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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!
Dat rahul is aggrrhh!!
Hate him!!

Love!😲
Itni jaldi..!!😛
But I m happy dat dey both r comfortable wid each other!
Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...😊
luvd rey's concern nd caring nature 4 kriya...
nd kriya tld rey de truth y she cme 4 suicide nd vice versa...
rey said i luv u to kriya luvd it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum
awesum
awesum

none other words 4 this..
seriously loved it ...

dat stupid b****** ...rahul
😡😡

n rey ko dhoka ...
will kill dat girl😡

n omg omg omg!!!..
rey said .. he loves her...
wrong tym pe end kr dia😡
cant wait to read ...
eagerly waiting..
plzz plzzz update soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ss.. just readed all the three parts in one go...
loved it... kriyaansh are made for each other...
eagerly waiting for last part...
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rahul is a jerk, and so is his father.
Am so glad Kria mustered trust on Rey, but post the confession, I dun no what will happen! :(

Continue soon! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :-) feel sorry for Kriya but I loved the way Reyaansh looked after her
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...
Loved d way rey has confessed..
Waitin..fr nxt part..
Plz soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! I loved this chapter..👏

I am smitten with this love..awww so emotional yet adorable..😃
poor kriya..😔..lost her parents..at least ab rey to uske sath.

rey super duper sweet..😛..luv his concern for kriya.

i also could feel the bond they had..enjoyed it immensely

thanks for sharing
with us!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you soo much friends for the wonderful comments...
I loved them all..
So here comes the last part of the SS.

Part 4


Rey:I think am in love with you..

Kria was startled hearing what he was actually saying ,she couldnt belive this guy till now he was saying about his past love and now he is proposing HER?!What's wrong with him?She was just watching him with wide eyes and open mouth..
After seeing her expression he understood what's going on in her mind and her pile of questions.He signed and moved close to her slightly closing her open mouth by placing his finger on her chin..

Rey:Listen ,i know this may be a big blow to you but the truth is..

Kria:What truth...

She was interrupted by him,He closed her mouth with his palm.They shared an eye-lock,She was the one to come out from the intense eye-lock shared by both of them for more than 5 minutes.

Rey:Let me explain na please.

He pleaded with his eyes.She was drowned in his cute expressions,she couldn't deny his cute pleadings..She agreed to him and stayed quite and looking at him for him to explain..He slowly took his hand back,moved close to her and continued..

Rey:Actually I was not a material for Love.

She say him confused.Her eyes convey alot of questions for his one statement

Rey:Yes i used to be a mile away from Love and whatever related to Love..My only concentration was my Bussiness nothing else more,I have everything what i wanted but fate played a game with my life I lost my parents in an accident and i was not able to take the news ,I was depressed and emotionally broke down,I needed someone whom i can hug and let out all my sadness.

A lone tear escaped his eye.Only he know how much he went through.

Kria felt sad for him and hugged him sidewards and rubbed her palm on his back comforting him "Am sorry.." She said .


Rey: Dont be,,,.Then my friend introduced me to a girl,she was quite ,reserved nice but then i couldnt know what was going on in her mind..I came close to her she made me emotionally weak and after i truely belived her i came to know that my friend and she was playing all this act just to get my property ,I was shattered once again and that led to my suicide ...When i met you i felt some relation between us.I dont know why i felt something for you ,may be you can call it as love at first sight? But i ignored the thought.When you took hold of my hand before the jump i shivered under your touch ,i wanted to hold your hand forever i dont know why i felt like that..when we fell in the water and i looked at you i dint want to leave you for even one minute.I felt something connected to you ,I just wanted to live for you..So atleast in death i wanted to be with you and make you mine so i slipped the ring onto your finger ,which i brought for the girl whom i wanted to marry..

He took hold of her hand and squeezed it making her feel secure.

Rey:Am sorry if hurt you in anyway..I just let out my feelings...and i promise that i will always be with you till my last breath..

The last line he said looking deep into her eyes..All the while she was just looking at him to see whether he was just lying to her but no his eyes expressed more love than which he said in words.The last line of his made her belive him and say yes to him without any second thoughts..She felt that she was falling for him..But she brushed away her thoughts,pulled her hand back from his grip and ran away from there..He just signed seeing her going away.

"I know you love me too Kria" He said lening on the deck and looking at the sky and rhinking all the moments they shared.

What is wrong with me?How can i fall for an other guy?He is just a stranger...and falling in love with starnger is crazy!!Love??What am i saying??GOD!!!am going NUTS!!!But..Am i falling for this guy,even i shivered and felt something when i took hold of his hand for the first time.I feel secure and safe when am near him..but..

Kria was thinking deeply looking herself in their room.She saw the ring ,caressed it and blushed slightly.
...

Both were called for dinner,when they reached the dinner spot only two chairs were left empty ,both sat beside each other and one of the crew member started asking them questions..

(CM-Crew Member)

CM 1-So Reeyansh do you love her?

