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Posted: 11 years ago
finally
u updated
yayy
i just love it
awww their first meeting
their confession
poor jeevka
hating dr manam more :@
this update was written perfectly
jus like professionals :)
please continue soon
and dont u dare delay
and best of luck fr ur boards
and thnks alot fr this <3 love u <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
its lovely <333
continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Im really sorry for commenting inti late this is because of my net it has been down from last month still not fine ...
Coming to your ipdate.. Ghosh it was damn damn amaizng you so perfectly man! Sachii and you know how much u madeu me awaited for this update love every bit of it!
Hope everything gets fine soon between Virika want longgg update to next part please do it soon
Sorry im not able to comment because of my net werna i love commenting sachiii im huge fan of ur ff
Its simply fantastic!!




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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys , i am back with the update ..to be honest i am not liking the response to this FF and so i may complete this story fast if i do not get a good response.. i gave u all the longest update and i dont even get 30 likes n 1 page of comments after sending pms to nearly 130 ppl ? this update will decide whether i will continue this or no... and mind it guys i am freaking serious this time.. if i dont get LONG comments n 30 likes i will STOP this FF right there n i will not even complete the story..if u all do not want this to happen then please comment.. just to tell u guys i have my practicals from tomorrow and here i am giving u all an update..if i still do not get a good response i will stop updating EVERY STORY OF MINE AND WILL DISCONTINUE ALL 3 FFS... so now the fate of my story is just in your hands...

PART 13

Viren comes back..

"Virenji , where were you ? u told me you have office today and so i thought u might be there but dadaji told me that there is no office.. why did u lie and where were you?" asked a worried yet happy Jeevika

"Viren bete , where were you ?" asked Vanshika

"i'm sorry Maa, but i had just gone out to take a walk but i just took more time than required..sorry for that!! "answered Viren

"Viren next time make sure , you don't do this again..." said dadaji

"yes Dadaji , im sorry " said Viren

"Chalo bhai , now you go and freshen up and then come and have food" said Virat

"No virat , i'm not hungry you continue.." saying this Viren walks away

Jeevika who was watching all this silently found it weird to see Viren acting like that..she decided to go and talk to viren as she knew this incident was somewhere related to her...

"i'll just be back..."said Jeevika

---------in the room----------------

Jeevika's POV

I saw him sitting on the bed lost in thoughts.. i decided to go and talk to him..

"virenji?" i said

"Jeevika , i don't want to talk to anyone now , please leave me alone " replied Viren

"NO virenji , but i want to talk to u "

"what is it?" said an angry Viren

i was shocked to see this side of his but i calmed down and tried to ask him..

"did u actually go for a walk in the morning without telling me ?"

"of course , why do u think i am lying ?"

"i dont believe this?

"so? what can i do?"

I was shocked hearing such a reply from him.. what has happened to him ? i wondered

"Virenji , what is wrong with you ? why are u talking to me like this?"

"I told u i do not want to talk to anyone yet u forced me too."

"but , its not only today , its from last night..why r u so pissed at me? what have i done ?"

"Are u actually asking me that ? i mean really now?"

"Virenji , please tell me , i have no clue about what u are talking..do u want me to leave the job? if yes i will do that now!!"

"look jeevika... u wanna know what happened last night na? then listen.. U told me you are going to dr Manan's house for an important meeting right ?"

"yes and i was there only..whats the matter in that ?"

"but did u tell me that you are going to wear a short one piece that was gifted to u by Him?"

"no... i thought u wouldn't allow me to..i'm sorry for that,,but is that the only reason?"

"i wouldnt allow u? i was the on who supported you throughout the journey.. it was me who allowed you to go and work.. i encouraged u to wear western clothes and u are telling me that i wouldn't allow you ? fine , i do not have any problem if you wear a one piece but what disgusts me that u wore the one which HE gifted u..n oh u dint even bother to tell me that he has gifted u one!"

"i'm sorry Virenji , i dint mean to hurt u"

"you dint mean to but u have..in fact , this is nothing, what i saw there was heartbreaking. how could u do that to me ?"

"what did i do? and when did u come there ?"

"oh yes of course u wouldn't remember right because u were so engrossed in doing that.."

"doing what?"

"YOU ,...YOU DITCHED ME , MISS JEEVIKA CHAUDHARY "

"What are talking about ?"

"i cant even tell you what u did.."

"Virenji please tell me...

"you...you.."

"virenji, what did i do?"

"u...SLEPT WITH DR MANAN..😭😭 "

I was completely shattered after hearing that..i..i slept with dr manan ? how can that be possible ?

