|Suicide|-KR SS-discontinued

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Friends! am back with a new ss!
I know i have a lot of pending works but kya karoon new new ideas athe hi rahenge na?😆
Actually ye ss meri dhimaag mei kaafi time se chaling.thought of posting it!
I will continue all the pending works after 19th march !pakka!its my promise!
Its a mini SS of 3-4 parts thats it!!

Part-1

"So Sucide attempt ha?" the girl asked sipping her Beer.

"Yes" the man replied lost deeply in his thoughts

"Reason?" She asked looking at him.

"Wait !what?How do you know that am attempting sucide?" the man asked totally confused .

"Oh come on ! you are standing at the edge of the bridge that too in this time at night and your eyes filled with tears.Do you think am dumb?" She said moving forward and looking straight into his eyes.

"Woah Mam! cool down! i was just asking.." He tried to cool down her.

"So Reason?" She asked with anxiety all ver her face.

"Love" he signed looking at the sky.

"Is that what you call a problem?" She said taking an other sip

"According to me?yes!" He replied

"Can you elaborate?"

"I Loved her.She betrayed me.Am all alone now"

"I dont find anything serious in this ..It happens in almost every Love story if am not wrong?"

"No it doesnt!"

"Ok chill"

"So what are you here for?"

"Sucide!" She replied casually

"What?!" He exclaimed

"Yes,you heard it right"

"May i know the reason?"

"Nah!" She tossed the bottle into the water.

"So ready ?" She smirked.

"Ye...yeah Kinda" He replied a bit tense.

"So lets do it then?" She took hold of his hand and pulled him they fell into the water.

As soon as they fell they were going down.still she was holding his hand and he was looking at her.Both shared an eyelock.
They slowly closed their eyes and fell unconscious ..

After few hours

The girl slowly started opend her eyes and was shocked to see him on her side and some sailors looking at them amused.they were lying on the boat.

"Where are we?whats happening?" she asked looking at the people

"We saved you people from drowning!" The Men around said with proud smiles.

"Who the F**** are you people to save us?" She scowled.

"Hello Madam !have some respect we saved your lives!" They replied

"Respect my foot!" She murmed

"We are sorry gentlemen! thank you soo much for saving me and my wife" The man who was unconscious till now woke up due to the screams.

As soon as he addressed her "Wife" she glared him.

"So you people couple?" other Men asked.

"Yes ofcourse,can't you see the ring?" He said pulling out her hand and showing the ring on her finger.

"Where did this ring come from?" she murmed .

"Then why are you people in the water?" The men questioned.

"Just came for a swim,you know i cant reject any of her wish" the man replied gently.

"Oh nice .so there will be no problem for you people to live 5 days in this boat." The men replied

"5 days???!!!!" Both were shocked.

"Yes,actually this boat will take 5 days to reach its destination.So you people can live here.We have an extra room .You can be comfortable" by saying this the men left for their works.

"its gonna be a long time" Both said in unison.

They both looked at each other and signed at their fate .

"hi,Am Reeyansh"

"Hi am Kria"

"So our sucide??" She asked him sounding low.

"May be some other time darling" He pecked her lips and left the place,leaving her shocked!


Here ends my first update

Jhoothas,chappals,tomatos,eggs everything welcomed!

I know the first part is a short one ,but the next part will be a long one for sure!

Sorry for typo-errors dint re-check..Was in a hurry!

Please do hit like button

Do give reviews

TTYL!


Part 1:Scroll Up

Part 2:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3439288&TPN=8

Part 3:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3439288&TPN=15

Part 4:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3439288&TPN=21

Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 12 years ago

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Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
BTS... de...

me waiting for BTS...

BTS kar...
suicide leke aa gayi tu... 😆
haan so loved the update...

pehle thot anjaana anjaani ...

lekin fir yeh toh kahaani mein twist...

and he pecked her lips...

yipppeee...

waiting for next
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
super
yeh bilkul anjaana anjaani film ki trha hai 😛
kriya scolding them 4 saving her🤣
rey said they r married couple n kria s his wife..
rey pecked kria😳 n went to their room...
loved it
thnks 4 pm
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
res...

unres...

firstly i thought okay

its like anjana anjaani...

two people suciding...

but marate nhi hai...

but wait ye kya...

ladaka to bda chalu nikala...

ladki ko wife batya...

n kiss...OMG...wowww...

m loving it...

awsm...

update the next part soon...
Edited by ..Roop.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
pls update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

BTS... de...


me waiting for BTS...

BTS kar...
suicide leke aa gayi tu... 😆
haan so loved the update...

pehle thot anjaana anjaani ...

lekin fir yeh toh kahaani mein twist...

and he pecked her lips...

yipppeee...

waiting for next



LOL!!

BTS dhungi par exams ke baadh tere liye especially for you bada wala romance aur masala bara hua update dhungi😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved d update...
it was superb..
like -Vaish- even i thought anjaana anjaani movie on KR...
but u gave a twist..
rey said they r married couple n kria s his wife..
loved it...
rey pecked kria n went to their room... unpredictable he s..
waiting for d next part...

Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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re till morng...😆 DOne sprise😆😆 mein bhiii hu😆😆
Awosm flim😉
new love storystart
love it 😆😆
update soon
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...but starting anjaana-anjaani film ki jaisa lagi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nishi yeh kya tha??i mean kya tha???😆

kria scoldind them fr saving her🤣

aur ring kaha se ha gayi...zaroor rey ne underwater engagement kiya hoga🤣

hhmmm ab kriyaaansh alone☺️

jaldi updte..

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