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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

anjali is so irritating...i actually felt like pulling her hair one by one...

i wish she disappears somewhere in the future updates or i'll surely break her head...well...mmm...can u make khushi do it for me????? i don't want to harm my laptop😉

can't wait for the next update...arnav and khushi in the garden...alone!!!😳

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Wow...awesome update...arnav could not help staring at khushi, and poor girl was so unnerved that she could not even eat properly, but I am liking the way their relationship is progressing...seriously I did not like anjalis comments...we all are Indians...and i find this colonial attitude very irritating...

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sahada

@sahada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

=|Cliffhanger?

Very interesting update K!!!

BUT!! How could you stop there ))= I want more!!!

Hope you update sooon!

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Hey Congrats on the new thread!! Nice update.. Still no smoochy smoochy stuff.. okay okay will wait patiently..

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

congrats on the new threadamazing update

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..Zenny..

@..Zenny..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Hiii kalyani..sorry to say but i am not so saisfied with this update😒...sincerely i would have preferred more concentration on Anjali and Khushi's interection, rather than Anjali and Sami.

If i am not wrong sami's character is dedicated to one of ur friend...thats really nice...but u r creating it too positive and perfect...and that makes it kind of an outsider for me and not soo real😳 and in some updt with sami you overshadow other charcaters..like farhan, from the jolly outspoken character he is, he became always a silent viewer when there is sami!!! One more thing..ur ideas are beautiful and correct but i would have prefered those to be show by the story's important characters that we "know" since updt 1!

Sorry but i am a really big fan of your writing so thats y i don't want u to lose the focus...

Keep it up!!!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Congrats on the new thread

Great update Arnav is real great keeping his emotions

Anjali really is embarrassing herself

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star303

@star303

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

I love sami more after this update. Someone needs to really tell anjali to just shut up. When she talks rubbish she just cannot stop. But I am really happy that sami and khushi shut her up in the end. Now I am waiting to read what happens in the garden. And Ohhh where was OP or should I call him OK????

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

another nice update ..

wonder whats wrong with anjali...

i am eagerly waiting for to see when mahi gets to know about khushi how will the dynamics change between all...and definitely excited to know what happens to khushi after last update...

my only drawback now it seems i have read all of it consecutively and cant wait to read more much more than one update i hope to follow your stories from now on when possible...

Edited by mysticmanthri - 12 years ago

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

what the hell is wrong with anjali...she is a college professor and she shouldnt have this kind of thinking as a person...i am from madras too...
shyam what will he tell...he is just happy that his daughter is getting mothers love and wants the best for his child...
it is sooo embarassing when someone finds out that you have been kissed and points that out too...
poor khushi arnav was staring at her and she couldnt handle it...lol hormones...
ahem ab garden me kya hoga??
loved the update
continue soon

Edited by kamalapushpa - 12 years ago