SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16) - Page 52

Originally posted by: .._sonii_..

Res.. Will read tonight! ..
Only 10 pages late 😆

Phew.. I thought she was going to answer la's call
and get all jealous!!:P glad that didn't happen for.now..


Yaay!! Arnav knows that she has the same symptoms as him..:D
Now will he use this vital information to tease her a lot more or will do something to solve
This dhak dhakingness..:P

She really is a sanak.. not really looking at where she's going with the touching! 😆
Until he tells her.. ahaha.. brill.. oh and her gussa that he didn't do anything Lmao!!

Great !!

P.S woah, beautiful scenery of the picture.. where is that place.. looks soo peaceful
Hope you had a great holiday!!

Giving us such a awesome Teaser and then making us Wait till tomorrow ??
Not Fair Not Fair !!
Update Soon !!!

Originally posted by: indi52

i felt at peace reading this, much as asr felt carrying her in his arms. beautiful update. good to have you back from holiday. it is disorienting not having routine, but the update doesn't reflect it at all. there's a lovely tenderness in this tale that flows easy. and i am so happy, khushi is feeling her sexual desire. lovely scene, where she wants to see what's under the green sweater, black shirt, and loose black pants. just seeing his forearm isn't enough. niiice.

Originally posted by: RainyDays

Giving us such a awesome Teaser and then making us Wait till tomorrow ??
Not Fair Not Fair !!
Update Soon !!!

Originally posted by: SaRunLicious

Hi Farha...!!

I came across this SS on one of the posts where a member suggested ArHi stories that need to be read.

I really loved the title of this SS. And I sat up late in the night yesterday and read all the 13 chapters.

And I'm totally in love with it..

I'm really glad I came across this story..!! 😊

I love your writing style. Especially Devi Maiyya's 'dialogues'. They are just epic!

Every single chapter was romantic..interesting..and left me on the edge, waiting to read more.. plus Devi Maiyya's part added a little bit of humour to it..😃

I loved your version of the Diwali almost kiss. I was practically hyperventilating when I was reading that! 😳

When I came to the end of chapter 13, I was completely at the edge of the bed! Couldn't wait to read the next chapter. Thank God my wait wasn't long and that you updated today! 😊

My take on Chapter 14:

Awesome!! My best part as always was Devi Maiyya's reactions 😆

I was fearing that Khushi would receive La's call..but thankfully she didn't! 😊

ArHi's trance was broken by Buaji !! Why oh why!! 🤔

Anyway, jahan ArHi ho, wahan interruptions toh honge hi 😆

Loved it !! 😊

P.S: Nice to know that you enjoyed your holiday! Loved the snap! 😊

I sent you a buddy request. 😳

Looking forward to future updates!! 😊

Originally posted by: lakraj80

Hey farah, welcome back, I was so desperate for an update that I had dreams of your ff!! How sad can I get! I loved the update especially when khushi said she is not going to die of a toe sprain!!! That was epic man, glad that you had a nice holiday, thnks for the pm and cannot wait for further updates.

Originally posted by: Khuarv

Hi,
Love this SS very much. I like the way you write.
I like the way you express arnav's emotional upheaval
😉 . Dunno when he is going to realize that he loves
khushi . But I love arnav's journey toward's that
realization 😃 . Terrific updates. Eagerly waiting for ur
next update.

Originally posted by: reallyhappy

of lemons n limes..:) bth wil b havin wndrful sleep..:) bt wud Arnav b able 2 sleep? worried 4 Khushi.. n her..smell..n ol.. lol d dust part n rubbin part was cute 4m Khsuhi's end.. he was teasin her.. d ASR was teasin her..!! Khushi hurt herslf n he was cncrnd.. 4 a cel he came 2 Khsuhi's place.. n he paid his tym 2 her.. Arnav has chngd.. phle waala Arnav chupp chaaap Khushi ki baaton ko sunta tha.. bt dis Arnav loves 2 analyse her nw.. loves 2 tease her// loves 2 meet her.. loves 2 b wid her.. n m lovin it..:D lol fashion shw cumin nxt.. she wud b fyn/.ryt? she has 2 b..:) loved it as alw.z.:) thnx.:)

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

thailand and all han, MashAllah may bless you with much more but not at the expense of our stories plzz tht not negotiable :)
cuming back to the update well all i did while reading was sigh with romantic eyes.
well mr. raizada your not knowing "where will this lead too" is not cool, u need to find this out soon and thn act upon it.
lavanya's call, thank god she did not attend.

Originally posted by: awaww

You sneaky so and so. You got me annoyed now. I really want to know why Lavanya was calling so late. Arnav is so sly. Using any excuse to meet Khushi. The scene in the bedroom was so adorable. Really made me miss the show. Too bad Buaji interrupted them. Great update and I can't wait for the next one.