Rey:More than my life..

He said looking at her,she looked at him and was feeling his immense love..She just gave a slight smile looking at him to which he also smiled..

CM 2-So madam do you love him?

Kria was startled by the question and started chocking ...Rey immediately gave her glass of water started rubbing his hand over back to comfort her..She drank the water and became normal after sometime.she was pleased seeing his concern for her.

Rey:Are you ok?

he asked looking at her..She nodded giving a slight smile.He felt relived and sat back.

CM 2-Ofcourse she love him we can know seeing her blush.

The man said pointing at her who is blushing now.After realising that all pair of eyes were on her she just gave a smile in embaressment.Rey chuckled seeing her expressions.
After completing their dinner all went to their respective rooms.

rey closed the door behind ,looked at her and moved towards her.She excused herself and went to washroom.

Kria:what should i do?If i go out he will surely ask me somehing or the other!!

She whinned roaming inside the washroom.Atlast she prepared herelf and went out and found him sleeping.She signed in relief and slept on the other side of the bed.She was not able to sleep ,when she turned around she found him sleeping cutely with a pout .She smiled and caressed his cheek slightly to which he moved in his sleep..She again brushed his hair and smiled seeing the way he was smiling.She fell for him finally!!she moved close and placed a soft kiss on his forehead and was moving close to his lips this was enough to wake him up,she was shocked seeeing him awake.She immediately tried to turn around but he was more reflexive ,he pulled her towards him and took hold of her waist tightly so that she couldnt escape.She was soo close to him that his hot breath was touching her lips..She was shivering under his breath.
"Let me complete what you have started" before she could understand what he actually said,he placed his lips over her and sucked them.She first struggled to get out from his hold but soon joined the kiss ,his hands pulled her more close to him and her hands were roaming in his hair.They were lost in the passion..After a long kiss they broke apart..they were feeling awkward to face each other now.but reeyansh pecked her lips and said "I Love you"..She just smiled at his actions.

Rey:So do you love me?

Kria:Reeyansh I..

Rey:Please dont say no..

Kria:I need time..

She said looking at him.

Rey:How much time?

His lips were touching her while he was speaking it is becoming difficult for her to answer him.

Kria:I dont know.I just know that i need time..

Rey:I just wanted to say something,after saying that whatever your decision will be i will respect it.can i say it?

She nodded in agreement.He immediately placed his lips on her kissed her to the earnest.His kiss conveyed all his love...he dont need any words...or speeches ...or dialogues to explain his love only one kiss of him is enough..he kissed her softly by nibbling her lower lip and bitting it slightly to which she opened her mouth sluightly and he made his way into her mouth and their tongues synced and danced to the rythm..His kiss made her feel secure and comfortable..She closed her eyes taking in the pleasure which both were longing.He looked at her and slightly broke the kiss and hugged her without speaking anything more.She also slept in his arms peacefully with a smile crept over her lips."I Love you" he said signing and pulling her more.
...

Its morning kria woke up and smiled thinking about the last night incident and she was sure that her answer will be "YES"..But she dint say it as she wanted to feel the first stage of love and his pampering more and more.

All the day she was ignoring him wantedly and he was dying to know her answer.atlast he got hold of her and pulled to one corner so that nobody can see them.

Rey:hey give my ring back

She was shocked listening to his words.

Kria:Why?its mine!

Rey:No that was for my wife!

He said smirking ,she understood what he was saying so she moved close to him by caressing his cheeks .He was stunned by her actions and stood straight as what was on the way.She pulled him close by his collar and moved close to his ear ,he closed his eyes expecting a kiss from her but she whispered "This is gifted to me by my husband and i have all rights over this and him too" She chuckled and ran away leaving him bewildered.After coming to his senses he smiled and went in search for her.

she was helping the CM in hanging the decorations ,He was just admiring her and she was blushing and escaping from his trap.When she was busy hanging some decoration on the wall ,he hugged her waist from back and placed his chin on her shoulder and started placing wet kisses along her jawline,She pushed him a littlle

Kria:Rey what are you doing?

Rey:I too have full rights on my Wife! and now do not try to disturb me!

he said resuming his work.but she again interrupted him

Kria:rey someone will see...

Rey:Let them i dont care..what i care is you..

he said kissing her shoulders,she blushed at his words and closed her eyes tight taking in the pleasure.

Kria's Dress:
http://www.putinstyle.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/10/Bridal-Cocktail-Dresses.jpg

Rey's Dress:
http://i.imgur.com/2YA7w.jpg

The party started and rey was searching for her but she was found no where.when he was busy speaking with the some men ,he saw everyone looking at something when he turned back he saw her ascending ,she looked like ANGEL!
he was just gwaking at her and he also felt jealous that everyone where looking at her,he glared them all and by seeing him everyone looked in other direction.He was admiring her beauty,he just wanted to pull her into a long passionate kiss..He smirked as something cooked in his mind.He slipped away from there,she was searching for him but he was no where found.
Soon the lights got off and spot light fell on her,she was shocked first but listenng to the music she blushed.

