The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

HEYLOO PEOPLE!!!

This was my favorite part! Please read and reply..I want to know detailed reaction of all of you. If you guys do not comment next part will be very short! I mean it!

CHAPTER THIRTEEN

Please, Comment.

And those who think they are being added and now they do not need to reply, let me tell you, this is the last chance. I will remove/block the ones who dint reply me back. Then again they wont be able to see my blog. Then do not complain to me okay.

I have warned you all to comment.

Shru: shru where are you! You have been missing since long! Where are you yaar…I have not seen you!! tumhara birthday aa ke chala gaya tumne bataya bhi nahi!! well this update is dedicated to shru!!!

happy birthday girl!!🥳

Has anybody seen shru aka funkylicious anywhere…if yes..please tell me..(uski khabar leni hai 😉)

MUSKAAN.

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

first i wanna to say thanks my dr ...for updating a long part...n then thank u so much dr for pm..u hv. no idea how i madly waited for ur update...
now com to ur update

thank u thank u for sach a lvly update...u made me cry yr...
ohh poor arjun father blame him..his mother death...
realy like the convo bw arjun n his mother...realy feel bad arjun. mothers death his realy scared..its realy tugh to read..
arjun crying like a baby n hide himself..behind his bed..realy tuching my heart..i m crying after reading this..cant belive he is same arjun..
like the way how arjun's father..
compose him..
n after that
ohhh rathor make tea for arjun..n suger may be double baar..ohhh frs ho to ehse jo hamesha sath ho,
arjun disscus about riya n sameer guiding n teasing waooo...
n the caughing scence is also very nice

ohhh arjun ne sik ko free ker diya...but why yr stil confuse..now i m realy scared about riya..hop every think is fine soon...

hummm...bushing..how can i say...ohhh
abhi bhi main apne apko compose nahi ker paa rahi hoon...just simply say...that scence is realy grate..so finaly arjun knew what the reason behind her behaviour...

thanks dr for such a sweet ,emosional n careing n romentic update..plz update soonnn...
i wanna to kno now what will sik done...

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

hayla i forgot to comment 😆

sorry Muskaan😳

First my heart went out to Arjun😭

how he must have suffered when he lost his mother and have his father blaming him for the murder😭

and how alone he must have been, plus the guilt killing him everyday😭

but loved when his father came back to him and finally embraced him😭

loved the way Arjun said he didnt care if Riya was still a virgin or not, it shows the depth or his love for her, and not solely for her body😳

and then the say he convinced Riya to reject his amorous hands😆. had Riya been safe and healthy and sane, even then she'd have shied at the pace he was moving😳

and finally he went to release Sikander, i think he wants to prove something to Riya, hope his plan works out, and nothing happens to Riya😭

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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Naga25889

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Iam sorry. I was one among those silent readers.
I was new to indiaforums, didn't understand the meaning of PM, Buddy e.tc
I loved reading all your previous parts of The Fading ButterFly
They were wonderful!!! Never read an amazing story lyk urs.
Loved it a lot
The creativity was at its peak

Can u pls send me the links?
I would surely comment on them
Sorry once again

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Kareena1994

@Kareena1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Hey I couldn't read it as I tried my login and all.
It's still not letting me through.

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

fantastic update :) loved it

flashback was awesome :) loved each and every bit of it... very well written and emotional...

i had tears in my eyes while reading it 😭 it was so emotional

arjun was planing to run away and kaka found it and told his mother..

loved this line "Not everybody feels lonely when they are alone. coz sometimes these moments spent with self are the moments of self-discovery"

felt so bad for arjun's mother... she was so helpless..

the way he lost his mother was so heart wrenching 😭

mr. rawte blamed him for her death

so that was the reason behind arjun's rough behavior towards his dad

thank god riya is fine else he would have died :(

love the part when arjun was holding the sweater and was crying..

the father-son reunion was awesome :)

awww mr. rawte accepted all four of them as his sons 😃 that part was so cute and love when he said "My other two sons are out there eavesdropping on us"😆 and then the hugging part was so cute..

rathore made tea for arjun :) loved their conversation...

that sick sikander molested her 😡 he is so disgusting..

so riya's desperation was because of all this.. she was scared of sikander..

arjun's plan to find out why riya is behaving like this actually worked..

finally she told him all her fears..

Arjun set him free 😲 but he he did this only to cure riya..

and now he is going to kill sikander in front of her to end her fear

hope arjun kills sikander soon

thanks for the PM and blog link :)

can't wait to read more

eagerly waiting for next part

continue soon

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Muskan pls mail me d chapter..
i send u a pm..
pls dear..!

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Purva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Nice chapter muskaan

long and amazing update 👍🏼

liked Arjun's FB scenes ...d way he lost his mother

the part was very emotional n nice;y written

really liked d way he reacted wen his dad came ...i m happy that father - son finally spoke wid each other

seriously liked Sameer- n Arjun's conversation

n den Ariya...its d fear of sikander which was making her so desperate abt her relation wid arjun

Finally she admitted it

n den Arjun SET HIM FREE...even my reaction was 😲

he could have easily killed him

but den i liked Arjun's viewpoint...

yes he s correct in his thinking

waiting for what actually happens

nice chapter

PS: if u find shru...tell me also ,,,Mujhe bhi scold karna hain usko

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Naga25889
Iam sorry. I was one among those silent readers.
I was new to indiaforums, didn't understand the meaning of PM, Buddy e.tc
I loved reading all your previous parts of The Fading ButterFly
They were wonderful!!! Never read an amazing story lyk urs.
Loved it a lot
The creativity was at its peak

Can u pls send me the links?
I would surely comment on them
Sorry once again

hey...i am so glad to have a new reader...but you will have to comment on all the parts that are been posted on the forum...then only i will be able to add you in my blog..😳😳