Virman FF- US = LOVE Chapter 6 - Page 6

ME first ME first😊😊... RES... Will UNRES after reading it... in my IF journey till now this is the first update in which m the first one to comment... m sooo sooo sooo sooo happy... will give u a longer comment soon...😛😛
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UNRES...😉😉
Loved the starting scene n convo of virman,... they were just... u beautifully wrote this part... n 4 this clap clap 4 👏👏... loved the self respect 4 maanvi she don't like that someone pay 4 her... good going dear...awww waooo waooo waooo maanvi danced... was just imaginning her dancing... great choice of song dear... loved it...😳😳😳 just loved this dialogue ("Adam hands off, Whoever virat's with is his property")...
Loved the ending scene ufff a little romantic was just fab dear... loved it to the core😛😛... awww the kiss uff ufff ufff too hawwwttt... hhahahhaha great dear...😊😊
Thanxx 4 the pm.. n continue soon dear...

awsum update
loving ur ff
sort of gt adictd to it nw
cntinue soon

WOW yaar too good love it...Too good..

awesome update ya jst loved it :)
This one is sumthng really different they are jst flirting and manvi is too strong and i like tht :)
I like the romance and love the way this story is shaping up its gonna be fun :D
Pls pls update soon and also thanx alot for the pm

Interesting story yaar
awesome update
continue sooon do pm me

OMG!! I missed the character sketch, promo and chapter! I was late :( anw I shall give the reply for all now :)
Character sketch - interesting! It caught my attention very quickly as it's pretty different from the characters from the show. I like this characters better in a way ! ;)
Promo - what can I say after reading the promo I was hoping you updated it with something cause it was so captivating that I wanted to knows what's the scene like for that.
Update - awsomeee! I didn't want it to end, I liked it how manvi dances to the song and oh her thinking - of paying for her own drinks! Virat liking to attention was so possible! Hahah and manvi not behind attention was good too!
Overall it's being going really well! I love the story. Update soon! Ill try to not miss it and be late! Argh. Thanks once again :)

Jit

Amazing update... 😊 ...
Loved the manvi new avatar... 😉 ...virat toh gaya kaam se... 😆 ...
Really loved it... 😊 ...loved the attitude of virman... 😊 ...
Continue soon if possible...thank u so much for the pm...

Superb update 👏👏👏.. Manvi is so much different here.. Loved her bold attitude.. So Virat is lil possessive of her.. Loved the whole song and dance sequence.. Virat was completely shocked after watching her new avatar.. No wonder he wanted to spend some alone time with Manvi 😉.. Loved the update.. Please continue soon.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 😃

wow it was awesome update!!! da characters of dis ff r quite different.. im looking forward 2 hw da story will shape up... i loved manvi's character a lott... plzzz continue soon nd thnx fr da pm😊