SS-The Blue Lie*CHPTR 6 PGE 86* 07/8 - Page 24

Originally posted by: jeb1

wow nice update

pls cont soon

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Originally posted by: A2ZS_arhi

just read da prologue it was quite similar to da film mujhse dosti karoge bt den da first part was different so i suppose da story is different

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Yes, the story will be different.

Originally posted by: truptscool

Awesome update..
Loved it!!!!
Thnx for the pm..
Continue soon...

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Originally posted by: crizal

ohh gosh itz soo thrilling chappy
i m glad u r back wid dhamaka 😆
yeh neal toh bohoth baddy types hai
where is my hot typos Arnav [:")]

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U really think so?
Ahh thankx I lik it when I come back with dhamaka :P
Our hotwa will come in next update. :D

Originally posted by: saima4744

omg🤗😉.

thanks u for lovely update.

God bless u.

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God bless u as well.

Originally posted by: Akorshi

it was nice part...

like the bonding of la n khushi...

my comment on ur update page...😆

that was fr prologue...but i noticed it nw...

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Lol yea I saw that when I posted my chapter. But koy baat nai. :P

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Hey nice post dear!!!

So, neal wants Lav's property!!! Right from this age of 12.

Interesting!!!

~Dee~

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Yes, neal is after lav's property.

Originally posted by: jessjazz

MDK? A little different since Neal is in your story!

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Yes, its different from the movie.

Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH

nice one, loved the rapport which Khushi and Lavanya shared between them, loved reading it, eagerly awaiting the next part.👍🏼

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Originally posted by: Maddy1270

khushi is very mature for her age and values friendship and all it entails whereas lavanya seems to take advantage of friends... she seems a bit self-absorbed, dismissing friends when something catches her attention[at least that's the first impression!]: first she puts off khushi for piya and thenneal for khushi...neal's aside was very filmy, though it gave us an insight into what to expect...however, I must say that a twelve-year-old plotting to put a wedge between friends so as to get someone'sproperty seems a tad melodramatic! awaiting future developments!

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U hVe a really good 1st impression. =)