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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

finallly updated😃
thanx alott for updating 😊

the update was amazing ...⭐️👏
virat admiring manvi throughout the party how she was getting bored and frustrated ...
seeing her and smiling and totally lost in her beauty
that was really cute 😊

then kinda blackmailing her tht we can go and spend time together on bed 😛

confused on sudden entry of viren's character...

update soon
and do pm me

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Onc again I'm in love with ur story! Love the way the story is moving. I like it that you did not made the couple so lovely dovely but kind of starange yet attractive :p n again I love this virat :p. At this moment it shows that virat doesn't lOve her the way a husband should do or idk may be In the state of attraction n crush. Looking forward to how the story will shift n manal's accepting virat n his love. I really wanna see some rage high drama n action :p n part 5 was cool u introduced new character which will play a different story n I'm really excited about it. Do pm when you update next will wait for it! Rite now waiting for The Time of my life's update <3 LOVE that FF way too much

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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

like always it was fabulous.

loved it pls continue soon.

pls update venice and pls pls pls give me link

.i am going to cry if u din't give me link

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

loved this part...i am loving the subtle interplay of emotions that virat and maanvi hav begun to indulge in...virat obviously loves her..at least in physical terms...

i just loved these words...".- the chestnut orbs clashed with whiskey ones-"

and then these were just beyond awesome..."He leaned closer as the first encounter of her scent touched his senses- Inhaling the potent lavender scent that sent his mind into frenzy."

like i hav said before i just love the sensuality and physicality of this story...and you explore it so well too...that Ozair guy likes maanvi too...hawww...you did say messes and twists...viren's entry was good too...

now waiting to see how these new developments unfold...

take care...😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

awsm update... looks like u r gonna bring some fantastic twists in the story... will be waiting fr ur next update... ur writing skills nd words choices r great...

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Cintila

@Cintila

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Oh wow elena u updated. The update was great as usual. Loved the starting. Poor manvi getting bored...loved virat too. I am confused whether virat really loves manvi or as manvi thinks he is only interested in having her and once he gets what he wants he'll leave her ?😕 whatever it is it makes the story even more interesting to read. Would love to read further and yes i love it whenever he tease her about sharing the bed lol😆😉

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esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

lovd it elenor :D

thhe starting was great... love the way u described mannu getting bored in the party lmaooo :p

hmmm... now am interested to know whether virat really loves her or not... very interesting concept :D

anywayz love the way he teases her :p naughty viru ;)

keep it up :)

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Awesome...👍🏼~! Like Manal and Virat's little moment tgether in the party...n then Viren...din expect him in here...but then he seems a bad boy here...waiting for the story to unfold...Waiting for Manal to open up with Virat only if he generously allows...😃 Thanks for the PM Elena...~!

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Kirti

@kirti.taarey

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

hey E
firstly i want to tell wat i like d most in this part...
that's mannu's description...weather it was clothes..accessories..fringes...
her saari...her earrings ... the way our viru boys drooling over her...
every thing was just wow...
the way he said BEAUTIFUL...wah uuhhh...
n here comes viren...the indeed bad boy...
E is this jeevika's character whom u named priya...???

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: kirti.virman
hey E
firstly i want to tell wat i like d most in this part...
that's mannu's description...weather it was clothes..accessories..fringes...
her saari...her earrings ... the way our viru boys drooling over her...
every thing was just wow...
the way he said BEAUTIFUL...wah uuhhh...
n here comes viren...the indeed bad boy...
E is this jeevika's character whom u named priya...???

No, Jeevika was shown in the 2nd and 3rd chapter as Virat's sister. Priya is Viren's new PA