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Posted: 18 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rajeev1

😭 kal karungi hehehe 😛



me will be waiting for tommorrow.. please kal karna ok....😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
AAJ 8 HOGAYI but u didnt continue


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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
sorrrrrrrrry for the delay herez kth duitiiiiiiiiii

so it ended jahan charu aur akshat ki shaadi ki baat chal rahi thi.......

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vasu:..(in her room walking up and down)...lalit...tum har bar muej hi tokte ho..aj dekha tumne..
dekha woh sujal mere saath kaise baat kar raha tha

lalit:..vasuuu...jab tum kashish k saath aise rawaiya rakhogi to phir...
vasu:..to phir kya??....KYAA?...(lalit holds his head hehe)...jo kashish chahiye gi wohi hoga....koi usse rokne wala nahi...
...kashish na ho gayi mano koi asman se utri pari hai.....jo kabhie kuch galat kar hi nahi sakti....galat to hamesha mein hi hoti ho...
sab ko mere andar hi buaryi dekhti hai....hain na..

lalit:.haan..
vasu:.kyA??
lalit:..mera matlab....vasuu..tum kashish k bare mein galat sochti ho....isiliye sab tumhe bhi galat hi samjte hain
vasu sits on the bed ghuse mein...

veena:..(enters)...bhai sahab sahi keh rahe hain vasu..
vasu:..not again..(she looks away)..
veena:..izzat dene se hi izzaat milti hai....
vasu:..o veena..muje koi shauk nahi tumhari us ladli bahu k talwe chatne ka...(she crosses her arms)
veena:...tum ab tak kashish ko samaj nahi payi...
vasu:..(she jorofyies her hands infront of veena mocking her)....samjhna bhi nahi chahti mein usse...
veena just nods her head in dissapointment and leaves......vasu still left angry hehehe

.....

it was almost evening....aur sujal ka koi ata pata nahi tha...

kashish:..(palying with rohan...)..keh k gaye the k kashish...aj jaldhi aonga....aur abhi tak nahi aye...
rohan makes a baby sound...
kashish:..haan..tum bhi usi ka saath dena.....tum dono baap bete naa...(she cuuchi coos rohan...)
kashish:..kitni bar cell try kiya hai....yeh sujal bhi na....itna laparwa kabse ho gaya..

kashish talks to herself all the time..while rohan finally goes to sleep....
kashish:. (dials office ka number par koi nahi uthata...then she tries sujal's mobile...us peh bhi koi respond nahi)

veena:..(enters).aray kashish...tum soyi nahi abhi tak?
kashish:..mama woh...bus sujal ka wait kar rahi thi....abhi tak nahi aye..
veena:..(smiles aur uske sar peh haath phirti hai)...kisi ki nazar na lage tum dono ko..
kashish smiles.......

isi tarah waqt guzarta hai...par sujal nahi ata....kashish falls asleep on the sofa...
finally darwaza khulta hai...and sujal ahista se kamre mein dakhil hote hain...
he sees rohan is sleeping and so is kashish.....he smiles at her..

sujal wlaks near kashish and puts his bag and coat down....kashish was deep in sleep...(ehehehe yaar muje khud neend
araha hai hehehehe )....sujal slowly comes near her and touches her cheeks....with his fingers..

sujal then comes forward and kises her forhead...kashish blinks aur neend se ankh khul jati hai...
sujal smiles at her.....while kashish hugs him tighly
sujal:..kya huwa??
kashish:..sujal...(still hugging him)...
sujal:..(wrapps his arms around her).....dar gayi kya? (smiles)
kashish:....bahut bura sapna dekha
sujal:...bure sapne kabhie sach nahi hote....aur tum idhar kyun so rahi ho
kashish moves back:..woh....tumhare intezar karte karte kab neend agayi pata hi nahi chala..
sujal:..sorry...aj der ho gayi na...
kashish:.hmmmm...
sujal kisses kashish on her forehead...
kashish:..kahan reh gaye the?
sujal:....woh yunhi...office ka kaam..(fixes his sleeves)
kashish:..office phone kiya tha mein ne..wahan kisine uthaya nahi
sujal:..haan woh.....mein akshat k saath tha...uske ghar peh kaam kar rahe the..(he opens his tie..jo ke phas gayi thi.......kashish looks at him....struggling...finally agaye ake helps him realse his tie....
sujal:..thanx...
kashish just smiles
kashish:..sujal woh....
sujal:..(puts a finger on her lips):....baqi sawal subah (smiles)....tum thaki hui ho...so jao ab
kashish smiles at his concern
sujal picks her up in his arms....and takes her to bed....they were both lying down...kashish had
her head on sujal's chest.....while sujal was sehlaying her back....and playing with her hair lolx

