OS Series:The Life of Capt. & Mrs. Raizada#1 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Hey Semanti...*hugs tightly*...
I.am so so so sorry for not commenting on the last three updates of WAUFMIO...i had assignments to complete and coould not comment...I am Sorry...
WOW !!!! You finished my story and My Raizada got married too..:(
I am terribly going to miss the story...

Coming to this OS...
I loved it and adored it...
Khushi curled up on his chest, his arms around her, his hand strokng her hair...Awww...how adorable...
Their is something very domestic about this position...

Arnavji is sexy...;) I always loved it when Khushi called him that...
I love Capt.Raizada ttoo much Semanti...:(
Loving this post marriage series you are going to write already...

You are an awesome writer Semanti...
Also you know I love you...
Waiting for the nextt OS...
Take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
AWWW!

SO cute!

Adorable.

Loved it. Totally :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
I would add the ji just to vex him when I want something done :D

Such a cute OS! I was dreading WAUFMAIO withdrawals this morning, and this came as a pleasant, sexy surprise.

Adonis with a heart of gold, what an apt description for Capt. Raizada. Waise, since the time we have been acquainted with him, he hasn't flown even once! Not that I am complaining, I call never get enough of Arnavji :D

Lovely!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Me likes...im so glad u didnt stop with waufmaio...this os was awesome!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
🤣
that was funny that transformed to a blush-worthy update..
Yeah,i remember that dialogue.. 'Khushi dotes on her Arnav JI' from expectations..

Haan! Hum bhi 'ji' lageyege jab il be married!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Was smiling like anything reading this OS!

Good job Semanti!

Always it's the transition from Arnavji to Arnav and here it's the other way round! Loved it!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Yay your back!

Damn never realized how sexy "ji" really does sound!

Loved it two, three, four much!!!
Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
wonderful part...its make sense
You write very good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
it was short but cute...hey m going to spoil my xams co of u...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey that was a first. everybody is removing the ji and u go about adding the ji😆

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