SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16) - Page 51

Originally posted by: msin

Lovely update...

Though Its not safe to have windows ungrilled in India...we don't see it any more in India...but it's great for romance...

I love Thailand one of my fav places for holiday... Was planning to go to krabi next time ..

Lovely pic... Really post card worthy..😊

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Hey

loved the update buh i so wanted khushi to ask arnav why did la called him that late

or mayb u have planned somthing for later like khushi seeing them together or somthing?

loved the update love

Originally posted by: suma.2911

hehehehehe... such a cute one... read the whole thing in one go... this latest update had me in splits... you write in such a pleasant and pleasing manner... But stil convey the emotions bang on!!!

I feel this whole story between then cane be in silence and still have a beautiful relatinship..

also whenever i read about her fragrance this voice in my head sings "Lime n lemony Limca" for some strange reason!!!! That's quite funny...

hahahahha.. nice one!! Looking forward to how things happen between them :)

Originally posted by: jiora

You have a great talent,God bless you

Originally posted by: ramyarn

Devi maiya smirking, Devi ROFLing🤣 , I was literally laughing like a crazy woman while reading this and my colleagues got an impression that finally I lost it.

I thought that U will make Arnav to stay under the couch whole night, but u spared him ..

I was of an impression that smell of Lemon is an unromantic smell , but after reading this SS I guess I am wrong. Out of all the smell why did u choose the smell of lemon ?

Tum teek ho , oh god that dialogue brings goosebumps..

I absolutely loved it..Continue soon yaar..

Originally posted by: Divya1503

finally read all the chapters I missed today

awesome awesome n awesome is all I had to say!!

Originally posted by: faffy

Your story is so zesty, tangy, lemony - absolutely refreshing! makes one feel all tingly and light - you are a wonderful writer!
thank you for writing...

Originally posted by: riti4u

Aww...wat an amazing update...i feel like in a different world with them.. it gives a nice relaxing feel when i read your story..a simple yet so romantic ..both lovers are loosin control over their feelings..i love your witty style ...poor arnav had to crouch under bed..and khushi was goin to...anyways..😆..its a feel good romance..really lookin forward to how you proceed... welcome back dear🤗..you were being missed...Glad to know you had wonderful time..

Originally posted by: Asiyamajeed

Waitng...

Originally posted by: vqwerty

Farah Di🤗By just reading what u write itself i can imagine the whole scene in front of my eyes😳😳Great one again di🤗
First,am happy that she din't pick up la's call😆
"And he instantly knew why he never thought about his phone from then onwards."-This line cracked me up...😆😆
khushi started coughing to shake off the memories,but his "tum teek ho" made her go weak in her knees again😆😆Arnav shld kno...his "tum teek ho" oly makes our breathing hard😆
"Earth calling Arnav" was 🤣🤣
Arnav in khushi's room and devi maiyaan wanted a spice in this situation...So buaji...😆😆Loved that😳
"Or .. may be you would like to continue?"--Arnav teasing khushi☺️☺️
She was breathing him and he already loves her smell😳😳Am loving this😉😉