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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

wow, there def seems to be some past that ties them down, but how come he identifies her and she doesnt,
she really seems to be feisty, loved the dia-geet debate ...
the story is getting very intriguing and keeping me hooked to the updates, leaving mewith a feeling of yearning for more..😉

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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

sorry I didnt read at start. I was so engrossed in ILWE. this story also very good.but please geet-arjun big NO!!!!! please arjun ka naam bhi replace kardo!!!!!

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Omg Omg

U really come back . When u come back. ohhh

thank u thank u so much. how r u? kaha gum ho gaye the?

Pls tell if u have update or complete pls tell me and send me the update link. I m desperate to read the ff

I received your last pm on 9^th May 2011 I though you not com back again. Pls send me you face book and Blog id or link

Plsss plsss I m waiting here

Love u take care and bhul mat jana

😳

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Sneha Sherin Raju

@SnehaMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Awesome
waiting 4 d Arjun mystery to unfold

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

superb update

loved it

thanx for the pm dear

cont soon

plz have a look and pen on ur other works

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

waiting for their past .. awesome part !!!

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Hi Reet,I am Avi... Nice to be reading your work and this time I get to interact as you write...

What to say about this update...

There is so much here..

The push and pull of their egos clashing.. The you chase-i chase.. was fun.

Geet's past and losing her family at an early age sort of accounts for the no holds barred type of girl she is. Very nicely rounded her character with this update.. Loved the memories of her father in here. Made me feel for her.

Arjun is still a little in shadows as of now.

The debate was very interesting and you could feel the sparks fly when he jumps in bringing out his personal wounds to show. Turning the tables and complimenting only Dia to show his anger... hmmm.. guy is not entirely unaffected as he would like her to believe..

The last scene with the music playing was beautiful. Seems like both are seeking the music in their lives as of now.

Very well described and written. Its only two chapters and yet I await some more eagerly.

Thanks for updating Reet.

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Thanx for the info dear..

Cumg to the update i think arjun noes geet's family, mainly geet's grandpa.. and he had judged her character almost like him.. But thru debate he got to c a diff woman whose thots are different, precise like him.. this is getting more mysterious.. i m loving the way story is developing.. eagerly waiting for the next part...

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Hey reet...I have not read this one but i will catch up with it...

PS: In love with enemy is my fav FF...I have read the entire FF during my Final CA exams...wherein i had to study for 16 hrs a day..i was sitting and reading ILWE...u have no idea how engrossed i was...was almost in the verge of failing...So that makes me more delighted that ur continuing the FF...MY most FAV FF on maaneet...:*

*Dancing in happiness*