Please play this song:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-Gmhk90JOE[/YOUTUBE]

Music:

He placed his hands on her wait and she placed her hands on his shoulders.they swayed along the music sharing an intense eyelock.

He suddenly disappeared and searched here and there ,suddenly lights were on


Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon


He played the piano by meaning every word he was saying ..
She blushed seeing listening to his words..

Kisi zaban mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
Ki jeenmein tum ho kya tumhein bata sakun


He got up from his place and came near hear kneeling infront of her forwarding his hand .she placed her hand on his

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen
kaynaat mein Nai hai kahin


he sang twirling her ..

Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

she stopped twirling and ran away from his grip when he was about to kiss her.

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon.

he sang brushing his hair and blushing.

Music:

She was speaking with some men and stealing glances of him ,suddenly she found him no where so she was searching for him.he came behind her and tapped on her right when she turned to her right he moved to left same way he did on the left ,she was irritated and turned and turned back and he forwarded his hand giving his million dollar smile ,she smiled at his childishness and placed her hand on his.he led her to the center .

Shokhiyon mein dooobi yeh aadayein
Chehre se jhalki hui hain

he sang circling her...she was just blushing...

Zulf ki ghani ghani ghatayein
Shaan se dhalki hui hain

he sang caressing her silky long hair..and caressed her cheeks..

Lehrata aachal hai jaise badal
Bhaahon mein bhari hai jaise chandani
Roop ki chandani


he went near the men and placed his hands on their shoulders and sang as if in dreamland..all of them nodded their heads in agreement..

Tum hue meherbaan
To hai yeh dastan
hoo Tum hue meherbaan
To hai yeh dastan
Abb tumhara mera ek hai karwaan
Tum jahan mein wahan


she sang looking at him and blush crept all over her cheeks..he was smiling wide listening to her and she was singing all these pointing him..

Main agar kahoon
Humsafar meri
Apsara ho tum ya koi pari
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

he was overwhelmed by his words so he danced along with the crew members and placed his hands near his chin as if admiring her ..

Music:

all the men lifted him and brought him and placed him near her.He pulled her close and hugged her as if protecting her from the evil..

All the Men around started clapping seeing the couple infront of them..both were brought back by the sound of applause and started smiling.kria burried her face in his chest in embaressment and he wrapped his hands around her and hugged her smiling all the way..

He pulled back and kneeled infront of her,she was confused as if what was going on.

Rey:Will you be with me forever?

She understood that he was proposing her for marriage,without any delay she said "Yes"

All were applauding and they were overwhelmed,Some where even having happy tears😆

They hugged and enjoyed the party...Rey was very happy to get her answer finally.

After a long party they were back to their room.

Rey:So Miss wifey!

he said closing the door behing and pinning her and blocking her way.

Kria:Still we are not married..

she smirked.

Rey:We are..

He said showing her the ring on her finger.

Rey:so...

he leaned close to her.

Kria:so I love you!

She said pulling him to a wild Kiss!

He was shocked seeing her wild side..She bit his lower lip to which he whinned in pain..she immediately kissed the place where she bit softly..he smiled seeing her concern..She nibbled over his upper lip...she was taking the charge..he lifted her and placed him on the bed with him on top of her.she wrapped her hands around his neck and pulled him more into her..she slowly made her way into his mouth and passed her hands over his broad chest and started ripping his shirt.when she was struggling with the last button.he got irritated pulled back and ripped his shirt and threw it somewer.now she was on top of him and was kissing all over his chest making him moan her name ..he took hold of the zipper and pulled it down in swift movement.she was shocked by his sudden movement and saw him startled.he moved close to her and whispered "trust me" to which she smiled and lay beside her.Now he took charge over her and ripped everything which was irritating him..both made love all night..exploring each other and feeling each other enjoying the pleasure...their pleasure was at peaks...He kissed her all over and she just couldnt stop herself from moaning his name ..they were soft...wild...passionate but never left each other.After a long love making session they both laid beside each other breathing hard ,they saw each other and burst into laughter..He was mesmerised by her laugh and was just admiring her..Seeing him gwaking at her she blushed a little.he pulled her close and gave her a soft kiss.

Rey:I Love You

Kria:I Love you too My dear hubby

she said smirking..

So they lead a happy married life and was blessed with a son named Kriyaansh and a daughter named Arsha.

But their romance never stopped though they were old...

So here ends the SS

I wanted to give a perfect ending but couldnt as am hell busy..Am sorry

Please do hit like button

criticism welcomed

do give reviews

TTYL!

Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomee awesomee awesomee

always love your work...

And even this was amazing...fabulous part dear

a perfect ending...loved it totally
it had everything
a perfect story, emotions, dance, naughtiness, possesivenes romance just everything

the song was perfect...descrition was perfect..

Rey's story, the dinner, party, their Kiss
i loved everything
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago

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