--------------Viren's POV -------------------
Did i just tell her that ? but i still cannot believe it that she has done that..

"wh...what did u just tell me ? i slept with Dr MANAN? how can u even think that?"

"i was shocked to see u in such a compromising position Jeevika..."

"this is so not true!! nothing of that sort happened"

"how will you remember ? u were so engrossed...yuck!! i did not expect this from you Jeevika.. i loved u dammit.. and this is what u gave me in return ? why ?"

"Virenji , trust me ... it must be some misunderstanding..."

"i saw it clearly .."

"this cannot be true.."

"how many times do i have to tell u the same thing again and again ? enough Jeevika...i have made up my mind... i need a DIVORCE..."

did i just say that ? oh shit...what did i do ?

"Virenji...? divorce? what r u saying ? do u know what does that mean ? i dont believe it that u dont trust me anymore...i'm telling u that i haven't done anything ..why r u not ready to listen? "

"thats it.i dont want to hear anything else... i need a divorce and that is final..i cannot live with a girl who loves someone else.."

"Virenji..i do not love someone else...i love u."

"no u dont...if u ever loved me you wouldn't ditch me."

"okay , if u want a divorce im ready for it..just get the papers and ill sign them..but tell me one thing what will u tell everyone at home ?"

"u dont worry about that..."
saying this i left the room leaving jeeeviKA Alone..

i still cannot believe it i asked her for a divorce ? viren do something..what will u tell everyone now ?

_______authors pov ___________________

Jeevika was in her room crying and thinking about what just happened..
"How can virenji even think of me ditching him? i love him , even he knows that... and divorce? what made him think like that ? no jeevika i cannot let this happen..i know there is some misunderstanding..i have to find out.. i have to do this before we get divorced..i cannot let Virika become Viren and Jeevika once again..."

Dr manan gets a call. he smirks reading the name

"yes Jeevika tell me ?"

"actually dr manan, i wont be able to come to work today.. "

"why Jeevika is everything all right ?"

"umm..yes just some problems at home..is it okay?"

"yes it is okayl... u take care 😊 "

"thank u "

"looks like my plan has started working...jeevika u will be mine in another few days...bye bye Viren..." said Dr Manan to himself after the phone is kept

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Thats it guys.. i hope ui all like that.. remember to comment and like...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
whooo u updated 😊
i was waiting for this since so long 😊
i was happy to see ur PM of an update😊
thank u for this wonderful update
plz dont dare to say u will not continue this story😡
its a very great concept
i m loving it😊
just loved how you wrote and described
i was totally shocked to hear the word DIVORCE like really thats the option left btw them
i will kill dr manan if it would be in my hands
poor jeevika feels sorry for her she is only one who is bearing the most pain though she hadnt done anything
but viren is right at his place
hope this dr manan dont create any further mess in their life
thank u for the wonderful update and plz do update soon
or i will haunt u in dreams😆 plz plz plz my behna just update so soon
i m waiting
update ASAP

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg... whirlpool of misunderstandings.. kya karoon..
Stupid Manan someone throw him out of d planet yaa.. disgusting guy :P

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Poor virika...
I don't wanna see them as viren and jeevika..i wanna see them as virika...
I wish i can slap manan...:@
but now jeevs know the truth and hopfully she'll clear all those missunderstaning between them...
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful and long updatee.. awesummm.. i lovedd itt...
such a baddd thing, tht manan played a dirty game on jeevika.. poor thingg!!!

i hope viren gets to knw the true color of manan...

jaldi update kijiyee... eager to read more...

n plss dont discontinue ur writing... u write fabulous... i want to read m ore n more virika stories of ur's.. plsss
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Posted: 11 years ago
so hate dr manan
superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a
Mindblowing
Cute
Missunderstanding
Aww poor jeevika
Bad dr. Manan i hate u
Poor viren
Divorce nahiii
Out standing
Superbbb
Sach mein behna ur update has become my favorite m really really sorry that i have miss reading ur stories and pms... I think i was an idiot i sriously love ur story i hope viren understands jeevika and the divorce does not happen but romance come in to virika... M already missing virika pleaseee behna dont seprate virikaaa pleaseee i beg uu... I know i being stupid but its my feeling please dont let virika divorce i hope viren n jeevika finds out the right truth... Cant wait and to read more... Excited for next update
Jaldi se dr manan bar nikal jai... ... I hate uuu jeevika cant be urs manan... Jeevika is only's viren...
Continueee soon and thanks for the updatesss...

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