kashish:..sujal...koi parehsani hai?
sujal:..nahi...
kashish:...mujse kuch chupa to nahi rahe na?
sujal:....mein chupana bhi chaon to chupa nahi sakta...(tighens his grip)....
kashish:...(smiles and closes her eyes)...i love u....
sujal:..(smiles weakily)...me too....(turns off the lights..while his eyes are still open)

sujal:..(to himself)...na chahte huwe bhi chupana parega...shayad tum yeh bardasht na kar pao kashish..
(he looked tensed...but anyhow...finally went off to sleep....hehehe

ab mein bhi chali...bari neend arahi hai........yeh kya raaz hai jo sujal chupa raha hai...woh bhi kashish se
aisa kyuuuuuuun?...kya kashish jan payegi??..kya un dono k beech duri bare gi...etc etc jane ke liye
next week tak wait keejiye hehehehe luv ya all...plz coomentofyyyyyyy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
WOW!!!fantastic parttt i loved ittt bht MASSST THA 😆


OMG!i hope the secret reveals out soon meray pait main gurr gurrr ho rahi hai bcz i cant handlee ittt and plus i am hungry since i AM FASTINGG!!!! 😆

dont take longggggggg plzzzz CONT SOOON 😳



Saraa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
👏 abe farah ki bachi tu jaldise cont karo warna mein tujhe tapka doongi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
farah yaara..tumhare liye main comments doon tho kya doon yaara..you are just toooooooo goodddddddddd.... aur tumhari writing ka tho koi jawaab nahi.. your writing is simply awesome..brilliant...fantastic... superb... just wow.... mind blowing..mind blasting..... ek dum bindaas..... totally raapchik...i have always love reading your writing and as usual i loved your writing this time too.... the part was very very damn coollllllllllllllll....... very very very damn well written.. each and every scene was just soo apt.... you are just toooooooooo goodddddddddddd.... 👏
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pehli baat woh vasu is such a irritating character... kabhi kabhi tho mujhe us vasu pe itna ghussa aatha hain ki jee kartha hain ki main vasu ko ek thappad maroon... kabhi bhi kashish ke liye achcha nahi soch sakthi.. GOD...irritating.... 😡
hmm..tho ab shaam ho gayi & kashish is waiting for sujal..ab yeh sujal kahaan reh gaya.. aur woh phone bhi nahi utta raha hain.. me thinking ki sujal kahaan phas gaya tha... me very confused... 😕
the scene between veena & kashish was very nice.... a typical saas-bahu scene... 😃
ab finally kashish sujal ka intezaar karthe karthe wahii sofa pe so gayi.. kashish itni sweet aur pyaari biwi hain... 😃 tho finally sujal aa hi gaya... the scene between sujal kashish was very nice.. it showed the love & care they have for each other.. sujal kissing kashish... then kashish removing his tie.. sujal carrying kashish to the bed & telling her baaki sawaal baad mein tum thak gayi hogi... then sujal , kashish lying on the bed.. unke beech ki baatein....hye...hye.... all the scene were just tooo sweet-tweet.... 😳
lekin ab me thinking about the last scene.. sujal kashish se aisi kaunsi baat chupa raha hain aur woh kaunsi baat hain joh kashish bardhast nahi kar payegi... me breaking my head thinking about what is the matter.... me very very damn confused.. 🤢
lekin joh bhi ho i hope jaldi sort out ho jaye.. aur sujal kashish ke beech sab theek ho.. & me sure sab theek hoga....😉
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aur haan farah dear main ek baat tho batana hi bhool gayi.. aur woh yeh baat hain ki is part mein anjali nahi thi tho mujhe bada achcha laga.. dil ko sukoon mil gaya.....hahahahahahahahahahaha..😆
ab please next part jald se jald post karna.. me will be eagerly waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
PLZZZ CONT SOOOOOON ME WAITING EAGERLYY TO READ THE NEXT PARTTT!!!!



Saraa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
farah yaara please continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
awwww...thank u everyone...love u all.....will postthe next part...aheem....sooon hehehe
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Posted: 18 years ago
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UFF!!wen is ur sooon coming!!!!!!



Saraa

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