget about payal and vickram and u gave them a wonderful ending!

loved the way payal was talking to vickram, asking him the difference between him and his onscreen character!

lol that was totally khushi, getting excited not because that payal was tying the knot with vickram but because she was going to be attending her loved start wedding!

awesome writing:)

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Super gud 1 Semanti :D
It ws so much fun readin abt Khushi gettin all worked up n poor Payal had to face the wrath..
Naughty Vikram huh.. ;) :D

Good riddance indeed :D
Finally Arnav cud sigh! :D

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#936

I love the Captain's single minded focus. He no like Vicky,does he? Can blame him not.

I love VIkram. Are you sure you cannot write more on the Payal-Vikram story? That would be fun!!

And this is going to end :( I love stories that end in time because that preserves the magic (yes, i'm taking a shot at myself :P) but saying goodbye is tough.

I'm officially sad.

Bas.

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#937

i guess...i had missed the 11th part before...
now...when i am read it...
i strangely found a similarity with my grandparents love story too...
they are not my direct grandparent..
my grandma was a hindu...where as my grandpa was muslim...
their love story was an epic one...
thank you so much for the story...
loved it..!!!