Arhi FF: Desert Heat #3 *New Thread, pg 149!!*

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

arnav bare chested...riding a horse...!! what the fish... i can't help my gutter mind...
awesome update hon...

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

Continue to love this story. Also like to comment on the author note first.

I live and breathe Arhi and will only read Arhi stories so as long as you write Arhi...I will continue to read. In fact, I am waiting for some news on Shamelesss from you because I have heard so much about it and want to read😆.

You have truly started a majestic love story here set in a fantastic rugged landscape that leaves a lasting impression. Arnav is such a compelling character...a dark prince...who is one of a kind. Love how he covered her with his cloak and then soothes her to sleep when she becomes restless. The next morning his swearing tirade where he adds a few extra choice words was really funny and how he is so attracted to her and pretending like he does not care and yet noting her every gesture and emotion.

Her confusion at her reactions to him and inner turmoil at these feeling is so well written. He actually is the only person who has shown any caring towards her safety since her parents died and in addition, actually gives her a choice to make her own decisions...This is unparalleled freedom for the caged life she has led.

Looking forward to more...

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

NEW THREAD NOW UP: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3479867/arhi-ff-4-desert-heat-new-thread-link-pg-144

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

brilliant update
really loved it when Arnav got un-reasonably jealous and possessive of khushi with his friends
can't wait to read more
thanx for the PM:)

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

That was too good, Tina! The whole update from beginning to end was an insight of how these two feel the irresistible pull and are trying to ignore it.
I like the whole concept.. when Khushi sat on the Stallion, it reminded me of Jhansi ki Rani attire coz I thought that would be very convenient for her to sit on a stallion... lol

As I said before, I genuinely feel great that you started something like this.. am sure its no way easy to write historical stuff but you're doing it great.

Waiting to read more.

-V

PS: Sorry for such a small comment but this year is packed with exams, exams, work and exams for me. 😳

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

Oh! I forgot to mention that precap looks wickedly sensual ;)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

awesome update..nice...😊

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1008

oooh ASR jealousss...!! i loved it...arnav isn't realizing why khushi is behaving the way she is...but could't help feel at peace when she smiled at him...and poor khushi...her and her scandalous thoughts...😉

i lovee Aman!!!

and waht did you sayyy? that we will stop reading arhi?!!!! seriously? never!!! Arhi was once in lifetime dreamm...thats a fact that we don,t get to see it ...a chemistry so exploding.. and there are a very few ff's which are able to create such passion in them which threatens to consume not only them but also the readers with its spontaneous combustion...this is one of them...and you ARE going to keep on writing this and many more...right?right? right!!!

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1009

Sorry for late comment🥱

Awesome update

Loved it!!!

Arnav's description towards Khushi was beautiful

Khushi is now bonding well with Arnav's friend which irks Arnav because she is not comfortable with him,not even having any normal talk...Arnav bitwa there is a diff btw u and ur team mate for Khushi,Arnav don't know that he is provoking the new feelings to Khushi which was alien to her prior from the meet to Arnav...Khushi is surprised that she slept well😆,Arnav knows the reason for it,of course he will be smirking since he was the reason for her nice sleep...

Arnav's jealousy is always worth to see.

Precap-Think so as Arnav will be moving fastly due to his temper or may say jealousy,the horse in which Khushi is will also start moving fastly following Arnav's as u mentioned it follows Arnav's Stallion like a puppy follows..Aur hona Kya,Hero hoga na apne Stallion pe betalega...this is What I understoon with my little brain which can happen in next update said by u..

Continue soon..😊

Edited by vs_2706 - 12 years ago